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  1. bottomguy

    Revelation

    I am happy for JJ and for Henry. I think they have been close enough over the last several years that when Henry told JJ that his was in love with him. I think JJ was mulling over in his mind about sexual contact with minors, but I think he was also looking at his own feelings and how he actually felt inside about Henry. I think they are doing the correct thing of beiing together. This could very well turn out to be the best thing for them both. I think JJ is now on his way to become really involved with his work and with Henry at his side. Nothing like makin super computers as well as makine love to someone you really have great feelings for.
  2. bottomguy

    Chapter 36

    Way to goTimothy!!!! Mr. Morris just got back handed by Timothy and did not even see it coming when it hit him. No beating around the bush, no time for Mr. Morris to think. With the converstion being recorded. Mr Morris may have a new purpose for his law degree, as a liner for a cats litter box. i am not a real attorney fan, but there are times when one will come along and surprise the pants off of you. Timothy went after a pound of blood and a pound of flesh jumping on Mr. Morris. Sure going to be a very long flight back to his office. He may need to stop along the way someplace and change his underwear. Great chapter.
  3. bottomguy

    Chapter 30

    Now would be a good time for Karl to appear. Even if George would not even see him if he did come into the room. Karl is going to suddenly become educated into the real life of others than just those of his family who are back at his home. George needs some intervention now to prevent something more from taking place.
  4. bottomguy

    Chapter 29

    Karl, is probably just as confused as George is right now. George is in need of someone's help with his nightmares and dreams. Karl saw first hand what is happening to George, but now sure how deal with what just happened. This is going to be interesting as to how Karl will approch George. I enjoyed this chapter as it shows what some people can go through. Nothing is simple or easy after someone so close to you has been lost.
  5. bottomguy

    Chapter 28

    George seems to be blaming himself for Nathan going away to war. Blaming himself seems so easy to do to ones self, but it still does not lend towards self healing. Paul is seeing what George is going through and told George to pretty much get his act together. I am still thinking that Karl my play a part in George's path to healing.
  6. bottomguy

    Chapter 35

    Mr. Morris has probably not even given any thoughts to another attorney digging in what was his bread and butter. I think Mr. Morris is working in the panic mode right now and attempting to brush away his tracks that are all over the will, estate and any bonds or stocks along with property. He may find just the thing he needs. Paid room and board in a state institutional facility, you know kinda like a prison!!🤑 He might even be able to talk his way into having some other members who gained from the will and the estate. As far as Ann Marie is concerned. I think she should find a nice place in oh lets say deep in the southern reaches of the Antartic to set up her own estate. Where she can cool her jets and see how many of the natural wildlife there listens to her. If she gets any of the assets from the will and estate. Let her take what is left from Timothy's fees for saving her worlthless cabbose, and send her way out the door to never return. Let her go and make others lives a misery in hell if she can.
  7. bottomguy

    Chapter 25

    George is gay. Yes I know that feeling. I am sure there are so many others who have felt that same feeling as George just has. Many other males will feel that same thing. George may not be entirely correct when he thinks that he will change. Join the club George, for is is a large club that you are in but do not realize it just yet. George will doubt himself and possibly become angry at himself for his thoughts. He may also just resign himself to the realization that he is different in respects to how he feels about other men. It may take him a little longer but I do think George will find his way in the world as there are so many others that are members of this club that do not really know they are yet. George may have just helped himself more that he realizes by coming to thiw old building where him and Nathan joined together. This could also be the beginning of George's self healing. But, let us keep reading to learn ourselves.
  8. bottomguy

    Chapter 24

    I agree that it is a war story, There will be so many more lives, friendships, loves and family lost during the war. George may sound and act like a self centered twat. But I do think he is much more a person of compassion than we think. He has been bullied and Nathan did step up to help him. We may still not know what Nathan meant to George untl a little later. But George does has to come to his own self healing at some point. I this think the Karl and George will bond as George will help Karl with English. This could very well be the thing that save George from his own misery.
  9. bottomguy

