CincyKris
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One of the best wolf stories I've ever read. Mann is a master of suspense and tension. This was exciting and fun to read.
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Great job! You write tension as well as anyone I've read before. I loved Sawyer's exuberance as a wolf. I agree that you have a good set-up for a sequel in the future.
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I enjoyed the courtroom scene. Well-written and realistic.
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It's too bad the mad scientist is dead. I would've liked to hear more about the changes in the future.
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The stakes have been raised considerably. Now that they are on the world stage, I hope that Davey and Brian stay together.
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I remember Davey agonizing over whether to tell his uncle he had the wrong year van part, now he's a major gay rights activist doing tv interviews!
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Davey's mom keeps going up in my estimation. The social services director, the opposing principle, and the school board members not so much.
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Ok maybe she's not completely useless. I still don't understand parents who choose a spouse over their own children (who are innocent of wrongdoing). Loved the romantic ending.
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Well that went better than most child removals. I'm worried about Jenny. Now that her protector is gone, will her dad try to molest her again? Mom seems somewhat useless.
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Like most brainwashed people, she won't realize she was wrong until she loses her relationship with her child.
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Wow. Maybe he just saved his sister's life.
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Ok, so now we have a stadium full of fluttering butterflies!
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Wow, I did not expect that. I'm glad he told them. Even though he was making positive changes to his life, he had to have felt alone and isolated. We don't always make the best decisions when there are no checks and balances.
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One of the great things about time travel stories is that there are so many possible outcomes and possibilities and no one can prove or verify anything. As an author, you have free reign. Loving the story.
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It sounds like he's making huge changes regarding himself and his family. The real question is how far reaching these changes will be.
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I'm reading this for the first time. I saw the sequel on the new stories page and it looked intriguing, but one can't read the sequel before the original. I really enjoyed the first chapter.
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This entertaining saga is set in the same town as Gordy Comes Home and TR's Tale. We meet several unforgettable new characters and catch up with a few old friends. Warning: this is addictive, you will need to carve out some time to binge read!
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I thoroughly enjoyed the ENTIRE story! Thank you for writing it. I hope that you eventually write Winston's story.
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Wow, there was a lot going on in that chapter. They finally had an actual conversation, which is good, but I don't think either is on the same page yet. I guess I'm less frustrated by Matt, but I still think he's stubbornly holding on to "typical college kid". That ship has sailed! In his head, he is the college kid who is raising his brother. In reality, he is an adult who is now a parent. Aidan needs a dad (or two), not a big bro. There are a lot of "non-traditional" college students, some by choice and some by circumstance. I don't think Matt has truly made the transition to adulthood/parenthood. As for the Kelly bombshell, it does add a lot of complexity to my view of Seamus.
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I've read several stories set in Australia, but never visited the katoomba (virtually). The pictures look amazing. I hope the fires didn't devastate it.
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I'm very much enjoying this story, whether it focuses on Jeff and Paul, Raymond and Daniel, or the princess. I just checked the views -- over 2400. Still not enough, but a lot better than 3 years ago. This is a hidden gem!
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Chapter 10: Delinquent Deity
CincyKris commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 10: Delinquent Deity
Ok, so these gods have their version of the "prime directive" but they like to flirt with the rules. Hopefully none of them prefer Italian to southern cooking! -
Men. They are un-understandable
CincyKris commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Men. They are un-understandable
On my god, did I already say Matt was oblivious last chapter? I need another word for most oblivious to the millionth degree!!!! He just casually dropped the info that he's leaving with Aidan for the whole summer - AND - moving out when he gets back to the guy that's in love with him, in love with aidan, and is Aidan's primary 24/7 caretaker. Why would he be upset? Seriously? I'm starting to think the differences in their maturity levels are too much for them to make this relationship work.- 37 comments
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I am sooooo glad I didn't have time to read this before going to work this morning! I am mad at Zoltan, mad at Heinrich, sad for Rick, sad for Gus. On one hand, you have me all discombobulated so I'm mad at you, on the other hand, you have me caring so much for these characters I love you. I'm going to go eat dinner and calm down.
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You were preaching to the choir 😁! I am a self-confessed liberal heathen, which makes me quite the minority in my very conservative county. My mom and sister both go to a moderately liberal church (no hate speech, more love your neighbor type preaching). I have no issues with them and they have no issues with me. I think my moral compass is as strong as theirs, I just don't believe in their mythology.
