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I also only recently discovered a month or so ago that you can privately message someone...You press on the author's name and then you will see the message icon.

Must have been fun ...

Whoa .I want to be like you when I grow up😂😂😂

Sorry to hear about the power issue..here in Uganda,we get those that we are used to them..part of life. Hopefully it was/will be resolved soon That being said, this was a beautiful but nerve wrecking chapter.Tried to imagine the head space you were in while writing the scene of Dallas and JJ falling in the water and their escape from what could have turned into tragedy had it not been JJ's quick thinking and resilience. Thank you!

Careful Sir,lest you fall foul of GA rules😂😂😂😂

It's 7:43 a.m where I am. Am sure you will find a way in the evenings when you can...That being said if it's vacation time..please make sure you enjoy yourself!

Gabe. The perfect protagonist for a supernatural tale...Lonely with repressed feelings...that's definitely it. Thank you!

Maybe...but notice that Enrico is starting to make mistakes . And those tend to pile up on your eventually. Before he was working in the shadows ..but with his latest move now he is out in the open so to speak ..it doesn't help that Templeman had already started his hunt..

Good morning Sir, And a great day you have definitely started for us with this marvelous chapter ..Gregory Templeman in this chapter was Jason Bourne come alive😂😂....and my Enrico is something else!

Welcome to the 'I want to smack some sense into Lynton' Club...both in the past and the present,Lyn chooses the self denial mechanism...like you said, it's better to hide behind a lie than face the truth

Oh please do not get us...at least me wrong. The fact that I get so ruffled is because this is such a good story....Good stories elicit such reactions 😂😂😂...they become part of us

I have been waiting for this....like forever.....now gonna count the seconds till it 'premieres'...

Oh dear!..me have programmed myself to sleep late on Friday(Liar Vs Liar), Saturday(Misaligned) and Sunday(WITC)...now am off to sleep..almost midnight here .😂

It's good to have you back sir!...am guessing Lord Inspiration hit you and the result is this chapter😂.. This part below had me almost pulling my hair out though.😂😂....I had to read that part thrice just so to believe I was seeing right...and then I thought of you and was like you must have 'laughed' at yourself while writing that particular bit...It was at that moment that I sort of 'gave up' on Calvin ..and mourned my Calvin/Jordan loss😂😂 Thank you for 'coming ' back ...

Now that you mention it, I remembered our family doctor growing up always seemed to have some bit of liquor in him..

Wait..surgeons are heavy drinkers?.I had no idea...eh

I had almost forgotten this ..Thank you @Cane23...I like to believe that was the moment our Lyn 'fell' line,hook and sinker indeed.

Hugo did indeed not do himself with any favours....for a moment I thought you are giving us the 19th Century version of Fifty shades of Grey😂😂

Oh God!...you outdid yourself with this one sir...It was epic!.I don't know if you have telepathy but yesterday was thinking it was high time Hugo dispensed with high Superior attitude,snobbishness and disrespect when it came to Stoker.. It was grating on my nerves seriously. I figured folks really acted like that during that era but damn they are ,to borrow a quote, 'Not in Kansas in anymore'..So there were equals because they were both in a situation which didn't bother with class differences.. You must have had a great time writing that scene .😂😂 Thank you!

Honesty has always gone hand in hand with sourness anyway 😂😂.. When was reading your analysis earlier ..I could not help but wonder if Lyn was just naive, had a low esteem, was pretentious or all three of them when he was in college...

I have maintained ,so far,that Alexander always brings the sweetness when it comes to Lyn😂

I do not know why I always find myself 'unhealthily' empathising with characters ..in this case it is Robbie. He has given himself fully to someone who is only treating him as a place holder..Someone who is just using him because he cannot get the person he wants at the moment .. That makes Eddie selfish and an asshole ..He has had time to let down Robbie easily but his cowardice and selfishness makes him keep leading on the young lad on. I understand that this story is about identity and awakening but God are these men making such bad decisions..eh. At least Harry and Charles have taken steps to accept that they really are not heterosexual...even though they are doing the tires DL thing.. Eddie honestly elicited disappointment and irritation in me...I am like he is of a certain age, when one is expected to know and do better. @Tony S....see how you got me ranting..😂...This is how your story has got me engaged . Thank you and am going to restlessly wait for the next chapter update Blessed weekend to you!

Just watch from the periphery perhaps..😂

I dont seem to think so ...I might be wrong, but didn't they come after Carter was already on the submarine?

Not hesitation on my part..😂..Think about it, if you skipped to 14 years to the future you will be driving yourself into a corner. You will be driven to write a sequel when you are not ready to write one putting unnecessary pressure onto yourself