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It sounds like Stephen is going to be burning the midnight oil to build all of these computers programs and systems. He may be in line to take over Gramps company and possibly his dad's. But what if he is hired to do work for the Government, maybe some agencies within the governent. Thing could become rather busy and take away from his time with Tim. Just thinking out loud is all. Tim and Stephen are very comfortable with their work and with each other. I do hope the love continues to grow for the both of them and Randy with a girlfriend now. Things are moving rather well for the boys and the families. What could go wrong with this picture? Nice work with this story, nothing like good families being together and enjoying each other. Very nice. Thank you for your work here.
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There is nothing better than what love brings together. Love seems to always win, since love is very powerful when the person you have such great feelings for and of, becomes your married partner and both lives will play a part in making the marriage something to behold. I think the delay with saying the vows was rather a soft and wonderful touch. As I have observed this on more than on occasion. It does give a little life of it's own to those who recall their own vows being said. I do hope that there will be a visit in the near future to follow Joey and Jack as they make their way through life. I enjoyed everything about this story. Ups and downs as in real life are what make memories and also make things not so memorable in life. Let us all carry on with life together.
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What a fantasic chapter we have here. Jason and Nathan are both happy and have the love for each other as well. It is wonderful when two people who are so much in love with each other the time passes so quickly. There is never time enough to be intimate when you want. So now with Nathan's father there or could it possibly be his mother? This next chapter is going to be a mixture of love, hate, passion and of family. Everything will be coming to a head soon. The full story that possibly involves Nathan's father in the "set up" of Nathan's trouble with his father. I am going to enjoy the rest of this story. We have Jason who in now ready to tell his parents about being gay and in love with Jason. I am sure Jason's parents are already aware of the connections those two have had and will have. And at Christmas, I wonder if the boys had realized this has taken place on Christmas? Could be a nail biter this next chapter. I will be waiting to hear the family's reaction to what they will be hearing soon. Thank you for such an up hill and down hill journey that Jason has been on.
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I can understand the feelings Karl is having with being in a country he knows nothing about. He does sense the fact that Mrs. Hopkins and Mr. Hopkins as well as Paul seem to be attempting to make him understand what is being said,(slightly). George on the other hand has some other issues he is facing. I am not sure yet where he is going to be as far as helping Karl understand what he is going through. I can imagine the thoughts going through Karls mind being pushed away by his father to a place he knows nothing about. If I were to put myself in his place at that age and having done everything on the farm for the family. What would I be doing if I was in Karls shoes? This is taking place at a time when War was beginning and many other lives would be broken forever not just Karl's. This has to be such a terrible feeling of being pushed away by your father without much explaination. This will be a time of learning new ways for Karl and as well as for Paul, George and Mr. and Mrs Hopkins. I think this family and Karl may become rather close before to far down the road. Just a feeling I have. So far I am enjoying this story. It is sad as well as interesting for everyone that has been presented so far. George is still an unkown for me. But I am sure that too will become apparent soon enough. Keep the story coming. Thank you
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In regards to those in Gramps company and want to express their personal views to Tim and Stephen about marring another man. If you remember in the moive Forest Gump. There was a great response to those types individuals. "Stupid is as stupid does". I think I have used that phrase many times and people just look at me with a blank expression on their faces. Yes there are stupid people who do say stupid things. I think I have met most of them during my years of work. Tim and Stephen seem to have things under control. Of course having a family that is there for them also helps. I enjoy this story so much. I hope things continue onward and upward for our newlyweds. Great story here. I do enjoy reading. Thank you and bring on more.
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What a fantastic story you have here. Congrats to you as well. Matt has gone through a period of his life, which need not to have happened. Because of his parents who through him out like he was something that they did not want any longer. It is people as these that help create so many problems for those who are giving their own lives to help these types of children. Matt and Trent are dealing with their own traumas, as they should be able to. People who do this type of work, should be appluaded for their work. Without people as Mr. London and others who try to be a bridge in life for those who need something to save them. For Matt and Trent to be certified as Foster Parents was definaltely a nice twist of events. Matt will be using his talents even more I would think. He is already gotten one of the best referals in his playbook now, with Charlene. That takes guts, determination and lots of love and a big heart for people to do this type of heartbreaking work. It would be nice to follow Matt and Trent in another story Part 2. But what you have done with this story was educated all who read this, opened their eyes and hearts along with their minds. Sometimes there are not those who get the chance that Matt or even Trent were able to find and have. But each one of these stories, becomes another success story for others to see. Thank you so much for the effort you put into this story. Keep things coming. Please.
