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That was my first thought also but it would suggest a familiarity they have with TJ as far we know doesn't exist .
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I was almost going to comment alternative universe last chapter but decided I should wait after just one chapter.Since you saved me from sounding crazy about that I'll elaborate on a possible theory.Tristan from the other universe knew TJ wasn't safe and was going to get killed there so he arranged for TJ to go to this universe(wait it gets better)The TJ in this universe was supposed to die so this TJ took over the body something similar to this was in another GA story.Okay thanks for indulging me you don't know my address so I know you can't send the men with the white jackets to get me.
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I suspect the reason why this story didn't have more readers is because the first 5 chapters or so describes some of most horrifying abuse imaginable but as the author points out it does happen that way and worse.But if you can stay with the story after that it is well worth it for it is a very touching story and you feel good for the main character.I have read a number of other great stories that had to been influenced by this story for this story was written before those.We may not have a chance to see those stories without this one being written first.If you come across this review and are unfamiliar with this author I urge you to read this and this author's others stories
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He was sad about Billy and Mario moving out but it was only a few houses down and they work in the Cafe so it's all good.Clark and Larry could sleep over sometimes so they would be closer to work .Very good story
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Great start.Yeah I figured some things would be just like his dream and I'm sure we'll hear an explanation for that some where down the line and Little Tristan will be part of it.T.J. said a line "Grandpa Ron and Tony didn't die" so just to clarify they are not alive in this story?So if true J.C. won't come across the Ronyx Stories eh.And If I got this right I wonder how Rony feels about you killing him off?One more annoying question T.J. was in a coma for a year so how did dream 5 years worth of stuff in one year?Ignore me I know I'm making no sense
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No Ricky Ricardo says "splainin" .I'ts not me being politically incorrect it's the TV show.
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Usually when you review a story you like to describe it little without saying too much.I really don't think I can do that here.What I can tell you is that it's never a dull moment and really that's all you can ask for
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Seriously you expect us to believe it's going to be that simple????Sebastian's dad has money ,crooked cops or DA etc.This is gay male fiction after all.
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No that was totally different there were no snow globes here
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This is a dated reference but if Pam Ewing can can dream an entire T.V. season then T.J. can be in a coma for two stories.I have mixed feelings but overall I'm looking forward to the next story.Can you tell us if the stuff about T.J. and J.C. knowing each other at 5 years old is still true?Or will we have to wait.when will the next story start? Some might accuse your story of being nutty but not nearly as nutty as this country seems to be today
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Chapter 66 - "Hello, It's Me"
weinerdog commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 66 - "Hello, It's Me"
Well that was an intense hour for me(OK 10 min. in reality)but it seemed like an hour.Good for Randy good for Mom. -
Sounds like everything is falling into place.I have one concern how would Billy react to an armed robbery?You hope it never happens of course but it could.
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There is help but so many vets for various reasons don't seek it. Mark needs to find the right kind of people to assist him in helping Billy
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Man you have it written in such a way that I don't know who to trust.Are Kellen and Jordan evil?How about Mike?I know thats probably way off but I briefly thought those things while reading this.Did Jimmy shoot Jack?No I'm kidding about that one..You and your damn magic eight ball. So you're writing from Area 51?I guess you want to make sure @Wesley8890 can't get to you.
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I hope this isn't beyond Mark's ability to help.My thought would be to contact a VA office.But I guess you need to find a last name first .
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Your Prologue used the work shelled shocked that makes me wonder if this is set in the past for that word isn't used these days.Whatever the women's complaint was I'm sure isn't valid.Billy most likely didn't say anything to the police
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Good chapter in getting to know some of the cousins.So at the end J.C.said he" heard his voice".That implies the person isn't physically there.I'm going to guess it is T.J. using that ability to reach out to J.C. mentally.I don't think it's Tristan otherwise we would hear Ja-wack-sin.But T.J doesn't call him Jackson does he so maybe not .Is there a distance limitation as to what Tristan and Damian could do? I ask that because maybe they could take care of some of the bullies in Iowa.Not kill them of course. Would it be immature to say to @Wesley8890Nyah Nyah I beat you?Yeah it would so I won't say that.
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Would it be your story if it didn't????
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Maybe Jack hasn't redeemed himself yet but he took a huge step.Where in Iowa did you say these boys are?Never mind just thinking out loud.Okay since nothing crazy happened this chapter I'm bracing myself for.Readers we should all be afraid.
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Nice chapter.Apparently Tyler worried about Ariel finding out.It happened before they got together is so I don't see a problem but since it is written that way then maybe it would be a problem for Ariel.He was a little fragile in the past so I hope not
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For a moment it sounded like the end but I guess there are still a few loose ends.Now fess up you said Troy wrote some stories about the place you're Troy aren't you lol.
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Jeff doesn't know how to be a boyfriend at this time. After years of being ostracized all of a sudden a number of people are being friends with him and they are all cute and of like mind if I was in that position I would have probably done the same thing.I said before they should all be FWB.But it does look like Jack has a different kind of feeling when it comes to Lyle.
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I don't have anything new to add from the other excellent reviews.But I will say this author stands right up there with anybody's favorite established author.Judging by the reaction count and comment count word didn't get around when these stories first appeared almost 10 years ago.Maybe GA was a different web site then.This authors stories are as good as anyone's this review and rating is here so maybe more people can discover these stories
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Surprised to hear about Nick but sadly that happens in life.Billy is in the best possible place.I heard about people that can do what Billy can do.
