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Chapter 23 Cakes and caring
CincyKris commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Chapter 23 Cakes and caring
I just finished binge reading this wonderful story. Thank you for what you have written and I look forward to reading more when you feel ready to post. I'm going to read some more of your stories, especially about the angel & imp and a sexy guardian angel. -
Now that you mention it, Essell is very similar to a British colonialist explorer or adventurer. He has good intentions but a bit of the arrogance that justified their "discoveries" of things that existed for millennia. Hopefully his genetic modifications and superior technology will prevent the equivalent of smallpox blankets.
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Wow, that is pretty good security. I hope that Essell gets over his anger, for his and Garjah's sakes. I also hope that Garjah tries to be more sympathetic towards Essell's unique(?) circumstances. I definitely want to see this couple succeed.
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I was surprised the jamming was still in place, but happy they didn't have to kill Shevardnardze. We were never given the details regarding whether he approached the mad scientist to start the project, or the scientist approached Shevardnardze for funding. Hopefully the latter, so we don't have to worry about Shevardnardze searching Mad Scientists Are Us for a time machine. I'm intrigued by Davey and Brian's machinations inside Russia. It is reminiscent of Davey's small "nudges" in the second to last timeline that resulted in David Sr. becoming president.
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This is a funny, fast-paced, romantic story. Matt and Seamus will delight, excite, and frustrate you! Aidan is one of the best kid characters I've ever read.
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We can't forget the real reason these two are here. Shevardnardze has to be eliminated.
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I know they paid $100,000 for 2 kids, lied to everyone in their lives, and didn't bother to tell their kids they were adopted until they got caught by the DNA test. I don't think they knew the horrors their money was supporting, but there was no way they thought this was a normal adoption.
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Dr. Spencer Reid is one of my favorite characters of all time. I've wanted to try Death Wish for a while, but I'm too cheap to pay that much! I also scented a little lust in the air. I'm thinking the alpha might be into nerds. Camping might be a good way to lay low from humans, but Cyn is a lot more comfortable and confident in the woods than in a city. The bad guys will smell like the skunks that they are!
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Holy crap!!! I tried to put myself in Kyle's place as I was reading this. I couldn't even begin to put myself in Kim's place! First I'm thinking "how is Megan going to react to this", then "I can't believe the asshole parents bought them, they should be in jail", then it hit me -- Kyle's bio dad is the monster who started all this! Wow, that was a hell of a chapter!
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I can see more of "our" Davey in this chapter. This is exactly the type of activity that Davey would have thrived on. It also gives him a plausible reason for hanging around the Politburo. He may have been able to kill Shevardnardze on the originally planned trip with the Arizona school trip, but getting away with it would have been difficult. This way he can accomplish the ultimate goal secretly and the official goal will set him up with the agency for the future.
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What is that saying -- Prior planning prevents piss poor performance. They have that in spades. I have a good feeling about this one. I'm glad they are going to go their own way as couples for college. If this works, they have a long life ahead of them, they're going to need the skills that work for them to be successful.
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Shevardnardze hasn't ever developed a time machine with anyone other than our local mad scientist. Would killing Dr. Crazypants get rid of the threat for future timelines? They'd still need to off Shevardnardze prior to 1988. Hmmmm, how do we get 19 year olds into the USSR in the year I graduated high school? Hair metal band on a world tour???
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The optimism in me thinks that a team of 6 will be able to make more positive changes, especially since they are starting at age 12 (chronological). The pessimist thinks 6 is a lot to keep on track, especially since they are only 12 (hormone-wise). The realist is looking at only 7 remaining chapters and reasoning that we will finally have success for our boys!
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I would love a spin-off! I agree that more stories are needed with and for adults. Life (and libido) does not end at 40!
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Great chapter! I love Pete's attitude and comfort in his own skin. He doesn't judge others by their sex lives and doesn't understand why anyone should judge him. It's too bad that viewpoint isn't more universal. I look forward to reading more about Joe and Jake.
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It would be cool if they all went back, but it seems like someone needs to stay behind to keep anyone else from coming through.
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The Sean that came back is from the future of the current timeline. The mad scientist figured out the jamming and knew Sean was involved due to calculations he made in the cover-up.
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This again! And we don't have the Davey & Ronnie show up and going already. At least Sean saved the future again.
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We now know why Garjah was so against Bouncer in the beginning! The next chapter will be like a "meet the parents" moment on steroids.
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We finally have our guys focussing on the future, with their heads screwed on straight (fortunately other parts not so straight). Of course, Sandy is still Sandy, and sort of a lost cause. She is a special kind of crazy, equal parts selfish, stubborn, and homophobic. As much as I'm looking forward to the guys putting their plan into action, I'm also sad that we are only ten days away from this being over. What are we going to do with our mornings?!
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Davey is so much better off without his selfish, hateful mother in his daily life. But this is Davey, and he loves his mother and sister so much he was willing to put his life on hold for them. I think we're still in for a bumpy ride.
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This is an exciting, fast paced character study/adventure story. The author is equally adept at writing action, steamy sex, psychological tension, fantasy, and tourism guides! A great read for anyone who enjoys stories featuring realistic adult characters (yes, even though they are shifters). No angsty teenager warnings!
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This is a beautiful declaration of pride. Grab a Kleenex or two!
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Chapter 1 Never Surrender
CincyKris commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 1 Never Surrender
Thank you! Thank you for my big ugly tears (not just a little dampness in the eyes), first of sadness then of joy. This has been rough day, but you put things in perspective for me.- 48 comments
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Hot chapter! I'll miss Brandon as well, but I'm hoping we'll see him again in the future. He came to Australia hating half of himself, with a giant chip on his shoulder. He is leaving as a confident alpha, more at peace with his wolf than ever and gained some close friends for life.
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