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All the drama made me forget to mention two things. Just what is Harlan up to? And, it's nice to hear the houseboat is still floating around.
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I have read your previous stories so I'm pretty sure we'll be happy with ending, but you're putting us through hell to get there. A tiny little part of me wishes you weren't such a good writer and gave us an easier ride. But a bigger part of me knows it will all be worth it. Thank you.
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I really like your treatment of Cyn and his culture. It's almost like an alien culture or an ancient pulled out of their time and plopped down into the 21st century. Very cool.
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Loved the chapter, especially the ending. But, I can't help but worry about what Heinrich is so happy about. He's so smug, it's like he knows it's going to piss off Rick and that makes him happy. What kind of father does that?!
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Beautiful chapter. Cyn is reminiscent of an abused or neglected child or teen. It's going to take awhile for him to get the self confidence it will take for him to be ready for a relationship. It's a joy to see him grow into the person he should be.
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I first read this story on another sight and loved it. I think I love it even more now. GA feels more like a community, since we can contribute comments and read others opinions and thoughts. Wayne created a community for his characters that was loving, safe, and freeing. This story gives hope for the future.
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Sure! No sadistic glee from the author at all???😈
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Great chapter! It felt like a lot of progress was made. Harlan's interest is intriguing, and he is connected to a certain restaurant owner in Idaho.
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Thanks for the shout out! It looks like Shea has finally been able to chip away at Cyn's wall a little. I'm interested in Cyn's background, both as a deer and as a human. We know he has lived an isolated life and has suffered some trauma, but what does he do for a living? Your comment about school nerds resembling chipmunks got me wondering what kind of job prey shifters would favor.
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I have a feeling that our author will not let our tragic heroes sneak off without a confrontation with Fergus. I foresee cliffies in our future!
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Great chapter! This seems like a large organized pack with a complex hierarchy. Having an enforcer breaking your laws could have big ripple effects. Will Cyn and Shea hit it off? Sounds like they're going to be spending a lot of time together.
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I loved this story! One of Headstall's best. If you like action, love, nature, and complex social relationships, this story is for you. I envy future readers ability to binge read this pageturner!
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Chapter 31: Feral Fight
CincyKris commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 31: Feral Fight
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Very exciting start! This alpha means business. Can't wait till he and the mystery wolf meet. Cyn reminds me of an abused child, afraid of everyone and everything. He needs a lot more than just physical healing.
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My hope is that Lee, Avery, and Jeremy will eventually feel worthy of accepting other people's love. Lee has the biggest hill to climb, but Avery (who spends time in his room to give Bill and Anna a break from himself), and Jeremy (who has a mini panic attack after getting Clay's approval) still have a ways to go, also.
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Aaron's Humble Beginning
CincyKris commented on astone2292's story chapter in Aaron's Humble Beginning
I have been to the park as a kid, although I'm sure it has changed a little since the seventies! I looked up the little grocery store -- yes they do have a website! Hoople's loaded potato salad only $2.49 😋 -
Chapter 10: Shimmering Stars
CincyKris commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 10: Shimmering Stars
The woodland amphitheater reminds me (minus the lake) of the amphitheater in Berea Kentucky. I've been there many times to attend the artisan festival held there. -
I love the start!! I can't believe how quickly you went from offhand comment to full story! Your mind is a mysterious thing.
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Chapter 9: Tender Tears
CincyKris commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 9: Tender Tears
Loved the chapter! I teared up for Chris and Dave, laughed with Caleb and Vincent, and loved Elaine. I was sipping bourbon while reading about the guys sharing bourbon. -
I loved this chapter. I have to admit, I disliked Thomas so much after the last couple of chapters that I was hoping he would be retired from our cast. I'm still on team Jared, but I have at least a small modicum of sympathy for Thomas. I think that prior to moving in together, a couple (gay, straight, or anything in between) should discuss their expectations of faithfulness. As for Edward, I think his prior performance experience served him well! Fun chapter 😄
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It's going to be sad saying goodbye to my cowboy friends, I will miss them. I love that when Coy makes a decision, he's all in. His practicality made a potentially awkward conversation into an exercise of intimacy. I can't imagine a situation that would break these two apart.
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Chapter 1: Dark Discoveries
CincyKris commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 1: Dark Discoveries
I love the start! I have an affinity for wolf shifter stories. Headstall's Morningstar Malaise is my favorite. Robcub and Mann Ramblings have great ones, too. Just once, I'd like to see a deer shifter story, they're out for revenge! -
Your Breakfast is My Dinner
CincyKris commented on astone2292's story chapter in Your Breakfast is My Dinner
I worked night shift for a short time, right out of college (almost 30 years ago) and found the sleep schedule very difficult. My dad worked at a small factory and preferred working the night shift. I believe he also found it peaceful, and generally lacking in bosses. I work retail in southwestern Ohio, so I can identify with both your location and experiences. How many times have you been asked "do you work here?" while wearing at least 2 company logos AND a nametag? -
Jared would be crazy to allow Thomas back in. He still doesn't seem to be remorseful for cheating, only for getting caught.
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The angry icon is directed at Thomas, not at the author (who wrote wonderfully, as always). I have absolutely no moral issues with having an open or semi-open relationship, but that should have been discussed with his partner prior to straying. Jared should know what he's getting into. Perhaps living with the Prices has skewed his view of "normal".
