CincyKris
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Well I guess I have to read another chapter since this has left me anxious and angry. I don't want to go to bed with this feeling.
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I have been binging this on a very long weather delayed flight from Florida. You have made it more than bearable and I’m completely absorbed!
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I think Russ will turn out to be a good friend for the guys. He’s also good with Toby and Drew and Evie. This felt like an interlude. Will we enjoy a holiday soon?
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I think something is going on in Andre’s head that he hasn’t disclosed, even to his brother, who didn’t understand why he wasn’t ready to move in. I don’t feel like he’s a bad guy, though.
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Chapter 23 In the Bright Light of Day
CincyKris commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 23 In the Bright Light of Day
Just perfect! This is the culmination of all the sacrifices, fears, hopes, and unrelenting love for each other. Thank you!- 77 comments
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This is a wonderful story of friendship between two boys that contrast and complement each other. One is a genius with a broken body, the other is physically gifted with intellectual disabilities. Both are extraordinary and they change the world.
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I couldn't be more appreciative of this wonderful story. Thank you so much.
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I was afraid that something was going to happen to Barega since Akama never mentioned a brother in Attunga. This was so sad, but sometimes tragedies are the only things that precipitate change.
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I am on vacation in Florida right now, so couldn't read this through in one chunk of time. I am soooo jealous of their beach estate! I feel good at how you ended this, we know the couples will be great dads. Who knows, maybe an adventure for their pups will be in the future.
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People like this exist now, and unfortunately will in the future, both IRL and in your story. I think it's because they want a poorly educated population to control. Almost all dictators and cult leaders cut off legitimate communication with enlightened people. Free speech and education are the antidote.
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I can only imagine what the reaction from the community will be! It’s becoming more evident why and by whom Attunga was created.
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I was on a plane when I read this, if I could have stood up and cheered at Akama’s entrance I would have! Thank you!
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IRL a hurricane would scare the crap out of me. In a story…….hell yea!
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Sam was only ever going to get the money if the rescue was closed. The only way Martina gets any money is through the rescue, so she needs it to stay open. Bad publicity does her no good. Sam getting killed has only bad effects on Martina. The only slim possibility that she is involved would be accidentally catching Sam in the act of letting the animals loose. But, if Rory is to be believed, Sam called off the plan. Someone had something to gain by Sam being dead.
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I am looking forward to Akama’s birthplace and the beginnings of the nanofactories, which make the offworld habitats possible. Jarra is the reason they exist. I’m also interested in the beginnings of the enhanced dolphins. I have no doubt Jarra and Mirri are involved.
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I hundred percent thought Frank was involved, I suspected maybe Rory. Even though she came forward, I still have no respect for someone who was willing to sacrifice the wolves, panthers, and possible human deaths for 80 grand. Bitch, just pay your loans off like me and everyone else! There was an incident in Columbus in which the owner of a “rescue” released all his animals. Many big cats were killed. Sorry @Summerabbacat I don’t think Martina killed Sam. She had nothing to gain and everything to lose. Bring on the storm!
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I love that Yirgella and Jarara realize and acknowledge that Mirri is as special as Jarra, just in different ways.
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Parallax owes Beckett a beer or three!
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I wish the healthbots from Attunga were invented at this time. But I suspect that without Jarra, a lot of innovations would have been delayed. He is a remarkable young man.
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This might be another shifter story for @astone2292! A goat walks into a hospital.......
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We know from the intro page that Axel is kidnapped to treat Jeha, who is suffering from a gunshot wound. It seems certain that Moon is involved. I love the development of characters and plot that you write so well! This is going to be exciting!
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Some of us had to go back to work!!! I loved the happiness this chapter exuded! Elijah is finally able to think about Kage and be happy, instead of so much sadness. Not sure if some of the Krew are over him though.
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Mirri is just about the sweetest boy ever! He is so pure in his emotions. In Attunga, we learned that Wirren was derived from a select genetic source. I'm now wondering if that source was Jarra.
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Both boys are thriving with each other. Obviously Jarra is intellectually gifted, but he is blossoming with improved environmental conditions.
