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Jeff's conversation with the police officer reminds me of something.At my church we have a program where we ask for donations after all the masses on the third week of the month.The volunteers (which I am one)go to Costco and buy enough food to fill 100 bags of food.The following week we go to about five parks and distribute them.(this is in California)all foods are canned or wrapped and are non-perishable and are bought well before the date on the package.We get hassled by the park maintenance and PD a lot.I'm glad the officer in your story is a reasonable guy.We had to stop doing this due to the co-vid situation
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Well the boys concern about sex is put to rest if they were willing to swim naked in front of Jeff.Those six boys obviously formed a tight bond of friendship while on the street I wonder if any of them formed a different type of bond?
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I'm glad he's helping these kids.What ages are these kids?There could be some legal problems because of that depending.Jeff has a food truck any chance he'll cross paths with Jim from The Food Truck story.kidding
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Tyler is obviously a bright kid the questions he asked were spot on and articulated well. We also find out that he has a serious problem and a situation like this can lead to fatal consequences. I assume Zeke is unaware of this.I hope he sees a clue in Tyler's behavior before it's too late
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As soon as you mentioned pint sized cartons of milk I had an idea what Jeff was going to do.I'm just curious what kind of regulation hoops he's going to have to jump through.Strange you have street kids out there alone and the government is doing nothing for them but I bet as soon as Jeff tries to help them they'll try to get involved.
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Maybe Tim and Jim are twins they even fooled the author lol
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You probably know this but @jkwsquirrel wrote a story called String which takes place about 10 years after The W.A.R series which has some of those characters in it. Glad you are reading this story also.
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Curious to see where this is going.This reminds of a story I saw on 6O minutes about 5-10 years ago.There was some flaw in the design of a game in The New Jersey lottery which some smart guy like Jeff figured out and the person made a killing.Only one time here In California did I hear of a lottery winner asking their name to be private and not announced.I wonder how many state lotteries allow you to do that.Sounds like that's what Jeff should of asked about.
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Thank you nice story.So they might adopt kids?Let me tell you something there were a number of times we had two dachshunds at the same time.Having three Greyhounds will be a lot like having little kids.
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Awesome how things are turning out for Matt and Donnie. I hope the house and the cottage is fenced in because if Flash should get spooked by something and runs off your going to have a tough time trying to catch a greyhound.
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Glad Tim and Lou became part of the group.The only thing about this story that is to fathom is the obvious double standard with Dave and Angie.Except for the possibility of an unwanted pregnancy it should have been no difference.
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Oh wow I just noticed I was comment #13 I'm not superstitious but we can't have that so this is comment #14
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Another excellent story to the @Geron Kees catalog thank you😀.I do have a thought here a lot of times when a popular TV show adds a new character and it turns out people say as soon as they put that new guy in it went all downhill but I have a very good feeling about Horace.Let also be sure to visit Annie,Moped and Mrs. Ravishaw in the future.
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If you said lawyers with principles THEN that would be something
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Well this chapter almost made it sound like everything is wrapped up but there is still another chapter to go it will be interesting to see what's yet to happen.Near the end of the chapter trick or treaters were mentioned as usual I got more candy then I needed.Then someone told me that this year (In San Diego) it was recommended that nobody takes their kids out trick or treating and guess what NOBODY came by this year did any of you have the same experience where you are at?
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It won't be long?Grounded for four weeks for a teenager that's forever. Matt's comment about Mrs. Chase not saying anything makes me wonder if there is another shoe to drop(Yeesh wrong expression)This is just conjecture but which sibling is older?Is one of them an accident?
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Interesting world Charlie went to.If I didn't know better I would think you took a mind altering drug and started writing.Can't wait for the conversation in the kitchen
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Real smooth explanation Donnie LOL. I didn't know You Tube had those kind of videos.I knew they had videos of Breast cancer and circumcisions but I would think video's of what Matt watched would not meet their guidelines.
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No THEY would reading your story and our comments so lets not give them any clues
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Actually now that I think about it ,It sounds like a Scooby-Doo episode "Damn Kids"
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If the thought was Lou might be gay because he's sitting alone that would be quite a reach .But it was still a cool thing to do and the fact that he was cute didn't hurt.
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I'll add another one that is probably not the case .The device and the piano note was caused by somebody who wants people to think the place is haunted. They want to buy the house for even a cheaper price. Maybe Mrs.Viggerol is in on it.OK I put it out there go ahead and call me a nut
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What a trip less then a month ago I read an article about a book called"Edison vs. Telsa: The Battle Over Their Last Invention".Edison had been a skeptic about communicating with spirits but near the end of his life changed his thinking he talked about inventing a spirit phone. Hey if the whole house is an antenna using old fashioned TV signals I bet if the local NFL game was blacked out they could pick up an signal from way out of town.Forgive me I'm babbling.
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In a small town like that you can still see that.Still it was a great gesture
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Well it looks like Matt's dad is cool with things That's huge(forgive the expression)Are they going to try to be discreet at school?Matt's Dad and Angie have said they are obvious so they might not be able to pull if off if that's what they try