    Chapter 51

    I also am of the opinion that there is more to this story about Nathan and Jason being brothers. DNA is the answer for this. I also agree that Nathans daughter may not be his daughter. I am of the belief that Nathan's father is the father of who Nathan thinks is his daughter. The drug arrest and keeping Nathan's daughter away from him, all seem to controlled. If Nathan's father paid to make sure that Jason was adopted by who are supposed to be his parents, then what is to prevent Nathan's father of paying to have drug charges planted on Nathan and have he taken to jail. Something more is coming that I hope will open up this supposed can of worms completely. Nathan and Jason have fallen in love with each other, and if they truely are twins that can be verified with the DNA testing. I think it time to have everyone involved here get DNA testing. Nathan's mom and dad, Jason's mom and dad as well as Nathan's daughter and his former wife. Nathan and Jason get their DNA testing done before anyone else is aware of what they are doing. Then spring the results on all of the rest of the family members and see where this takes us to . Nathan/s father has admitted to bribing the child services and who know if anyone else has received payoffs. I am betting there are some law enforcement and possibly even some members of the court, have been paid to get Nathan put away so everyone can be safe. What an arraingement we have going here. I will be looking for the next chapter to open things up even more. Good luck to Nathan and Jason. They are the ones being taken advantage of by all of the lies and hidden antics of dear old mom and dad.
  10. bottomguy

    Chapter 23

    This chapter is a touching one as well as a difficult one. When somone has a loss the way George has. Everyone reacts differently to their loss. There are those who become withdrawn and silent while thinking of what will happen to them. Some react with anger and blame everyone for the loss. Then there are those who do not show any signs of emotion or of the loss. They bury this deep within themselves and become distant with the way they look. Their eyes are without energy. They just go through each day the same way, no emotion or tears not even a quiet prayer. All anyone can do it what they know when dealing with friends or family that have had a sudden loss. I have a feeling that Karl is going to play a part in George's life in the near future. This may be the time for Karl to understand English more. Maybe this is who will teach Karl the english language. Maybe Karl and George will become much closer than we have already read about. Life does take strange turns at times when there has been a tragedy. Paul was doing his best to get George back into the good things he enjoyed. It will take time for Paul to accomplish this as well, I do beleive. It is going to be interesting where and how George begins his own recovery from the loss he has received. War does not discriminate as to who lives or dies. We all know that war actually is Hell for all of those who are involved. There has never been a war for good and kindness. George will need to cope with and deal with the war he has right now within himself. Thank you for such a trying moment for both George and Paul in this chapter.
  11. bottomguy

    Chapter 32

    Holy Crap!! Ann Marie could have played the part of the "WIcked Witch of the West in Wizzard of Oz. Going to be interesting to hear what happens when Mon and Aunt Clara leave for a few days to stay with Ann Marie's most favorite brother, NOT. Dad will be staying there along with Randy. This is going to be better than a real cat fight. I am also wondering if the wedding for Eve and John being moved up is the result of the work of dear old sis Ann Marie? How nice it is to see how she brings the family together. Right?? Now with the prenep that was drawn up after the wedding. I think that may invalidate it as well. Maybe there was some under the table dealings with Ann Marie's husband and the attorney. There may have been more about that marriage than we know about. TIm meeting with the attorney discussing the prenep, may open up a bigger can of worms. Now dad and Randy will be staying in the house to watch over Ann Marie. This will be interesting as well. I hope that Randy stays more in the background when things begin to hit the fan. Nothing like a good old knock-down-drag-out family feud to get things exciting. I wonder if Randy's computer has video capabilities as well. Put Ann Marie on camera. These next chapters can just about go any direction. Going to be a very interesting next few chapters. Many congrats for your writing, reading your story sounds just like some neighbors I once had. Oh how I miss the yelling, screaming and the beating on doors for entertainment.
  12. bottomguy

    Three Mistakes

    “Rumor has it that the mighty have fallen. Is it true?” Would this pretty little Brunette be referring to the Xpress. I wonder where that little tidbit of info came from??? Johnathan was nearly lost in his own feelings when suddenly he was given a way out. Does Johnathan really want to be one of Maddox's many success stories or something different? Will Johnathan begin to feel more inclined to sweep Maddox of his feet? All of this happening and the party has not even really started yet. I am not a party guy myself, but I would enjoy watching to see what happens at this party. I might even have a drink maybe two just to get into the mood for the sake of the party!! Maddox did not waste any time getting Johnathan alone. Too bad one of Maddox's buddies broke the sexual arousal so soon as well. I wonder if that little knock on the door had been planned by Maddox's friends? Maybe they want to see Maddox make a fool out of himself? Could be many things happening here at this party. Will Johnathan end up leaving early or will he stay and go after Maddox himself and give Maddox something to think about? Ok I am waiting for the next chapter now. Any time would be great?
  13. bottomguy