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A cliff hanger it is. The most concerning aspect for me was the way that Gary just vanished It would be rather eventful if the next story somehow slips into Gary's life after the trials were dismissed. It would be fitting to hear that the empire of the Gary Gaston was falling apart as well as Gary himself. Since being shot by Mrs. Potter it would also be fitting to hear how he came out with his medical dealings for his wounds to his groin and what family jewels he had remaining if any. I think that would be a fitting side note as I sure was hoping that Gary would never be able to hurt another person again, by any means. I would not want the Gaston family name to be glorified in any way. But to put to bed so to speak about the terrible things that Gary committed. Fantasic read. Suspense and romance as well. More is needed, continue onward....
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I enjoyed this entire story. It almost felt like riding a roller coaster. All of the up moments and the sudden downward slidings. Trent and his father and the abuse of his mother. So many directions for this story to take, left each chapter with with the feeling of what can happen now, sort of thought. It was refreshing to read that Trent and Kayden are do so well together. I do think that Kayden had more influence on Trent than either of them had thought. Kayden following his dream to teach and his father apparently seems to be coming closer to to Kayden once again as his father. What more could anyone need from this story? Maybe a second one?? Thanks for such an enjoyable read.
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Stephen's mother is the most shocking development, but a welcome one as well. Maybe she finally was able to see the happiness that was entering the family. Yes, it would be ineresting to see what was written in the letter to Stephen. Who wrote the letter? Now they have their own home. I suppose that there could be room for a foster child to occupy one of the bedrooms? Maybe that is what will be next for our newlyweds? Keeps getting better all the time. Love to ready this story. Big congrats to you.
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I am sure there are many of us readers who are looking, wanting, needing to read the continuing story of Chris and his saving of the Relm and Earth. I do understand the trials and issues that fall upon all of us. Is there going to be something before the end of this year 2021? I do wish that to be the case. My fear is after such a long delay and seeing no more movement, that this story will be abandoned. I for one do not want to see this. I am sure there are many others who do not wish to have this happen. Please let those who enjoy your story to continue to keep reading about the Relm and Chris. It is a fansinating story as well. Just wishing the best for you to keep our readings going for all of us. Thank you.
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It is always good to have happy beginnings when young lovers become a family. Randy will miss Tim and Stephen as well as Mrs. Kenner, but then she may well have Randy renting a room from her soon. Stephen's mother did see the light is sounds. Tim's parents still have a young man under their roof for awhile yet. Donnie apparently said goodbye to Tim at the wedding as well. Or did he? I can see a continuation with this story in Part Two. Would be refreshing to follow Tim and Stephen in their days right after graduation/marrige day! To learn how Tim enjoys the job with Gramps. I think we have not heard the last of Tim, Stephen, Randy and their families. Or the expanding family of Tim and Stephen. Let us all hope that will happen as well. Thank you once again.
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I am thinking about what Paul suggested to George. Use short gestures and phrases when trying to express things to Karl. I think that short phrases will ultimately will get the meaning before too much time passes. I have a feeling that the issue with George and his mother may be something to do with George and possibly his being gay or bi? Just a quick thought. I am thinking that both of them will become very close in the near future. I have been wrong once before i think?? Pun intended!! Lets see where the night leads us as both of these young men work out their language differences. I am sure one of them or possibly both of them may understand the meaning of certain body parts that react when stimulated. What better way to show someone they are welcome than displays of body language.
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Karl being taken away from everything that he knew, has to be shocking to him. It would be for most anyone his age and not knowing why he was sent to England. I am hoping that at some point a map will appear and someone will be able to understand Karl or he will be able to understand what is happening and who are these people that are sheltering him. Karl has been thrown into the war without even knowing what is happening to him. Talk about being in shock, I feel sorry for him and I am sure this family does as well. I want to find out more about what Karl is thinking and see how this family can figure out a way to explain to him where and why they have him in their home. Intriging story thus far, I am hooked. Keep going you seem to be on great story here. Thanks
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I am sure Tim is going to pass the bar exam, with Donnie looking on. Both Tim and Stephen having dreams that sound as though Donnie was watching them. Trusting your deams or strong feelings is something other individuals may not be comfortable in doing. But, i have had certain feelings when responding to many incidents. These feelings as I call them would give me a sense of calm most of the time. It was when these feelings were more intense and felt almost as though they were in the dark of night. Those feelings would make me have goose bumps suddenly. I began to listen to those feelings I would have before arriving at the scene of my call. I soon realized that I was being given hints as to what would soon would be the cause of my goose bumps. Sometimes these feelings were very strong and others very mild. I am sure that others have had some sort of insight to things that they happen later. Not everyone has a belief with such things, but when certain things fall into place it does make you wonder just a little bit more in your own mind. Tim with the help of Stephen seems to have be comfortable with the bar exam. I know others that have taken this exam, when they finished the exam I remember some comments given to me about the stress they had before, during and even after the exam. With the graduation ceremony and the wedding the same day, I can understand why Tim wanted to get the bar exam taken care of. I am sure that was a good thought for him. The statement "Yes, unfortunately, it will be the last time we make this run" , made by Tim has me thinking there will be something more coming ahead with Tim, Stephen, Randy and his mother. As well as with Stephen's family. I do hope this is the case. It will be interesting to see what tomorrow brings for the newly weds. Thank you for making this a great story to read.
