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You are trying like hell to make this dimension crazier than the one he came from aren't you? Gee I wonder who Trace was referring to when he said he has his eye on someone else?🙄 I'm going to hazard a guess that Bob and Tristan etc. knew what Seymour was going to do and the gun had blanks in it. So what's this other confession Bob has? I can hardly wait.
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Bobby showed what kind of kid he is when after helping out Father Jenkins he told Pete he wanted to do this again.
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Excellent chapter.Sounds like Pete is staying home because of the weather. Bobby's dad in addition to being evil sounds like he's not that sharp he has to have known somebody would discover Bobby and eventually find out what happened.
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I remember though Tristan is a little kid he remembers how T.J and J.C. loved each other I'm going with Tristan and Damian has a reason for doing it this way . I'm going to get as confusing as you now.I guess everybody thinks T.J. is 18 or 19 at this time but since he lived the other existence is he still really 23 or 24. Is Tristan 5 years old in this universe?It also sound like Bob is aware of both universes.I'm going to guess BHO exists under a different name.Now for the most crucial question can Tristan and Damian go back to the 2016 election and.....I'll stop there.
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I like what is happening the one possible problem I see is while going through the process they come across some idiot judge or official that would object to Pete being single and gay.It does still happen sadly.
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Just discovered this story today and read everything I'm loving it.I know very little about Argentine culture but I always figured What Lauti and Valen just did in front of friends would be even a bigger deal then it is in the U.S. I guess I was mistaken.
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I have these neighbor that live close to me they have a fenced in yard and I always see two basset hound dogs out in front.We live a few houses down from a middle school with a big grassy area in front.One daI witnessed a car stopping out in front of the school and they left an full grown adult basset hound out and drove off.It was obvious to me that they did that thinking the family with the other basset hounds would take it but if they didn't oh well not their problem.The family did take the dog long story which I won't tell here.My long winded point is it ticked me off to see that(using a polite term here).The very idea someone would do the same thing to a kid makes my blood boil.I would have no mercy for someone like that
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Andy has a dog classic.
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I don't know the law but after he adopts Andy are his parents off the hook for the $700? Hey I love Andy but anchovies on pizza?Sorry couldn't hang with him during those times.
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You say that as if @AquariusGuy wouldn't do something like that
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I think I understand the phone conversation Scott pretended that he was calling to speak to Andy .Why didn't he just come out and say Andy was at his place?I guess there was some kind of mistrust on Scott's part along when it came to Andy's parents.
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Three cheers for Lyle and Jimmy for kicking that POS Clayton's ass.I wonder if Clayton would be stupid enough to try anything again.
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That was my first thought also but it would suggest a familiarity they have with TJ as far we know doesn't exist .
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I was almost going to comment alternative universe last chapter but decided I should wait after just one chapter.Since you saved me from sounding crazy about that I'll elaborate on a possible theory.Tristan from the other universe knew TJ wasn't safe and was going to get killed there so he arranged for TJ to go to this universe(wait it gets better)The TJ in this universe was supposed to die so this TJ took over the body something similar to this was in another GA story.Okay thanks for indulging me you don't know my address so I know you can't send the men with the white jackets to get me.
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I suspect the reason why this story didn't have more readers is because the first 5 chapters or so describes some of most horrifying abuse imaginable but as the author points out it does happen that way and worse.But if you can stay with the story after that it is well worth it for it is a very touching story and you feel good for the main character.I have read a number of other great stories that had to been influenced by this story for this story was written before those.We may not have a chance to see those stories without this one being written first.If you come across this review and are unfamiliar with this author I urge you to read this and this author's others stories
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He was sad about Billy and Mario moving out but it was only a few houses down and they work in the Cafe so it's all good.Clark and Larry could sleep over sometimes so they would be closer to work .Very good story
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Great start.Yeah I figured some things would be just like his dream and I'm sure we'll hear an explanation for that some where down the line and Little Tristan will be part of it.T.J. said a line "Grandpa Ron and Tony didn't die" so just to clarify they are not alive in this story?So if true J.C. won't come across the Ronyx Stories eh.And If I got this right I wonder how Rony feels about you killing him off?One more annoying question T.J. was in a coma for a year so how did dream 5 years worth of stuff in one year?Ignore me I know I'm making no sense
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No Ricky Ricardo says "splainin" .I'ts not me being politically incorrect it's the TV show.
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Usually when you review a story you like to describe it little without saying too much.I really don't think I can do that here.What I can tell you is that it's never a dull moment and really that's all you can ask for
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Seriously you expect us to believe it's going to be that simple????Sebastian's dad has money ,crooked cops or DA etc.This is gay male fiction after all.
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No that was totally different there were no snow globes here
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This is a dated reference but if Pam Ewing can can dream an entire T.V. season then T.J. can be in a coma for two stories.I have mixed feelings but overall I'm looking forward to the next story.Can you tell us if the stuff about T.J. and J.C. knowing each other at 5 years old is still true?Or will we have to wait.when will the next story start? Some might accuse your story of being nutty but not nearly as nutty as this country seems to be today
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Chapter 66 - "Hello, It's Me"
weinerdog commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 66 - "Hello, It's Me"
Well that was an intense hour for me(OK 10 min. in reality)but it seemed like an hour.Good for Randy good for Mom. -
Sounds like everything is falling into place.I have one concern how would Billy react to an armed robbery?You hope it never happens of course but it could.
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There is help but so many vets for various reasons don't seek it. Mark needs to find the right kind of people to assist him in helping Billy
