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Ok they kissed step one they did what they did in this chapter step 2 I guess all the readers will be anticipating step 3 now. Earlier in the chapter “You dressed?” Davin asked NO NO NO! Davin you don't do that you walk in and if you see what you hope to see say "oh....sorry" “Two more and by tomorrow after school,” she repeated Celia you don't know what you're asking for .What if Joel ends up inviting Rissa and Lance from his lunch tableWell at least the party wouldn't be dull maybe not fun but not dull

I wonder if Logan came clean (no pun intended) with Toby when Logan went outside to get some "fresh air" I like Oliver and I want to continue to like him but this makes it very difficult “This is really good,” Logan said, taking a bite into a slice of black olive pizza. “Where’d you get it from?” “I made it myself,” I put a few slices on a paper plate for myself The only thing worse then black olives on pizza is black olives with pineapple on pizza How can you do that with pizza?

I always wondered why we almost never see politicians write fiction stories (Unless it is their autobiography)

they won’t hover, but they’ll always be within range. Think of them as… subtle.” Oh yeah subtle all right...subtle as a nuclear weapon “That was… weird,” I said, watching him disappear. “Do you two know each other?” Oh yeah they know each other I had my Washington Commanders hat, Shiloh sported a Ravens one, Shane had the Nationals, and Shawn the Orioles. The Nationals🤔.....Shane must have gotten the short stick

There has to be a way we can crack the passwords and get in to have a look around at what you lads used to get up to.’ In Tricky Ricky case wouldn't he just use the 'Forgot Password ?" feature all the sites have and then re-set it? I'm glad @Summerabbacat comment came up while I was typing this so I could read it before finishing mine .I was about to say a similar thing to what he and also @akascrubber wrote about the two murders being preceded by a rape first. To add more fuel to the killer following Rick he would have saw Rick interacting with Alexis. They should check if the business Alexis worked at had cameras and any other security or ATM cams that might have picked something up perhaps the guy who's face Rick can't place. Another reason why it was good @Summerabbacat posted before me is because I would have stolen some of his thunder which may have resulted in a different and yet LONGER comment from him😄

Now you'll have to think like a Ukrainian but I'm looking forward to it This is the first time I saw the picture on the story page. Now I know why it was so hard for them to let go. Sometimes if you love something enough, you have to set it free, that would make a great bumper sticker....Oh ...wait

If the bruising gets worse Jake might have no choice then to tell his folks

Oh so Stealing Home is going to cross over into this story? I just started reading SH I guess I better be sure to finish it

A busker played the Jerry Jeff Walker classic, “Mr. Bojangles,” Walker's version was the first but most people know The Nitty Gritty Dirt Band version and a few others like The Sammy Davis Jr. version you may have alienated a few fans @LittleBuddhaTW

To me the film's contact did NOT live up the controversy media drummed up. I left the film thinking "that's it?" "this society has a long way to"

What's scary is I didn't realize I did that and I have no idea HOW!!!! I did that

Carter did a number on Ace but Leo just might be the right antidote

? What’s the protocol for meeting your ex-boyfriend on the 40th anniversary of Pride that you haven’t seen in two years? I bet if you typed that in Google AI you would would get a response I’m a clean freak and Konstantin is a fucking slob. I suppose you could have called this story The Gay Odd Couple

If @CincyKris is right about Martin then maybe that guy Rick keeps seeing but can't place might be a connection IF not the killer himself.If I remember right Rick described him as older so it is not a former classmate maybe this guy is the father of one of the victims perhaps HE thinks Rick did it. After showers, coffee and some toast smeared with Vegemite,...Vegemite!...Why do I think @Summerabbacat will use that as an excuse to post the Men at Work song.

It's amazing how you can pivot from that one story to this story At least Lex didn't name his conquest Mitsubishi

Lot of times Road trip in title of chapters mean chaos But Darren and Luca are too young for that right.....RIGHT?????

An hour later and after one of our biggest fights, he made me promise that I would stop sharing my journal regarding stories about our relationship with Susan. Well now that promise was broken the minute you started posting this story wasn't it This chapter, by far the most experimental I've ever written, grew so big, I broke it up into two parts. Okay so this chapter was 3,885 words so that means you end up writing somewhere between 7,500 to 8,500 words........ That's a mini chapter for @Krista

I think that comment serves as a pretty good brief epilogue .Thank you

Thank you sir for an excellent story

Would you and I and anybody else for that matter apply what we learned after seeing Alex naked.BTW how come it wasn't NerdStar

I never got any notifications for chapter 4 and 5 for some reason. I clicked following the story in addition to already following the author I hope that solves that🤞 It was revealed that Helen saved Alexis from the streets so one has to wonder did Alexis in those days cross path with Jarvis? Making Jarvis connected to Alexis death? As mentioned I didn't get notifications for the last two chapter I looked through all of them🤔 I did notice in the chapter 4 comments a couple of readers were expecting me to come up with my usual harebrained speculation.Well I can tell you everything that happen in chapters 5 and 6 I would have predicted spot on.....Actually I probably would have said stuff that would have led to an entirely different story if true😄

Bet you like me better now huh? Oh wait I shouldn't have said that your Husband already did enough cussing for a Sunday for you to add to it

What? you only have one chapter left?

I hope these five stars gets the attention of readers who haven't read this for this is a story worth reading. But I caution everybody this story is very dark.If it's not the darkest story on GA it is definitely the darkest I ever reviewed. I can't put into words the raw honesty this talented author has put forth but I promise you that you'll be blown away. This may be difficult to read at time but trust me it is well worth it

When I checked in to GA this morning I had four pages of notifications of comments on other stories and I guess this got lost in the shuffle. I wonder if Simon had played the message when he first got it and hearing Rowan saying not to blame himself would have made Simon's actions different? This was absolutely worth the wait