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I would imagine his dad has conflicting emotions about this, considering his thoughts of molesting Jenny. Thank goodness Davey put a stop to that before it started. David Sr. really is a different person in this do over, thanks to Davey.

Hopefully some of the 5 billion can be spent on outreach and information. Too many people get all their information and opinions about sexuality from their church and t.v. Neither are reliable sources.

I can't wait to find out how Davey explains this away. At least they all know he works with the military already. Living through 2020, we've all heard the debates over how the covid pandemic should have been handled. Some wanted a total shutdown and forced quarantine (except for absolutely essential workers to provide food, utilities, and medical care). Would that have worked? Maybe, but almost no one was willing to take that drastic a step in the U.S. or Europe, let alone third world countries. I can't imagine that the President's address will go over well. This was only 40 years since internment camps, there would be lots of people still alive that remember them. Unfortunately, people have a bad habit of ignoring abusive behavior unless it happens to themselves or other people "like them".

This chapter was like an interlude. Dare I say, even sweet. I liked it, but now we need to get back to the intrigue!

I agree with the Dr. that depending on the original timeline to remain the same (Brian hooking up with the witch at 16) may not work out. Originally Brandon fooled around with Davey before he left for Eureka. Maybe without Davey there, he fools around with Trevor and Brian. Brian was never hesitant about coming out, what if he falls for another boy before he turns 16? As for the bully, sometimes letting them leave an altercation with a little self-respect, as the wrestling match did, keeps them from overreacting in the future. I think their second battle ended well. I have a feeling having Mr. Crutchley on his side will be important in the future.

Hopefully Bitner will dig his own grave, pompous fools with Napoleon complexes usually do. Even if he does find a way to make a life with Brian (and I hope he does), Davey will make lifetime friends here in Eureka, too.

Two in one night isn’t bad. Who else did they kill? They really need to put this dog down.

Was that the original time line though?" Cap Weinberger asked and my head started to hurt. That line blew my mind! What if "the original timeline" was not. What if 9/11 was caused by a time traveller coming back from a future where Islamic extremists had lost a war. I agree with Davey, my head hurts. I still don't understand how Shrevardnadze can be an issue in this timeline (died in 1988 in the previous timeline, so couldn't fund the research or come back). In this timeline, Chinese stole the technology and sent someone back. Help?

I think his dad is the kind of person who is mostly good at heart but is flawed and has a short temper. He reacts badly and then regrets it after, and keeps repeating this behavior. Davey has confronted him and forced him to think before he acts. Dad also respects authority, now Davey is a person of authority. I don't think he ever respected Davey in either timeline before.

I'm hoping Bush #1 isn't behind this. He didn't really like Davey much in Do Over, he only changed his attitude after Davey had won the war. I may be a liberal, but I don't want to see Dukakis win the election.

I pretty much hated Davey's dad in the first story, so I'm surprised that he's not as detestable so far. Maybe this stronger, wiser Davey really can change their family dynamics this time around.

I was thinking about the first chapter at work today and one thing I am confused about is how Shevardnadze will be coming to this timeline. The timeline that this Davey came from was the one that had the Soviets losing the 1988 war and Shevardnadze and his father were executed. Also the mad scientist was killed. The original (our) timeline ceased to exist. So he couldn't have funded and participated in the experiment to come back to 1983.

I just finished the first Do Over and found it suspenseful and thought provoking. This is a good start. I can't wait to find out what happened to cause Davey to do this again. His character sounds so world weary.

This is an exciting, well written adventure. The characters are complex and well developed. The story is suspenseful and thought provoking.

Fantastic story! I'm looking forward to reading more.

A sad ending to the new war, but better than the outcome before Sean acted. My brain is still processing this chapter.

Hoping the boys can get back to normal. Well sort of normal.

I have a feeling Rita is going to hightail it out of Eagle Lake with Heinrich's money. Maybe this will prompt Rick to go into business by himself. I still hate zoltan more.

He was soooo upset at getting the extra arms. He doesn't seem too upset now.

One of the best wolf stories I've ever read. Mann is a master of suspense and tension. This was exciting and fun to read.

Great job! You write tension as well as anyone I've read before. I loved Sawyer's exuberance as a wolf. I agree that you have a good set-up for a sequel in the future.

I enjoyed the courtroom scene. Well-written and realistic.

It's too bad the mad scientist is dead. I would've liked to hear more about the changes in the future.

The stakes have been raised considerably. Now that they are on the world stage, I hope that Davey and Brian stay together.

I remember Davey agonizing over whether to tell his uncle he had the wrong year van part, now he's a major gay rights activist doing tv interviews!