CincyKris
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This is an incredibly well written roller coaster of a saga. JP collects a colorful band of strays over the course of this first book, but don't expect a smooth ride!
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I really enjoyed reading this first chapter. I'm almost afraid to read on, but of course I will.
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Chapter 5: Cyrus' Scourging
CincyKris commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 5: Cyrus' Scourging
It's so sad that his own family abused him on the most important day of his young life. But now he is becoming Alpha of one of the largest and most powerful packs in the U.S. As for Vincent and Mason, I think many of your readers are eagerly awaiting their full bonding. -
I was wondering when Jeff's downfall would start, because nothing in his personality indicated the issues he will face. Now I get it. Sadly.
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This story welcomes back old friends and introduces us to Lee. We get to follow his journey from abused, addicted sex worker to self reliance. This is a wonderful addition to the Camp Refuge saga.
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This was a great ending! It's amazing that you were able to make us feel like we already know and love these new characters! I certainly would appreciate a future story if you decide to.
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I love that JP has his own sense of right and wrong (regardless of whether others agree with it) and sticks to it no matter the consequences. We've also seen him act and speak in anger, then apologize when he feels he was in the wrong.
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I loved the chapter until the INS goon burst through the door. And Gus doesn't have his ID. This is going to cause all sorts of commotion.
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Cadet Third Class • III
CincyKris commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Cadet Third Class • III
I just started binging Mark Arbour's Chronicles of an Academic Predator this week. If you want lessons on killing off important characters, he's your man! -
Wow, just wow.
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He may not know the details, nor do I, but I think he knows that he will get hurt. He's just in too deep to avoid it.
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I find it interesting that the comments are so much more condemning for this chapter than the similar one with Mallory.
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Things are certainly heating up! I hope that Cyn doesn't get caught in the crossfire.
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I agree that the "spilling the perfume" was accidental. Maddie knows way more than she's letting on. Jimmy's letting his desperate need to protect his mate cause him to be sloppy. A week is such a long time!
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I am surprised it took this long for Essell to ask questions about the four-arms. I wish I didn't have to wait a whole week to find out what is wrong.
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Beautiful chapter. Thank you.
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I knew it was going to happen but I still cried. I have a feeling that Andre's death will be a defining moment in JP's life.
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I did not experience the Cuban missile crisis, but your description puts me there. I was 31 on 9/11/01 and remember being glued to the radio at work and the tv at home.
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Hopefully dear old dad fires Fred. I was impressed by Frank. I'm concerned about Andre.
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Such a fun chapter! JP seems to have a habit of picking up and fostering strays.
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I'm guessing that Stefan got caught with his English tutor. The scenes with Jeff seem bittersweet since I'm aware (due to the comments) that happiness is not in their future.
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I don't think of myself as cold and ruthless, but the world is better off without some people. An evil, abusive white supremacist is a good example.
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I would like to think that JP would have stopped if Mallory hadn't been so into it. Not sure if that's true or not, but it's a moot point, since Mallory loved every second.
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I enjoyed this well-written chapter. I liked how JP handled jensen, I hope he covers all the bases (and his ass) during his quest to vanquish the old malcontent.
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This was a very nice chapter. Such a beautiful scene between JP and Jeff.
