CincyKris
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I just finished Widderkin last week, so this feels like a natural progression to me. I especially like Auntie Arika, I think she would be delighted with the realms! I'm looking forward to the battle with the miners/government. I'm concerned that the "special" quartz is related to the Nexus stone.
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I was impressed by Ashlee, disgusted and angered by Sarah, and so very impressed by Felicity and her courage. I can intellectually understand Felicity’s life, but I can’t possibly know how she feels. This powerful chapter made me think about my own attitudes and reactions, and I thank you for that.
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If you like westerns, this is one of the best. If you couldn't care less about westerns, this is still one of the best romances you will read! The main characters are complex, likable, and brave. All of Gary's stories are very well-written, this is no exception. Bearpaw will make you feel good and become a part of you.
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I'm glad that Noah's official coming out to his parents was positive. I wonder what his Grandma's problem is, maybe she's just like Colin's brother Miles, loves the sound of her own voice and wants everyone to hear her opinions. Hopefully Val will put her in her place.
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I couldn’t be more pleased with this ending! They have a great future ahead of them and it’s all the more dear due to what they’ve been through! Thank you!
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I’m not sure I understand the animosity towards Jamie and Andre. Women frequently have very close friends they share everything with, why can’t men? I don’t get the feeling that Jamie and Andre have had any separation over time, therefore no “mystery” over their relationship. Chris and Michael were completely out of touch until the party, but were obviously close at one time, requiring some storytelling over a nice dinner.
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Well they certainly cleared the air! I don’t get the feeling that either couple are in danger of straying. Xavier sounds like he was bad news, hopefully he stays in jail and doesn’t cause problems for the future. Easter in Melbourne with extended family will probably be busy, I hope that Andre gets along well with Chris’ family.
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Oh Ashlee. Poor Felicity, I can’t imagine how defeated she must feel. We saw Ashlee’s emotions all over the place from beginning to end, but her gut reaction was something her mother would say. I hope she rethinks her response and apologizes, maybe some research (which she excels with at work) would be in order for her personal life.
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Regarding the meds ….. maybe diabetic? I like Felicity’s spirit, when her relationship ended, she didn’t go back home and work for her dad, she did what needed done and moved on. That Sarah has been through trauma does not surprise me. Bravado and brashness can sometimes be a good cover for hurt. I can’t quite figure out Uyen yet. She seems to be a tough cookie with a gooey center.
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I loved this beginning, you painted a great picture without even a smidgen of boring exposition. Ashlee is OCD, smart, self-driven, introverted, funny and maybe a little lonely. I look forward to her future.
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If I'm interpreting the dream correctly, Dave has a very wolfy future. If his brother can be turned, Dave should be able to. I like mischievous vanilla Edna, I hope she will be around more.
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I'm all caught up now and looking forward to reading more. I like the world you have created, which is markedly different than some of the other shifter series that I follow. I like that, it makes your story distinct. I appreciate the initial conversation, but I'm A little frustrated at the lack of continued communication between our 4 supernaturals. Why did Mark go to Grey's father, rather than talk to Grey? Was Grey chained up for six years? If so, what the hell Mark! This is all info currently within Mark's capabilities to disclose, but he didn't. Why didn't Grey press him on this?
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Did you hear that @Summerabbacat???? That was one hell of a revelation! Thank goodness for Billie, his calming influence in the middle of both a literal and figurative storm was vital.
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I enjoyed this wonderful story of friendship through the realms. I'm very happy the sequel is currently being posted so I don't have to wait.
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Wow, the herald is finally dead! What effect will this have on the assault on earth? What’s going on with the spy mission on the surface? Will the “Master” make himself present? Great chapter, but so many questions!
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You just made my day! Making plans and settling down instead of worries about the future. I think Jubal has some of the same tendency to meddle that Boone did!
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When I commented last chapter that Andre “had something in his head” he was not disclosing, I was thinking a bad experience with a past boyfriend, not being molested and under the control of a pedophile for three years! I am happy he finally told someone but hope he gets some therapy soon. Also, I had no issues with Andre pointing out ugly bedding and encouraging the purchase of new ones! I have experienced something similar, sometimes people are blind to items they have been living with for years and it takes new eyes to really see them.
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I guess time will tell, that his choice to make. Will he redeem himself? I can't wait to find out!
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Aglaron has finally broken out of his "woe is me" mindset and is fighting back with ingenuity. I hope he comes out of this as a better person, father, and king. His track record thus far has not been good.
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What we have seen with your High King happens in real life, as well. When rulers have ruled for a very long time, they lose touch with their common constituents, they listen too much to "trusted advisors", and they care only about keeping the status quo. Aglaron was a fool for listening to Maynor rather than his own heart.
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I join @drpaladin in thanking you for going back to this passage!
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Let's all not forget Frank had a part in this plan and has been conspicuously missing in both Rory's and Danny's accounting of events that night. Also, perhaps insignificant, but I have been wondering about Micco's father. Who is he, does Micco know him, did he have anything to do with the fire, is he still alive?
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Either Rory or Danny are not telling the truth, or we are missing something. Rory said Sam changed his mind, but Danny said Sam was getting ready to open the enclosures. “Danny,” Chase says, trying, I’m sure, but failing to keep the glee from his tone. “According to Rory, Sam had changed his mind about your plan. He wasn’t going to go through with it. Because of his feelings for Michael.” “So you said,” Danny whispers. “He didn’t. He didn’t come back. Right away.” It’s a stuttering start, and I brace myself to pry the rest loose, but Danny surprises me and finds his stride. “He said fifteen minutes. That’s all it would take. But it was twenty-five. He left the gate open, so I… I got out and went looking for him.”
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Micco and Chase reacted to tall, hairy, claws, and the smell of rotting meat. Was the gut reaction to memories of stories or to a memory of the fire and murders?
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Doing evil things because you are certain you are in the right is no excuse, you are still evil. I have no sympathy for Kieran's father.
