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Good story.Its realistic that Cedric didn't go on to be gay and its cool that they are still friends.Who knows if a break up happens and they had a few beers always a possible option.Google Chicago snowpocalypse and check out the images it was bad.
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Very nice chapter.The one comment I keep thinking of is Randy saying "Hehehe, oh yeah. I remember."I have a feeling that going to come up again.I'm going to scan the previous chapters to see if there was another clue I missed.
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Good chapter.Glen is right about waiting its a big step.I wonder what his fear is.
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The Grandmother and the kids were mentioned in chapter 2 as you probably saw.I suspect maybe the sentence about being a guardian was cut off unintentionally.
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I Just found I just found the chapter it was in and I did read it before I guess I just forgot. I'm too young to be having memory problems. Maybe I'm reading too many stories at the same time lol
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Nicky is quick study.I know I wouldn't have caught on that fast.Did I misunderstand something.The two boys with grandmother would be part of Kevin's family I think but he had to be introduced to them wouldn't he already know them?
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Nicky works fast already wanting to have a party.Luckily Kevin can relate.
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I got confused for a minute when another guy named Lou was mentioned no more Lou's in the story OK?Good chapter.Guess what?Because of this chapter I'm going to be making a pastrami sandwich
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Cat and Mouse game is right."Who says I'll be staying here tonight".Hope dinner with dad goes well.
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Thank you for a very good story the thing you do best is create characters the reader cares for.Perfect way to end it with Lucas saying "Michael".Now on to read The Scuffy
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Jennifer is a idiot.I get how unnerving all those comments on Alex accounts can be but she really should known about it being part of business before Alex got into modeling.Her actions really don't explain her objections with Alex being with Harry.Modeling didn't make Alex gay after all.She should have talked to Alex about the messages on his account before jumping to those stupid conclusions but it doesn't sound like she is a good one to reason with. At least George is someone that can be reasonable.But what happens when he has to go out of town again?The last line of the chapter about Jennifer pondering her next move has me worried BTW loved how Jill stared down Jennifer
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Wow 50-50 and a house generous terms.Most people making a proposal like that would go 60-40 or 70-30 plus some other conditions on the house.But Stephen and his history knows he is fortunate.His pay it forward approach I think makes him more of a Christian then the pastor.
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John must of had some connections to get Lukas adopted.It was so awesome that Jeppe and the other boys to come over like that not only in loving memory of Nohr's grandmother but they also showed how they felt about Stephan and Nohr.
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So the kipnapping of Lucas wasn't reported on the news but the father kidnapped another boy and that was reported on the news.I guess the best explanation would be Michael made that happen.When they go to adopt Lucas what will be the story they tell? Despite all the questions I do like the Idea of them adopting a kid in need.
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Good points all of them.I'm sure the kidnapping thing will be dealt with next chapter it has to be.It could be Michael telling them to do this as to leave Lukas would be fatal.
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A part of this I'm not getting.The doctor apparently knew that the father was going to try to sell Lukas.So I would think he would tell the authorities about it.We find out later the father wanted to be notified when the boy could go home.If he wants to sell the boy and the Doctor knows that the father shouldn't have the right to be notified.what did I miss?
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So Jeppe would be in high school then? Still what I said before still applies he was like little brother.Good place to honeymoon.And what Gram said was so true about being around memories
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Jeppe seems to be more like a little brother than anything else.It would have been cool to be part of a fishing group or any kind of group like that growing up.
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This picks up about 10 years after Aiden's war.I don't want to give away too much starting with the next chapter you will see how WAR sort of fits into this.It's a good story
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Stephen really has a head for business.I glad Jeppe got a job
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Home Is Where The Heart Grows
weinerdog commented on Dahawk's story chapter in Home Is Where The Heart Grows
It was a really cool gesture of Blu to see how Sage was doing on the plane.Finally after all this time he's thawing out.Any significance about the name they chose?It is a cool sounding name -
Things are progressing nice.I don't recall at any time during Kevin narrative him saying anything about his past in regards to this.They are both still young would this be Kevin's first relationship if it got that far?
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I really like how they spend time fishing with the kids.I guess I shouldn't have but in my mind I had his Aunt being a little older.
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Stephan and his Aunt might have been kidding but Stephan might be away sooner rather then later so if John wants to hang he should learn about the chores .Aunty isn't getting any younger
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Why did the pastor ask Stephan about what he did to Jeppe?What was he told and what did he think?I'm sure Michael allowed the pastor to see him for that brief moment.It's cool Stephan made a new friend.
