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So that explains your story and your writing

If it's not bad then why would Jack tell J.C. they have to get to Iowa?Oh no just after I typed that I thought of a reason I hope I'm wrong

Haven't you had enough hospital scenes yet?Now the question is was it just an accident Tracy had or did the bad guys set it up?I'm also thinking did Dominic's dad meet with foul play? While Kelly is a piece of work we didn't hear Murray say anything in regards to Kelly threatening Jack was he also part of that?

I was thinking about that you think Tristan can make me forget the 2016 election happened?

That was an awesome move by Tony to bring Nick and Billy

Pretty soon they could run a child daycare

By your standards calm chapter good but calm.So that that means Kelly saying"Tristan?" means another beaut going to happen.Let's see Kelly is Emily's friend so she had an affair with Tristan and then...AW I'll wait to see what you come up with.

By your standards Then after that who would do all the stupid whackjob stuff?Oh of course Grandma Helen resident asshat

What's the big idea posting this as soon as I go to the shower?lol.I think it's a little too soon for Jack to have an Epiphany so I suspect the upcoming conversation isn't going to go well.Hope I'm wrong I'm a romantic I want things to go well. A question about a previous chapter.After Grayson tried to commit suicide did C.C. consider telling Grayson that they know where T.J. was and that's he's okay or maybe somehow letting T.J. find out what Grayson did.What that thought to be too risky? BTW what does losing your memory have to do with talking like you're in the 1950's.Neato???

It's been relatively calm for a number of chapters are the bad guys still an issue?are they laying low?

We weren't cheating on you Ronyx what happened was......oh,er never mind

Wasn't a bad idea

WOW !!! What a shit move by Jack saying it was domestic violence I hope the family intervention sheds some light.It might be a case of Helen and Jack sharing the same wacko gene.There was a line in there that said Alex could not help at the hospital because he's family but Alex would not be family unless the hospital knows Mike is related?Does J.C. know about little Tristan mind reading ability?That would be one way to find out WTF is going on with Jack.

If the Cheeto-in-chief gets his way

WHAT HAS GOTTEN INTO JACK?????And I don't know where to begin with the Petri dish stuff.I'll withhold comment until more about it is explained.Yet another secret. You and Ronyx must love hospitals both of you're stories seem to have a lot of scenes with them.Is that another gay male fiction rule?There has to be scenes with hospital rooms lol.

Mac is the perfect name for the Colonel's kid.I think people referred to Gen.MacArthur as Mac.That firm that's in Switzerland is it the same one that appeared in The Peter Charles? That's where it was IF I remember right.

I'm guessing one of the people you're referring to is Jack.Well he's going to be his father-in-law so at least he should try to find a middle ground there.The source of mistrust he has toward Jack was because of his mother.Now since that's no longer an issue I think its fair to say Jack isn't evil and means no harm to T.J. .He should try for J.C. sake.

I didn't forsee writing this especially so long after the fact.A few weeks ago at the time this review is being written I saw an advertising link. on GA for an excellent story I had already read.A week later GA had a link for this story I figured they only do this for very good stories so I decided to check this out.And this story is very very good.I wasn't a member of GA when this first appeared but I'm guessing GA was a little bit different then.The number of reactions and comment this story got doesn't indicate how good it is I'm thinking if this was released today by a popular author it would get a. lot more attention.It has been almost ten years since this first appeared and the author I guess isn't active anymore there can be many reasons for that .I really don't want to know I'm worried the reason may not be good.So why am I writing this simple this story can stand with any story that has been written by my favorite authors and I noticed this is the only one that doesn't have a review on it and it deserves one.I want readers when they look for a good story like this to see the stars next to it hopefully It might get someone to read this that otherwise wouldn't and that would be a shame.I eagerly now will start reading this authors other stories

WHAT YOU SAY???? (I'm in a weird mood also)

A musical chapter you can't beat that.Wow there's a lot of conflict going on I hope mature minds will finally prevail I say that about all the parties involved Weird how Jack's mom did the same thing with J.C. as she did with Jack. Sounds like a calm ending but knowing this author it might mean this is the biggest bombshell yet

They should arrange for Douglas M Haskins to live there full time.

Well since you said that I guess I can eliminate one nagging thought that there isn't a third person that can control Little Tristan and feed T.J. disinformation.I'm sorry you brought me to this point.what's next? Was it the drugs that made Emily evil?The one thing you would think as the sons got to be older into teenage years they would notice some red flags to that side of her.I know a person doesn't want to believe their mom is evil but what were the kids naive?

Nice trip.If they find Giovanni a BF would that mean he would stay in Guam?

Happy for Jamie well for both of them actually.Sorry for being cynical but things are too good right now.What's going to happen to cause tension

The fact that all the guys from the base were cool with the three kids who are dark skinned that Marcus should not be a problem.Sadly we know that's not always true.Italy sound awesome