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Everything posted by weinerdog
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Another excellent story by Rony sorry if that's redundant but it's trueOut of the many things this authors does well the thing he does best is portray the emotion the characters are feeling and this is no exception.All the emotional issues that come with a person being gay are dealt with here should I come out?How will friends and family react?I don't want to be ostracized like that one person is.All of these issues among others are dealt with beautifully.The story also deals with the misconceptions of being a ballet dancers and associating that with being a poof.Your best athletes that have the best combination of strength ,agility and skill are you best best dancers and this story it shows how it can be useful in a "Manly" sport like basketball.The closest negative comment I can say about this story is that it isn't quite as good as a few of his other stories, that's like saying this years world champion baseball team isn't as good as last years team because last years team won the World Series in four games while this years team needed seven games to win the series so what they are still the champs.And this is still a great story
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Thank you Rony.And another excellent story to add to the catalog.My favorite parts of the ending Tracy got the overdue respect he deserves .Despite Jeff's annoying flaws I always felt bad for him it's great that he has someone like Murray.So Jack's parents had an intervention with Jimmy's parents I guess jack's mom was invaluable in telling Jimmy's dad about what NOT!!to do.A story about Jimmy and Tracy could be interesting in its own right.Only one small minor gripe why did you name Darren's BF Clayton?For a second I thought he was the A-hole Clayton from a couple of chapters ago.And finally perfect last scene Tracy acknowledging Jack being there with him since the beginning and dancing together only that scene could be called Dancing with a Star.Thank you again
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Very interesting indeed too soon to make any assumptions but I have a feeling Rick shares a problem a very good friend of mine has
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out of meeting the family I'm more curious of the younger brother then the older brother.I see signs in restaurant that say "We reserve the right to refuse service to anyone"would that also apply to hotels.I would have to believe what that desk clerk did was illegal.
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Man the unmitigated gall of that scumbag to try to collect money at a funeral.Kudos to Butch for what he did and to the witnesses for having his back.So glad he's officially part of the family now.
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Before I get to the emotional stuff.It was mentioned Butch is 13 this would be a very small mistake but I don't believe a13yo and a 10yo Bobby can go to the same school unless this is some kind of private school.I'm waiting for Pete to nail that bastard to the wall.What Butch is going through is bad enough but he will have the perfect situation being with Pete,Bobby and Jimmy but it makes me think of kids who lose their parents and have no where to go it breaks my heart.
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Forgive my ignorance but what does ICC stand for?Is it the same thing as ICU?
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I'll withhold comment until the next chapter one though I do have is what's the difference between this universe and the other universe? everybody lies their ass off in both of them
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Matchmaker Bobby must be very observant to tell Pete to look at Jimmy's eyes next time he talks to him.
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Pete's older brother will be missing out on a great nephew.He should get over it same with his mom to a lesser degree who wouldn't want a grandson like Bobby
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On his worse day Pete is 100 times more of a dad then Bobby's bio-dad could ever be
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Saddest words of a @Ronyx story "Final Chapter".Sounds like Jack found the right guy.And if Jeff thinks Murray is the hottest guy in school I would imagine no way would Jeff stray then.Whatever self esteem problems Jeff might have had being with Murray would definitely take care of that
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I must admit I'm intrigued.And because it's you writing this ..scared lol.It wouldn't be T.J. would it?
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You are trying like hell to make this dimension crazier than the one he came from aren't you? Gee I wonder who Trace was referring to when he said he has his eye on someone else?🙄 I'm going to hazard a guess that Bob and Tristan etc. knew what Seymour was going to do and the gun had blanks in it. So what's this other confession Bob has? I can hardly wait.
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Bobby showed what kind of kid he is when after helping out Father Jenkins he told Pete he wanted to do this again.
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Excellent chapter.Sounds like Pete is staying home because of the weather. Bobby's dad in addition to being evil sounds like he's not that sharp he has to have known somebody would discover Bobby and eventually find out what happened.
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I remember though Tristan is a little kid he remembers how T.J and J.C. loved each other I'm going with Tristan and Damian has a reason for doing it this way . I'm going to get as confusing as you now.I guess everybody thinks T.J. is 18 or 19 at this time but since he lived the other existence is he still really 23 or 24. Is Tristan 5 years old in this universe?It also sound like Bob is aware of both universes.I'm going to guess BHO exists under a different name.Now for the most crucial question can Tristan and Damian go back to the 2016 election and.....I'll stop there.
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I like what is happening the one possible problem I see is while going through the process they come across some idiot judge or official that would object to Pete being single and gay.It does still happen sadly.
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Just discovered this story today and read everything I'm loving it.I know very little about Argentine culture but I always figured What Lauti and Valen just did in front of friends would be even a bigger deal then it is in the U.S. I guess I was mistaken.
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I have these neighbor that live close to me they have a fenced in yard and I always see two basset hound dogs out in front.We live a few houses down from a middle school with a big grassy area in front.One daI witnessed a car stopping out in front of the school and they left an full grown adult basset hound out and drove off.It was obvious to me that they did that thinking the family with the other basset hounds would take it but if they didn't oh well not their problem.The family did take the dog long story which I won't tell here.My long winded point is it ticked me off to see that(using a polite term here).The very idea someone would do the same thing to a kid makes my blood boil.I would have no mercy for someone like that
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Andy has a dog classic.
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I don't know the law but after he adopts Andy are his parents off the hook for the $700? Hey I love Andy but anchovies on pizza?Sorry couldn't hang with him during those times.
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You say that as if @AquariusGuy wouldn't do something like that
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I think I understand the phone conversation Scott pretended that he was calling to speak to Andy .Why didn't he just come out and say Andy was at his place?I guess there was some kind of mistrust on Scott's part along when it came to Andy's parents.
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Three cheers for Lyle and Jimmy for kicking that POS Clayton's ass.I wonder if Clayton would be stupid enough to try anything again.
