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I get the feeling Patrick C.Worthington is going to be trouble in future chapters.I guess Cam's close ties to the Judge might come in handy.Before you name any of the babies one suggestion.Make sure at least one of them has Grandpa Ron's name otherwise a certain somebody might get ticked off lol.A chapter without the word brudder?AW!!!
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Looks like they picked up a friend in Jeff.Well for me I've come across a new term I Haden't in this context before.The word Buggy was used to what I assume means shopping cart.It sounded British to me or is that a term used in Pennsylvania?I remember growing up a few years in Massachusetts they had words for things nobody else had.
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Valentin has some very good friends.I remember growing up hearing friends make comments like Joaco made when I responded"Hey don't flatter yourself" that usually shut them up.I wonder what the reception would be with Lauti friends in New Haven if he brought Valentin there with him. So far Marian is an awesome character
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So If Im reading this right will they start calling JC JT? I know lame question.Another lame question since men having babies is new territory will all these babies be gay?Jack and Tracy had threesomes in DOS some things never change.When TJ mentioned soundproofing the room I thought of "The cone of Silence" from Get Smart.
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WOW !!! 35 Companies quite a productive last trip he deserves the bonus just for that.Sounds like the timing with Cody couldn't be better
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It almost sounded like a final chapter but then I saw the "In process" After 19 chapters done? What was I thinking????Excellent chapter.
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Used diapers in gym bags and briefcases?Who are the kids and who are the adults?Good chapter.
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I like how this is starting.I imagine there are going to be a lot interesting character visiting this new place.I'm unfamiliar with Pennsylvania you mentioned hunting camps are there going to be wild animals near his place?
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Since this is your creation you can go a lot of ways with this for example will a baby given birth from a man be able to do different things than one born from a women etc. part of me doesn't want to know.One question in this universe I guess Liz isn't an partner in the law firm.
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Ok what kind of hallucinative substance did you take before you wrote this chapter.
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What's Elly short for?I liked all your stories but I'm confident I speak for everyone that your stories are getting better and better.friendly suggestion you think you can write a short epilog for'Andy"?A few of us were surprised that it was over.Thank you for a good story
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I think it's a 'I'm going to wait until more is revealed damn"But it's a 'It has my interest damn'" also. So that's a good damn right?I will say I halfway expected Neo from The Matrix to join the fight.
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This may have been on another site under a different name I'm not sure but if its the same story I only remember it up to this point.It could be what @Comicality likes to do and call it a remix
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He sees an actual black fox? Freaky to be sure.Thing were going good for Owen now this happens.If he's hurt bad does that mean Alex might step into the band?
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Sounds like an awesome trip.About the saying a barrel of rotten apples there are few good ones I prefer one bad apple don't spoil the whole bunch in this case it's three bad apples so in this family it turns out it was 50/50.It must be pointed. out Alex turned out to be a good kid despite his father.Makes me wonder if Paul is really his father
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I went back to the chapter where Pete and family met the kids he said Donnie looked to be 17or 18 years old then when Alex showed up they said he was Donnie's age. So no specific age was given.If Alex is that old then I would have to think Alex would have had the right not to go back to his father if the court ruled with Paul.
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If Paul really wanted Alex he would have shown up at the hearing.You would like to say CPS would not be as incompetent as they were in this chapter but we know that's not true. You think Donnie could work for Pete?
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I guess @CLJobe could explain it but it was mentioned eariler that growing up Paul being the oldest sibling had a tendency to be real bossy and that before the homophobe stuff.I guess it would not be a stretch to say he's an controlling type in his marriage also or maybe the mother is of like mind
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well all you needed to do was read his past comments to figure that out.
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While that is not good news at least it means there won't be vaccine announced in October that the Cheeto-in-chief will then then take credit for a few weeks before the election
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Alex probably has friends where he was at because he's such a good kid yet he was still anxious to leave shows you what it must have been like there.And Paul just like that signs off on it did he ever love him?His parents showed some signs of loving Alex so Paul is basically taking him away from them although his parents don't deserve Alex.The two floors above the restaurant sounds like a great idea Pete is in the right business to finance it
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Everybody here said it all and are spot on.It is also very ignorant whatever problem they have with Pete the kids had nothing to do with.I've grown with a few people who are real jackasses and want to have nothing to do with and I sometimes cross paths with them and If they are with their kids I'm always respectful in case like that.You said Evie might be afraid to be an outcast I think Evie should outcast the parents
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You forgot Paradox and riddle .I must admit it's a poser
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His did really wasn't his dad and Jack got kidnapped so it was wasn't the real Jack.After Bob and CC said they had to change their appearance how does TJ know they are who they say they are?TJ needs to think of something only the real Bob and CC would know and bring it up to them something no one else knows. but first get JC OR did Nicky really find the real JC AGGGGH!!!BTW this story is called TJ journey to recovery so your idea for him to recover from a coma is to put him In another coma?????
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So far the family they met are awesome now let's brace ourselves on how its going to go with the parents and especially Paul.Does he really want his son to leave the house?His son referring to Paul as Hitler to people he just met is telling.I wonder if he's gay
