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I enjoyed this chapter, it felt like an interlude between the shootings and promised political drama in our future (I am assuming things will not run smoothly). I liked that Danny became Daniel as the chapter progressed. Oh, and I didn't miss the line where Raymond said his mother even dated Jeff's father. Hmmmm?
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Danny and Raymond just cranked up the heat! I liked another reader comment about Joe running for mayor, great idea. I'm reading this many years after completion, so am fighting the urge to sit on the couch and binge-read this all day long!
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From the way Paul looked at Raymond Jeff and Joe, and the green eyes, I'm definitely guessing they are blood related. I'm also guessing we will have to wait for the answers. I'm loving the story.
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Fact: Someone should be hitting dat ass
CincyKris commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Fact: Someone should be hitting dat ass
Oh thank god!!! Matt is the most oblivious character that I have ever liked. I hope he gains self-confidence, or this will be a very unbalanced relationship. I have to remind myself that he is still only 21.- 50 comments
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Chapter 9: Seraphic Stunt
CincyKris commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 9: Seraphic Stunt
I suppose I have no choice but to be patient. I forgot to mention the whole weirdness with Vin sleepwalking? possession? with the feminine voice. What the hell? Doesn't our hero have enough on his plate? He's got 3 sparring matches, a challenge with a douchey enforcer, and let's not forget Stefan and evil mystery alpha hanging around in the background. -
Chapter 9: Seraphic Stunt
CincyKris commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 9: Seraphic Stunt
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I am another non-facebooker. Part of it is that I don't genuinely like very many people (certain GA authors excepted), and even if I do like them, I don't care that their poodle just got groomed or that they just drank a non-fat soy caramel macchiato. Back to the story, I am going to "listen to the perfect" and be happy that Rick is off the hook. Rita reeled in another sucker. If it turns out to be Willy, then I think the two are made for each other, both predators in their own ways.
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The first time I read this I cried buckets. This time I cried buckets! Still one of the best I've ever read.
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I hope Brandon's internal war ends in peace, even a cease-fire would be an improvement at this point. He couldn't have had a worse introduction to becoming lycan. After all he's been through, he's lucky to be alive.
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I read this several years ago on another site and remember it as being one the most emotional and complex stories I have ever read. I am thoroughly enjoying the re-read.
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Great chapter! They killed one of the traitors, Cyn gained a lot of confidence, and best of all, Cyn and Shea kissed!
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One of the best wolf stories / romances you will ever read. Rob is a master at creating sympathetic engaging characters.
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Great chapter, I love the verbal sparring between Seamus and Matt. I am encouraged by the little show of jealousy Seamus let out, maybe he's not just into older guys?
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One of the top five most satisfying chapters I've ever read! Perfect.
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Rereading after many years. This is still one of my all-time favorites! You have such a great ability to create sympathetic characters right off the bat.
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Chapter 8: Inquisitive Individual
CincyKris commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 8: Inquisitive Individual
I can't believe they stopped in Cincinnati and didn't stop by my house! I would have fed them lunch, hold the veggies. I hate bullies, but I hope that Wagner doesn't get so alienated that he ends up hooking up with the evil mystery alpha. He could cause big problems! I'm happy for Dave, hope Stacy is an animal lover! -
I think Palm Beach might be a little too close to you!!!
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Add me to the list, I'm hooked. I really liked the conversation between Matt and his dad, very touching.
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I have a very bad feeling Rita spread some seriously inaccurate information about them. But, on the positive side, Rick is out to another person he's not involved with. And she took it well. Big step!
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I really liked this chapter, Cyn is getting more and more confident. He's in his element and not trying to adjust to the human world.
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I knew it! I wish I didn't have to work so I could have read this earlier. Stupid job! I love that Maddie is a wolf, although a long dormant one. Let's not forget that Jimmy hasn't bitten Sawyer yet, no one knew he was an alpha, not even him. Hopefully he can turn Sawyer and Jada into regular shifters.
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We humans rely so much on emotions and nonverbal communication. It must be difficult for Essell to communicate on an even level with the Spock-like (thanks Dr.) Garjah.
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Why would anyone transport a propane tank (available anywhere in the world) from Florida, traceable to himself, to the Mediterranean, but buy bomb components locally and blow up his kids boat in very visible location (instead of the open sea). I can't imagine any cop not seeing through this.
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Great chapter! I hope Cyn gets to run in the next chapter, I bet his buck misses it.