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Losing Cook was not expected but I can also see the why. Chip has been truamtized by Gary and who knows who else was involved. I do want to commend Mrs. Potter dealing with Gary and his tool of pleasure he has violated so many others. I do have a feeling she may not be charged wtih her dealing with Gary, since she was also traumatized by what happened to her son Chip. She could be held for a evaluation as to her mental state at the time she shot Gary. There are a large number of individuals that have been arrested here on this campus. How many college officials will be charged as well. Charges of aiding rape and other seriouse offenses that occured with them turning a blind eye to what they allowed should not go without some degree of punishment. I am surprised that Brad was held in check by Beau as well. I think Brad has been without his drugs long enough may have helped him more. He had the frame of mnd of removing himself from the sights and sounds of what happened. He went to his place of peace and calm, and wants those he loves to be present at his cottage with him. I will enjoy hearing what punishment will come down on those who consider themselves to be above the law and order. Let us all hope that Gary will find out he will be a much different piece of scum that needs to be placed where he can not ever consider doing anything to anyone again. I am looking for the next chapter to see how all of this plays out. Rapists and those who harm others for their own pleasure must be found to be criminal and not wealthy I can do what I want individuals.
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TIm and Stehen beoming married on the same day as graduation. A busy day that will become. Graduation day and marrige day at the same time. A little unusual, but not totally. Stephen's mother seems a little disconnected with him. Maybe she will see joy that her son is showing soon. As for Tim, it sounds as though he will have a job right after his graduation with Gramps. Everything seems to be heading in the correct direction. What bumps in thr road lie ahead for the young couple? Will this love story become more of a mystery? Too many things seem to be suddenly jumping out for me. I do hope Tim and Stephen become married. What will mom think and do about her son who is in love with Tim. Mom seems to be the unknown factor that has not really been addressed yet. I want to read the next chapter to give us more insight to what may happen.
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This story is such a wonderful way to let others know what some kids are going through even today. I have seen children of all ages male or female who were out on the street by themselves. Parents, if you want to refer to them as parents either threw them out or these kids left suddenly on their own. When you find a child that has been on the streets and actually fighting to maintain something as a life, it does nearly break your own heart for this children and sometimes the parents. There are those who look for these children on the streets and either drug them, get them high on what ever, sexually abuse them and make them work to earn money for the adult scum that turned thise children into their personal sex business. When you do get the call for a child unconscious someplace and when you arrive one look tells you everything you do not want to know about this child that may or may not make it. To tell the story about the who, why and where this happens is difficult but so easy at the same time. Pick any city and you will find these children there somewhere. You will know them when you see them. They are scared, malnurished, clothes that do not fit or do not protect them from the elements. They may want help, but are scared as to what or who they may be asking. If the governments of the states as well as the federal government want to spend billions and trillions of taxpayer funds. Maybe they should look at what is close to home and preventable for the most part. Foster parents do great work. But there are not enough of them. Hayden may end up with a foster family as well depending on what the court does. You suppose that Trent and Matt get married with the possibility of them being foster parents for Hayden. Matt has funds now that he may use to do his speaking to help some of these children. He and Trent may begin with plans for another shelter as well. I have a feeling that Matt and Trent will have continued support from many sources for shelters doing this type of saving and protection our younger and for the most part innocent next generation. Great story and great emotional tear jerker as well. Thank you so much. I think there may be a couple of more chapters.
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Oh my, Mom does not seem to be on board with Stephen's announcment of him being gay and getting married. I do agree that the mother is usually the first to know that her son is probably gay. So what is happening here? It seems as though Mom is somewhat out of the loop from the men of the house! There must be a reason for this, but I have not picked up on the reason. Grandfather and Stephen Senior seem to be right along with the way things are progressing between Stephen Junior and Timothy. Going to be an interesting stay at Stephens home.
