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  1. weinerdog

    Chapter 46

    I assume Adam can't just fire Arlene I'm sure there's some kind of procedure and she has a contract etc. but at the same time the very idea of working FOR Adam probably appalls her so I guess she'll resign or maybe try to sue .Will his extra duties make it tougher to do what he does now?
  2. weinerdog

    Chapter 15

    I had forgotten that Mrs. Jameson put Micheal's luggage in Ethan's car and also she called the Morgans so how the hell could kidnapping stick?🤔 Some random thoughts at first Micheal and Jonathan were vary of each other but Jonathan asked Micheal if he was going to be OK they have come a long way. That cold water and ice cubes in the tub trick would make me forget my problems temporarily also. Huge step talking to Elsie about what happened in the past but it has to be done Those birds are a crack up😆
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    Chapter 11

    I was just asking a rhetorical question when I asked last chapter if Brian should tell the story I didn't think he would do so in this chapter.If I was hearing this story I would be unbelievably skeptical but two things would convince me that its on the level one is that Trevor's dad is a Soviet defector the old Brian couldn't have known that second is the dramatic way Brian has changed since January I'm sure Mr. B is thinking about that.Has Brian picked up any of the Russian language from the other Davey? That would be another thing he could use. Well we now know why Marcie is what she is if the whole family is in on it.Marcie's Dad threaten to burn down their house? He's a bigger moron than Marcie I thought that was impossible.This does remind of something that happened in history the actor Charlie Chaplin was sued for paternity(google it) and although blood tests proved he wasn't the bio-dad the court still considered him the father this case was credited for changing paternity laws.So Brian's strategy of spreading the slut news will come in handy besides the coach overheard the conversation Brian had with Katie.Like what @drpaladin said I feel so bad for that future child
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    Hunt: 8.3

    Interesting chapter. I was going to ask how James knew that Cody was in trouble but as I was typing this I realized he told James he was at the lake I guess James got worried. Didn't Cody hear about the talk that something was out there?I guess he didn't believe shroom Man can you imagine that
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    Chapter 3

    Well we do know this kind of stuff exists. I'm no expert but what I understand is people into all kinds of kink don't just stop.Would this be considered a disorder?I hesitate to ask that because at one time Gay was considered a disorder so there's a who am I judge issue here.If I'm Rob and I love and care for Artem I guess I would try to stay together because I would be so scared that somebody will go overboard and really hurt him maybe fatally.But it might be a losing battle. Interesting story
  6. weinerdog

    Chapter 45

    The way Arlene was so unprepared maybe she and the board could make use of the test center and take all the time they need before making thier next decision .If Arlene was graded like a student she would have gotten an F
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    Chapter 44

    And another chapter without the board meeting.Kidding😆 My first hope of course is Adam stays and continues with the kids.But he talked about opening his own school Adam might be able to self finance it but if he can't I bet the Ambassador has contacts as do other parents to give him financial backing should it come to that.
  8. weinerdog

    Chapter 10

    Does he tell the story now?
  9. weinerdog

    Chapter 10

    OK I'm sure almost all off you had that thought in the back of your mind and I alluded to it last chapter comment and I'm sure none of you believe that it's Brian's baby.Before I get to the reasons I just can't see Marcie continuing being part of this story for 18 more chapter and have almost everything that has happened up to now be wiped out.Marcie address scheme failed thanks to Mr B. he's been awesome in this timeline and all her friends deserted her so she sounds desperate and this may be a desperate move.I don't think even she would fake being pregnant(Well maybe she would)but we know she has slept around the previous Brian she can tell this to and he would believe it but this Brian will insist on a paternity test.I do know DNA is still a couple years away I think it was 1988 so that test isn't available what I don't know is while there were paternity tests were there pre-natal paternity tests in 1986 or do they have to wait until the child is born.What I would like to see happen is Davey noticing that something is off about Marcie's story and when she got pregnant and then tells Brian about it that would be poetic justice. There is another less likely scenario.Sorry for writing so much but I want to get this out there.The eighty year old Sean that Brian left behind might be able to tell something went wrong by looking at the internet.I know it was said that there wasn't enough power but if anybody could come up with a solution it would be that Sean maybe there was enough power and Sean didn't tell Brian that because he didn't want to go.There is a reason for Todd to be introduced in this story as Sean's cousin could it be if Sean returns he would then calls Todd from LA and asks to get him so he could help out Brian? I know that's out there but this is science fiction right? Thanks for indulging me
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    Hunt: 8.2

    Love to see something happen with James and Cody.Yeah he lives in Oregon but WTH James can fly there.What did the shroom taker see? Was it the Whale?
  11. weinerdog

    Chapter 43

    Ah you're dragging it on I wanted to see the board meeting in this chapter. Threatening Jane with her job how crude I bet Arlene got use to running roughshod over the years.I like the idea of Adam opening his own school but I can't see the board paying him off.But if he does I would love to see ALL 60 students transfer to his school.
  12. weinerdog

    Chapter 2

    You did a great job describing the sex scene other authors who are otherwise very good tend to go on and on and ON.Surprised that Artem was the instigator given his situation at school it makes sense though. I see a possible red flag when you mentioned Artem bruise last chapter I thought it was from playing sports but now he has a cut I hope that's not from his parents and since he says they don't care that he's out this late are they getting drunk? Forgive my ignorance what's the significance of Artem and Ares? I'm thinking name of a movie or greek mythology.I would google it but they point me to the wrong direction many times.
  13. weinerdog