    Kiss And Tell

    I am wondering if the Xpress onscene reporter just might be Maddox himself?? Who is always all around campus knows most everyone one way or another. Just saying.. Johnathan was he really invited to the party or was he not? I do thing he is going to go to the party, thinking to stay just long enough to get his room mate Ray settled in at the party and then drop out himself. Or maybe best laid plans will surprise Johnathan? Then will the Xpress already have new about what is happening between Maddox and Johnathan. Could be that Johnathan will go to the party with Ray and all eyes at the party will be on Maddox and Johnathan. Making them the center of attraction for the entire party? Could go either way here. Interesting turn of events with Maddox though. Is he straight or is he gay or even Bi? He may not even know himself? Regardless I find that Maddox will be the one who becomes someone who cannot pull himself together enough to actually connect with Johnathan. It may be Johnathan who will be the one that will surprise us all? Great reading and mystery at the same time. Is the next chapter here yet??????
  14. bottomguy

    Chapter 31

    It appears Tim is going to make sure big sister(Ann Marie) is dealt with a little differently than she is used to . She is going to find out that her little brother has grown up and is now an attorney. Tim is also giving Stephen hints about what Gramps is doing as far as having him doing computer work in different departments of the company. I agree with Tim's thinking that Gramps is making Stephen work his way into the company and earning the respect of the employees as well. I do wonder what thoughts he has for teaching Ann Marie a lesson? This is going to be interesting as well. It seems that in every family there is someone, somewhere who needs to show how intellegent they are compared to the rest of the family. Amazing how this seems to never work either. Speaking course from observations of other families... Let us discover what lies ahead with the Parker farm purchase and who will be operating that. Could it be Randy, or is there a possibility that Ann Marie may come into play in this regard? Interesting chapters ahead me thinks.
  15. bottomguy

    Chapter 66

    Well, it seems as though the first contact with Garjah, Essell and the soldiers ans scientists that are now on the planet appears to be somewhat smooth. For now! I would be interested to read in coming chapters how things progress. But, something is telling me this may not be such a smooth time when it is over. Although I was wrong once before some years back. I do enjoy these stories.
  16. bottomguy

    Chapter 30

    So, after all these years of ignoring her family, Ann Marie was booted to the gutter by her own husband. How wonderful. And she has no friends. I wonder why that would be? Even a stick or branch off a tree can get stuck in the mud, but at least this stick or branch has some support. Poor Ann Marie. not even as good as the stick in the mud. I would let her stay there with mom and dad. I am sure there is a camping tent close by that she can use in the back yard. Of course she would need to deal with personal business by using facilities inside the house. But I think that might be just fitting for her. Yes it was a storm and I thought it would be an earthquake. Ann Marie must be a very detested person. I wonder if she even had friends at college?? This is going to be interesting to she how she deals with her younger brother. Will Tim be the one to bring Ann Marie into reality? Let us read onward.
  17. bottomguy

    Chapter 21

    This chapter is an eye opener to those who have not seen, done or had to explain something as what Robert just did. You can only do the best you can under what circumstances you have. Telling George about Nathan not coming back and never see him again, may seem rather harsh to some. It is never an easy task to do, but even the bearer of such news also has to deal with such things. Telling someone about what George was told by Robert can at times be just as devastating to the one giving the bad news. I know the feeling of emotions that are in play for both of these men. This is not a place where either person wants to be at. George must also be given the time to deal with this news as well as he can. This type of thing is not easy for all involved. Time is sometimes the best but also those around you can may be of great help. There is no way to lessen the pain and heartache. It is always difficult and leaves the bearer of this news just as sad so often. I thought your chapter gave the reader just a little bit of how this sort of thing can have and affect to more than just the principles. Thank you for this.
  18. bottomguy

    Chapter 29

    I think there is a major earthquake in the near future! Do they name earthquakes by chance? If not, they can start with earthquake "Ann Marie"! I think that would be a nice fit for her, since I am almost positive she will shake some things up before long. Tim and Stephen may even feel the quaking at their home. If I was her dad, I would sit her down on a straight backed wooden chair and begin to educate her about what a family is. She may have a physical problem that everyone has not gotten aware of yet. If her nose is so far up in the air, it would be difficult for her to bring her nose down to the real world and act like civil. The only stink she smells is herself. If she did not want to become a part of the family and act civil. "then there is the door and don't let it hit you in your ass on the way out, as I do not want to clean that either". Let here go and irritate someone else. Or become a member of the family and live with it. It is going to be interesting reading in the next couple of chapters. I always enjoy watching thunderstorms when we have them. This storm that Tim, Stephen, Randy and mom and dad is going to be a grand master.
  19. bottomguy

