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Everything posted by weinerdog
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What did Armand mean by seeing the Statue of Liberty?As most of you know the statue came from France maybe they have their own version? I would make sense to not have the original Mona Lisa out in the open.The Director probably knew how knowledgeable Armand was and that's why he decided to show them the original. Colin should have asked the director if he heard of Arrow I wouldn't surprise me if he had
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Chapter 8: Truck beds and Lockdowns
weinerdog commented on Demiurge's story chapter in Chapter 8: Truck beds and Lockdowns
Nice chapter at least the Finn-Alec parts of it.But you're preview for next week has bummed me out. Even before you wrote the word Pain I was thinking about Alec plan to leave after graduating and I thought to myself with these neanderthal parents it's not going to go down like that either Alec will run away or they might send him to a conversion camp or worse whatever it will be it won't be pretty And while I'm on a morose roll I also got a bad feeling that something will happen to Milo.But guess what? I can't wait too read it.- 17 comments
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13 Years Later – An Unexpected Phone Call
weinerdog commented on Altimexis's story chapter in 13 Years Later – An Unexpected Phone Call
Wow a lot of stuff happening in this chapter.First off what ignorant, ignorant parents .Brandon's parents would't let him play sports?While I get their ignorance of transgender issues it has nothing to do with a girl playing sports in fact it's good for them what do they think all girls who play sports are butch?geez. Terrence dad was almost as stupid think his kid could live off the same allowance he had as a kid.WHAT???Thank God J.J. and Henry are there for them.The one thing I'd like to know more about is how the Gonzales family reacted to the kids and J.J.'s parents .Speaking of which it's not surprising at all at what Franklin is doing. I had to laugh at the twins calling J.J. and Henry old I bet that's the first time they ever heard that. This is just a guess on my part but you said Shaun was going to appear in the story again.This situation with Jitendra's kids might be a good place for him to show up just my wishful thinking. -
For what it's worth I have no problem with short chapters it's the quality of the chapter for me and there is definitely no problem in that respect
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Did I miss something?Did they talk about getting married in Europe?Will their folks be there? I could totally see Colin's parent flying over and suprising then I saw on a documentary about the blue light thing but sadly they mentioned underage kids doing that
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As @drpaladin pointed out Seth almost waited too long to call because I got to tell you Michael sounded pretty good. When these two are left alone with their own thoughts it seems to get unnecessarily complicated. BTW you're absolutely right about Wattpad
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To bad you couldn't find a clip of Russel Wilson instead although he just got traded is that why the Seahawks are good again in your story
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I'm worried that the people of Earth today will be making the same mistake the people of New Toledo made. except in out case it's ignoring global warming much to our detriment as it was to their detriment.Also taking the land away from the Gnos sounds a lot like us taking the Indians land away
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OH so that's why you're so good you have no idea what you're going to do either.
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WTH the girls are still getting away with it they are doing something little children know better NOT to do. That trip to Europe sound awesome That picture Armand did of Colin and his Dad Armand gave the detail that they were clothed.Well if it was for their reception room for the office building I would certainly hope so🤔
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I'm surprised the girls are still allowed in the club they must be pretty and the guys must be whipped I guess.They shouldn't need a conference room meeting to deal with that. It would seem to be a no brainer for Armand to paint that village on the wall inside the restaurant.
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So where on the internet can we find the pics of the nude retreat?Kidding😄 I never thought I would read something where a trillion dollars and damn cheap would be in the same paragraph. I know this is not real life but have you had any thoughts of changing or adding anything to future chapters any material that speaks of the war in Ukraine?
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Colin should consider something and that is Ricky's parents might be the reason all that happened.Colin is lot like a previous character of yours Danny from Never Again. If I were Russ I would have no idea what to do
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I was wondering if Armand was going to mention to Colin about GG coming to him in dreams.Does Colin know they are related?Armand didn't say to keep this secret. If this gets out will people think Armand is nuts?
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I wonder if Justin got this way voluntarily or was something put in a drink?Do they pee test in High school sports these days.Maybe it was some kind of scheme. It seemed briefly that West though that the others suspected some hanky panky between he and Neil for being in the bathroom a long time.When hearing the girls was mentioned West seemed to relax.If Neil and West are in the bathroom a long time in the future will guys think something different then?
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I hope while gossiping Jane finds out about what her daughter is doing. I just knew the escargot was going to happen
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While they were rock climbing I heard Loren suggest Jay jump down instead gradually climb down.Sometimes the most simple thing can cause a injury and I have a vision of Jay landing ever so slightly wrong in the future and missing a game I just hear the explanation to the coach "I was rock climbing with a ....friend and.... One question I had in mind for Loren was" are you going to be single forever?"
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This was very interesting and very emotional. Had it been me performing this seeing the image of Mithras with Peter and Manet sitting next to her smiling would be very reassuring.Otherwise I would have been a big time mess for a long time
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It's not just the sense of entitlement that these girls have but jeez HELLO!!!! We're living in a time of Co-vid MORONS!!!! The point Ellen made was excellent.The passage in the Bible about eating shellfish and the fabrics are in the same chapter as a Man laying with another Man.So does that mean everybody who eats a lobster will go to hell?Funny how that part almost never gets mentioned
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At the time Alec was being home schooled for the most part nobody knew him from Adam but now being in HS with hundreds of kids at the same time totally different environment thus the difference in his behavior
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"Was this all Alec’s fault? Finn had everything going for him. He was in all the sports, he had a huge group of friends, and he was universally well-liked. This would surely ruin that, if his friends’ reactions were anything to go by." I thought from the last chapter this might be the basis for Alec not wanting to continue with this and it might still end up that way.But Finn to his credit is saying F them. Finn will be graduating and most likely go out of town for college maybe even a scholarship leaving Alec behind to finish high school that would be tough even for a straight couple.I'm afraid for Alec without Finn being there that the next year will be pure hell for him.We know Alec is going to leave town And I suspect the Alec's parents will be a BIG part of the reason. This might be too much wishful thinking but when Alec leaves town I hope there's a way River can go with him
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Nice move by Colin. Armand might be in a for windfall if he wanted one.I can see all the Ladies trying to contact him for a painting well maybe not Jane
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After all that can't see J.J. staying with Applezon.I have to believe somebody would want to exploit that brilliant mind.I'm very limited in knowledge in this area but I see either politics or starting his own business If I'm way off I'm sure the other readers will let me know. The thing about Applezon contributing to both parties certainly rings true.In 1992 The Dole Pineapple company was President Bush highest contributor at the same time they were Clinton's forth highest contributor
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That is an incredible article and it took a lot of guts to write that and My Only Escape. Your goal for writing that story has been achieved many ,many times over
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Many readers are wondering about Mom's reaction.I wonder if her "charity meetings" which somehow involves being at the club have something to do with it. To expound on what @Philippe said Mom will first call it "porn" then when she finds out who Arrow is it will be "Art"
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