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Cadet Second Class • I
CincyKris commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Cadet Second Class • I
Exciting chapter! Did you name Heinrich after Jr or Sr? I need to know whether or not to like this vehicle. -
Thank you so much! I've been waiting for this for so long. I think there is no question in Rick's mind that Gus is the best thing that ever happened to him. I think he would be shocked that Gus may feel the same. If I am having a frustrating day at work, I'm going to try to listen to the perfect and ignore the flaws.
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Loved the chapter! The tables have certainly turned on Essell, the investigator has become the investigated.
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Wow! Wow! Wow! I don't think anyone expected that. Mann is the master of surprises! The clean-up is going to be massive (literally and figuratively).
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Wow, I'm guessing the Alpha doesn't go on many missions like this. No pressure Shea, just lead the mission to track the traitor with your new love -and- your Alpha along for the hunt.
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Home. You captured the tension throughout the chapter wonderfully, then ended with such a beautiful word. Thank you.
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😋 I love stuffing!
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The deer have already eaten all my acorns, but I'm absolutely going to try them this fall! I think it's very brave of Cyn to go on the tracking expedition, even if his main impetus is to stay with Shea. Do it scared!
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I agree that it seems Maddie is complicit, but I'm wondering if our evil author might be throwing us a red herring. I think I need to go medicate to relieve the tension. You're driving me to drink!!!
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Perhaps he should find out what they call themselves, rather than calling them "four arms", now that he is one!!!! I love this twist!
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I loved the chapter! There must be more than one mole for Walt to have heard something. It's great that he's loyal, seems to be smart.
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It's too bad you don't live about a hundred miles to the NW. My company (a garden center and grower) is hiring and needs people like you (smart, fast, and hardworking). Good luck!
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I'm enjoying Stef's point of view and I'm happy that he is finding fulfillment.
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Thank heavens I don't have to work tomorrow because it's now 2:00 AM. I just couldn't stop reading. I was born in 1970, so I wasn't around yet, but 1968 sounds as bad as 2020! Even though this book was so sad, you managed to end it so hopefully. Great job!
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This is an incredibly well written roller coaster of a saga. JP collects a colorful band of strays over the course of this first book, but don't expect a smooth ride!
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I really enjoyed reading this first chapter. I'm almost afraid to read on, but of course I will.
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Chapter 5: Cyrus' Scourging
CincyKris commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 5: Cyrus' Scourging
It's so sad that his own family abused him on the most important day of his young life. But now he is becoming Alpha of one of the largest and most powerful packs in the U.S. As for Vincent and Mason, I think many of your readers are eagerly awaiting their full bonding. -
I was wondering when Jeff's downfall would start, because nothing in his personality indicated the issues he will face. Now I get it. Sadly.
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This story welcomes back old friends and introduces us to Lee. We get to follow his journey from abused, addicted sex worker to self reliance. This is a wonderful addition to the Camp Refuge saga.
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This was a great ending! It's amazing that you were able to make us feel like we already know and love these new characters! I certainly would appreciate a future story if you decide to.
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I love that JP has his own sense of right and wrong (regardless of whether others agree with it) and sticks to it no matter the consequences. We've also seen him act and speak in anger, then apologize when he feels he was in the wrong.
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I loved the chapter until the INS goon burst through the door. And Gus doesn't have his ID. This is going to cause all sorts of commotion.
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Cadet Third Class • III
CincyKris commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Cadet Third Class • III
I just started binging Mark Arbour's Chronicles of an Academic Predator this week. If you want lessons on killing off important characters, he's your man! -
Wow, just wow.
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He may not know the details, nor do I, but I think he knows that he will get hurt. He's just in too deep to avoid it.