    Chapter 28

    Oh, the wonderful days when things were so easily taken care of. Family members coming home to gather for a holiday or birthday. I do not beleive anyone in my family came home to gather together and whine and moan about how wonderful they were and how nobody understands what I am going through. My life is so tough riding in an old Bentley! Then move out of my way dirt bag let me ride in the old Bentley and I am not driving you anywhere in it either. Maybe she could locate a that new sleek shiny car that just came onto the market. One of those sporty models those that are loaded with C.R.A.P.. She would look right at home in one. I can just imagine why she was not left anything from her husband. He was probably just at tired of ther antics as anyone else and decided to let someone else enjoy it. His way of telling her off without her able to put on a show for others. If I were Tim's dad, I would leave her luggage on the curb but stack it so the good daughter could cover it with a nice warm comforter and blanket and pillow. She can sleep on the curb where the garbage lands. (sorry, just not my type of person to deal with). Now Tim is going to buy the Parker farm, as he has Donnie's approval it seems. What adventure is going to begin there? Is he going to let Randy take over the goat milking and cheese making? Might be rather interesting as well. I do think this next chapter may be a good one to read. The wicked witch of the Universe has flown home to her loving family for support. Too bad that someone is not feeling sorry for her. I look for Ann Marie to stir up some issues about Stephen and Tim. Will have to read on to find out. Could be a regular nail biter of a chapter. I loved the way Ann Marie's family went rushing to her when she landed there. Going to be one of those nice and homey gatherings of family members. Great chapter and ready to read the next one.
  20. bottomguy

    Chapter 26

    The mention of the sister Ann Marie by TIm. Suddenly her name is brought up. Maybe we shall see what evil or wicked things may arise from her appearance. This should be interesting? It appears that Gramps does have a specific lawsuit that has bothered him. Maybe Tim will be locating some new twist with the loss of this lawsuit? Maybe the retiring attorney is just realizing that it is time to get the heck out of Dodge soon!!
  21. I do think the soldiers should send out squads to eliminate the small groups that are surrounding the school compound. Do this could give them the edge that they may need later. Jake and Preston both must deal with the information they have now. What will they do? Can they do it at all?
  22. Spencer eating raw meat frozen meat. Not what your normal young child would be eating. Sounds like Jake, Alex and Preston have some serious talking to get involved in. Do they take Spencer to the Doctors, not say anything an keep him within arms reach? How are they going to clean up the mess from Spencers snacking and not raise any alarm bells for the doctors and soldiers? Getting just a little more intense now with this chapter. So will the boys fill Donovan in on what is happening? Lets keep reading.
  23. Well this chapter was great with Jake and Alex went off by themselves( or so they thought) to enjoy each others young male bodies. Now Preston suddenly opens the door to their hidden love next and gets his eyes full of what Jake and Alex were exploring together. I am sure Preston is going to remember that sudden scene for a great many years as are Jake and Alex. What a sudden deflating thing to have happen right in the middel of young love. Funny but also serious at the same time. The conversation Jake and Alex overheard from the soldiers is very disturbing. Sounds as thought Cain may be on the right path of getting out of the school and forge their own way. Maybe! It seems that Cooper may be the key to the boys and their survival here. Just hoping anyway. Great chapter, great thought went into writing this story and some of the interactions written about. Thank you.
  24. It seems as though all of the boys are gravitating towards Donovan at this point. He has stepped up to be their protector in their eyes. Alex and Jake are just a little more than friends. They have moved towards being boyfriends. Just short of having a wonderful experience with both their male anatomies and their function. I can also see the Jake having second thoughts about leaving the school with his brother and possible Alex, but leaving the rest of the boys behind would be a major hit to Jake and his mindset. This is going to be a great next chapter possible two. But the story about a Zombie DIsaster can be about nearly any major disaster that could have brought all of these individual together as they where. Having a safe shelter to set up living with so many others who are also having major mental issues. Things can get out of control very easily, as it nearly did when the Zombies stormed the gate. I can see some major incidents with this "safe" shelter in the coming chapters. It will be very interesting to see how all of our boys will handle what may come to them all soon. Keep us in suspense, love reading this story Many thumbs up to you.
  25. bottomguy

    Chapter 25

    So, Tim and Stephen have said a few times that showering together saves the water, Hummmm. But when you shower as often as Tim and Stephen seem to be lately, I do not think that saving any water is on the mind of either of those two rabbits , err young men!! Just a little thought there. If I do recall correctly there is still a sister who has not shown up yet to put her mark on our happy couple? Would she suddenly appear and become a thorn in the lives of Tim and Stephen? I do hope not, but she is lurking out there somewhere I am sure. I love this story. Love, happiness, making love, running and working. What more could anyone want??
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