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So maybe Rob isn't completely stupid.
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Can poor Rob really be that stupid? He is in love with Elizabeth, so I guess so.
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Right again! Maybe?
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I went back and re-read the previous chapter. Jim didn't admit to killing Cynthia, only to fill Marcy. So, who killed Cynthia and kidnapped and tortured White? Mullen?
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So this all comes back to Cale's asshole father. Wonder what he did to Jim all those years ago?
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Yay!!! I love guessing the killer before they're revealed.
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First, I want to agree with an earlier comment. I don't understand why no one reacted to or commented on this story for so many years. It's engrossing, fast paced, a really good mystery. Second, I'm now leaning towards Jim as the killer. He could have deleted the message on drew's machine. He's probably hiding the strange vehicle in his garage.
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Heinrich Sr. is a classic micromanager. They don't believe anyone knows as much, can do as much, or do anything correctly other than them. They tend to make up their minds about people quickly and it's nearly impossible to change their opinions through good behavior. I've had bosses like this (thankfully not ones I'm related to), and the only way to escape this kind of tyranny is to move on. I know Rick has strong roots, a house, old friends, but I don't see him coming into his own in this town, with this father/boss.
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Chapter 6 Cloudy Thinking
CincyKris commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 6 Cloudy Thinking
I love that I have Mondays off work! "Morning afters" are often difficult. Whether it's a morning after a fight, sex, or big decisions, you have to pick up the pieces and readjust your life. As much as I want to see these two together, I still think a separation is the best choice for both of them. It was interesting to see their roles reversed in this conversation. Coy is already starting to become stronger. Great chapter!- 72 comments
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Chapter 5 Straight Shootin'
CincyKris commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 5 Straight Shootin'
I can't imagine being as completely alone as Coy is now. Referencing the bible quote at the beginning of the chapter, at least Boone has some hope for his future. That's why he's moving on. Coy has just been reacting to loss after loss. But, maybe he needs this separation to be an independent person for the first time in his life. Tough love. -
Chapter 5 Straight Shootin'
CincyKris commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 5 Straight Shootin'
Sad but necessary chapter. This is reminiscent of best friends separating after graduating high school. Some go to college, some go into the military, some travel, many just stay and work. It seems easier to find yourself in a sea of newness than in the same kiddie pool you've been in most of your life. I can't help but hope they find their way back to each other after they've found their way around themselves first.- 96 comments
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So, we know that the rougue either works at or does business at the bank, but this is the pack's chosen bank branch, so most of the pack may have been at the bank. He also uses the rest stop as hunting ground. If Sawyer was able to get more access to the pack members, I think he might be able to sniff out the rougue. I have a feeling we have already met him. This is a great combo of a murder mystery, romance, and sci-fi. I love the tension.
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I'm loving this story, as I have your previous stories. I fell in love with Larry McMurtry's writing many years ago and I enjoy your writing just as much. Your ability to create realistic characters and engaging storylines and inject romance, without becoming a cloying mess, is a genuine talent and is much appreciated.
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Fergus has been the alpha for over 50 years, so too old to be a brother. But father, maybe. Sawyer's mom definitely has some skeletons in the closet.
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As the alpha, shouldn't Fergus recognize the scent of one of his pack?