    Chapter 42

    I think they will have room ready toot sweet (a little French there)I bet that was a sight Arlene leaving after seeing the Ambassador. I think she should cancel the meeting.
  14. weinerdog

    Chapter 9

    I don't think I ever seen a more stupid character then Mark Spencer not just for all the stuff he did but how he did it why would you go through Davey's backpack like that out in the open where the coach can see you?And then he keys Brians car where another coach catches him and then he blurts out slashing Davey's tires AY CARUMBA!!!! The author certainly packed a lot of stuff in this chapter Bradon is coming around although it sucked that he followed Brian and Davey for Marcie.The Baseball team are on Brian's side and after Brian told them a little about Davey It looks like they will like him also especially now that it looks like he will help the team since he doesn't have to work anymore.BTW it was great to see Papa start acting more like the Papa of previous timelines. Marcie is losing support Trevor and Brandon bailed on her and their GF's and most of the school seem against her after her bragging about Spencer slashing the tires.That address thing won't work because what Brandon saw could be explained as just visiting relatives Davey is not going to be at the house for awhile I see that problem easily fixable.With the coming civil suit against Marcie's family I think she has one trick up her sleeve that she's going to use and I bet most of you readers are thinking the same I'm thinking.i believe it may have been already mentioned in a previous chapter comments by another reader.
  15. weinerdog

    Chapter 41

    Adam has a few other success stories in addition to Richard's.After pointing this out at the board meeting I would love to see what baloney the board would come up with to counter that.Plus the Ambassador and Henry are behind him
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    Chapter 40

    Everybody is spot on about McMillian.I love the name Knights of the square table. You know a school of that stature with the tuition they charge should be able to install an elevator.I think it's a law in most states. I'm getting WAYYYYY ahead of the story here.But he mentioned Marie maybe somewhere down the line Marie could be hired to help the other Dr. McMillan he sounds like he needs it.Although if she's doing good work at the clinic I hate tp see her leave there
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    Hunt: 8.1

    Any chance James is reading GA?Maybe he'll come across this story.Who said playing Minecraft is a waste of time? Given what was written in the last chapter I have to wonder if these are legit missions or is the one where they set James up?
  18. weinerdog

    Chapter 8

    This time in addition to Davey talking about more crap that he went through Brian also told him some stuff of his own and they spoke of the gay topic again so things are progressing pretty good there. We also got some answers about what will happen with Trevor and Brandon although I thought Brandon would be the first to approach Brian.Just like when in the other do-overs when Davey's influence changed the direction of the other three, in this timeline the previous Brian had been the alpha dog out of the three which is why Trevor and Brandon attitude sucked.When this Brian came and started saying all that stuff about Marcie it took a little while but Trevor and Brandon being influenced by this Brian I think are starting to realize their GF's aren't that much better since they are supporting Marcie.We haven't heard from Brandon yet But I bet he's thinking the same way as Trevor
  19. OK I'm afraid to ask are they unaware about Casper?They didn't already do something to him did they.
  20. I don't get why they seem so threaten by James.It almost sounds like a mutiny like they don't like the Toranga's
  21. weinerdog

    Chapter 39

    The board asked Jane "not to humor" Adam?Geez what a bunch of stuffed shirts and I'm being nice. That test center idea sounds great where does it say that a test absolutely has to taken only during the time of one class?
  22. weinerdog

    Chapter 38

    Give some credit to Mr Anderson some teachers would have reacted to Adam by saying'What's wrong with the way I teach?"Be he welcomed it.It sounds like Adam is not happy with Ms.Walcott.Who is responsible for what books are in the library? Is it the librarian or the board? It will be interesting to see what Adam discovers with James and the kid in the cafeteria(BTW you didn't give him a name)
  23. weinerdog

    Chapter 1

    I was a bus rider as a teenager and into college and then years later I had trouble seeing things on the road and had a few close calls so I decided to get the hell off the road before I killed someone so I'm a bus/trolley rider again.This story isn't that far fetched I once made a friend because we rode the same bus route(no not like in this story)Looking forward to see how this develops
  24. weinerdog

    Chapter 17

    If you didn't know better it seemed like the lawyer was paid off to put on a bad case.As it was it was a fairly light sentence and there is that guy who was in some kind of disguise the only theory I could come up with and it's not a good one is being incarcerated will mean Jayson will take his meds. Enough of that let's be happy for Hunter and Dale.If there is only one chapter left then it sounds like you're going to pack in a lot of stuff looking forward to it
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    Chapter 7

    It definitely sounds like a Marcie move.Now the only reason she would have that done to Davey's car is if she thinks Brian and Davey are getting to be a couple but nothing has happened between then so nothing incriminating was witnessed so did Trevor and Brandon imply something?How could she otherwise think that?There would also have to be some stalking going on like how did they know Davey's car is parked at McD's it's like somebody was doing surveillance. Thankfully Mr. B is coming through and Brian will have more to tell him after he witnessed how Davey lives at Papa's house
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