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Nathan found his own backbone and decided to stand up for himself. Nothing like waiting until the very last minute. I can feel the emotions with Nathan and Jason standing there in the front of the store with Jason's co-workers standing there watching as well. I guess Jason has just come out into the open about being gay to his co-workers. Then for Nathan to begin to open up with Jason. Nathan just opened up to Jason about his life and what he had been dealing with. In regards to his father and what happened to get Nathan out of the family. I think the Nathan's father has a side business operation the gets covered by the family business. Maybe Nathan was getting a little too close to discovering what dear old Daddy was doing. Then there is the issue with Jemma and Annie. How close is Jemma to daddy? I do think it is time for Nathan to sit down and begin to think back and be talking to a lawyer. Even have a sudden paternity test thrown at daddy. Let see how he would react to the court ordering the paternity test to see who Annie is the daughter of daddy or Nathan. I am betting daddy will have more than egg on his face with paternity test results. I am happy for both Jason and Nathan now they are back together. Sounds like Christmas dinner at Jasons home with his parents and Nathan is going be an eye opener for everyone. i am betting Mum and dad have already figured out Jason is gay. Which will shock Jason and Nathan. Might very well be a wonderful day fot all of them. Can hardly wait to see the next chapters and what happens to Nathans father, when things begin to unravel for him. Lets hope so. Thanks for a great story.
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Something about Stephens parents seems a little off to me. Grandfather of Stephen sounds and acts more interested with Tim then the mother. I think there may be a sudden change here that Stephen may know will happen when he tells his parents about Tim. This may be part of why Stephen's grandfather is around along with a job offer?? Contacting Stephen by cell phone while in the same house just seems a little chilly to me. This is Stephen's loving mother? There is more to this story that will be revealed I do think. Stephen is a computer wiz apparently.
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A great chapter, Sammy's father in charge of the State Police Special Tactical Team , is very refreshing. And the words he said about interference from some fucking rich rapist, his political friends or fuck even the Govenor. I have been part of a few incidents during my working years. I have heard similar comments for Incident Commanders at a few operations talking about the elected politicians who want to walk on and into ongoing operations. I have seen first hand some of the stupidity of our esteemed elected officials. I have seen a political member of a city council arrested and handcuffed at the scene of an incident who thought since being elected was giving him access to the scene still being in the searching stage. I think the reality is going to become evident in the next chapter go Gary and his goons. Brad, Beau, Mrs. Potter, Sammy and Morris can still desend upon Gary's dorm. I think that reunion will be an eye opener and hopefully Gary will be the one who gets opened. Maybe there will be some justice for the Keller Hall residents. Some of the drunken rescue party members may also get an eye opening experience as well. Let's all hope. Is Wednesday spelled M-O-N-D-A-Y??? Just asking!!
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I was in the process of putting stories in the collections. But had to leave before I finished. This is my first attempt at putting stories onto my collection. As for all of the stories I had been following. I would open the reading history and move to the story that had been updated. When I hit the follow tab on each story I wanted to follow, it was moved into my reading history. That is where I would go to read my stories I wanted to follow. I did have several stories there that i wanted to move to collections, But have not had the time to do so. I was a little surprised when I opened my reading history tab I would just get the message window to set up my reading history. I have not seen that before. Is there something that I did not do correctly as far as the reading history? I just always enjoyed reading the stories and following those that peaked my interest.
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When I opened my Reading History, I only have two stories that are there now. Where did all of the stories I was following go to and why did they leave? When I go to my Reading History it just asks me to set up my reading history. It has worked well until today.
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True As It Can Be Chapter 18 is Now Live- Author Notes
bottomguy commented on W_L's blog entry in Life is worth an entry
a cliffhanger no doubt. I just hope that when Gary discovers Beau is not present, what is going to be reaction? Take out his revenge on Brad once again? There many other residents in Keller Hall that Gary can do much harm to. I am also of the belief that Beau may also surprising all of us. Just suppose that Beau does enter Keller Hall with Sammy? Is there apossibility that he can become a one man wrecking crew himself to protect everyone that Gary is threatening? It is obvious the campus police are helplees puppets. -
Life is very good when so many lives of friends can come together and be a part of a bigger family. Randy and his mother seem to have found something that will benefit them as well as Stephen and Tim. When families are knitted together with those of our friends, life seems to become so much better.
