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What is your vision?..Maybe you can outline the options and get the opinions
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God forbid!...you would endlessly beat yourself over it.😂
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I do not think Noah is really in asshole territory..I am inclined to think that he was used to getting sex easily and when he finds himself in a situation where the sex is off the the table, he has no idea how to deal with it.. As for manipulation, Nick does not come off Scott free here....he might not be aware of it but he has had his fair share of emotional manipulation of Jack. Nick was yearning for attention and validation...you notice how he tries so hard not to fall out with any of his friends?....i feel like that is why he is making all those mistakes because he did not really have friends.. loneliness can make even the wisest of folks make stupid decisions
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Eh...why do.we seem to share sentiments...the volleyball scene is my third favourite too😂😂 I think you quite outdid yourself here Maestro...your analysis on that volley ball game...it was indeed a war going on without any of the combatants knowing they were in a war .
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Of course it's @chris191070....his ideas are always randomly risque😉😂
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I think you interchanged the names...it's Davin who joined him....Gavin was with Colt.. I agree...at this moment Joel needs someone his age he can talk to.
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Chapter 8: Noah makes a choice. Will everything be okay now?
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 8: Noah makes a choice. Will everything be okay now?
Like anything is ever going to stop me from getting tuned in....been with you since the beginning..😂😉 -
Chapter 8: Noah makes a choice. Will everything be okay now?
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 8: Noah makes a choice. Will everything be okay now?
When you reading a story from the Vanalas Universe ....that's a given.. -
Chapter 8: Noah makes a choice. Will everything be okay now?
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 8: Noah makes a choice. Will everything be okay now?
Not this time...no..I understand actually ..This chapter sort of let's the foundation of the synopsis : Everything that happened is mentioned above...so today am on Team Vanalas😂 -
Chapter 8: Noah makes a choice. Will everything be okay now?
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 8: Noah makes a choice. Will everything be okay now?
I knew it was too good to last...my solace is our Noah is not to blame for the choices made this night!. Elijah,Matteo and Jace are the villains of this episode For the first time ever..I have no complaint. @vanalas...now I find myself wishing had the power to turn time ..such that next week comes by in a blink and the next chapter updates drop. I am really grateful for this...Thank you! -
Am opening up a Nicky Bashing Club because I don't think can handle him much longer😂😂😂 This boy needs whack so he can get some sense into his head ..I know ...but please let me rant😂😂 Thank you for the update..
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You have a knack for always seeing the silver lining😂
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That's the hubris..am referring to 😂😂😂....he overestimates himself ..not knowing he is also just another person's tool.
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I just realised I did not fully complete my thought .Here in my country, males are non-tactile unless it is with the opposite gender. I don't know who set those unwritten rules to be honest..I am personally a tactile person.That being said, I was wrong in thinking the same standard applies else where.
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Well, every terrorist thinks they are doing the right thing..Their thoughts are so warped that they never consider that their actions against their 'perceived' targets leave behind a lot of despair and suffering. What makes it really makes it even bleaker here is that Enrico acknowledges his actions are wrong ..but he will not stop.
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I concur with you in regards to Davin.. in this chapter he comes off as someone who is perceptive and astute..I like to think he subverts the image that Joel had of him in his mind .Am inclined to believe even Cody and Gavin are like that. They just have not yet got a chance to talk to him one on one fully. The part about Joel feeling so isolated that he thinks he cannot be able to sleep was just so hard to read ..It is sad.
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I think it was subtle....the interaction with Joel there shows Davin is someone who is tactile .Not to mention that part where he states he has his own secrets with that solemn tone to Joel ...I personally surmised that he is definitely not as straight and narrow .I could be wrong.
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When I read the part where Enrico and Ezra were having that conversation....I could not help but think delusion does get even the best of us. The road to hell is indeed paved with good intentions ...Only in this case Enrico's 'good intentions' have a tinge of vengeance and deep rooted resentment' added in for good measure. In his mind,Enrico believes he is doing the right thing...but we the readers know he is actually doing the wrong thing.
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This chapter was intense. If I were a therapist, Joel would be one hell of a client..It saddens me that he has mentally and emotionally sequestered himself lest people see what he is...That can make someone unravel completely like we saw him in the first chapter. No words ever sounded truer than these uttered by Davin Joel is going to have to learn to try to meet people half way which is a tall order given how his own Mother and Brother could just discard him so easily .
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I like to think they are friendly..Colt,Davin and Gavin that is.. It's just Joel who is 'standoffish' and that tends to make people hesitant in reaching out . I think Joel is doing what he has been doing above for the last 8 years..Harken back to his conversation with Trace...He said he has been keeping people at bay since he was 10 when he started having same-sex attraction..At least that is what I discerned from that conversation..I could be wrong though .
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I would like to believe that Templeman has figured him out..Enrico that is.On the other hand, Enrico has no idea that the noose is about to tighten around him....there is that phrase I usually see used in spy movies... He is no longer in the shadows. Someone out there now knows of him,even though they do not yet that it's Enrico. It is only a matter of time. Not to mention Templeman has already gotten a full read of Enrico...That there is a weakness especially if your enemy is as intelligent as you are.
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Sinclair's hubris just might his undoing.. He is someone who doesn't understand human behaviour..To him, humans are just to be used and discarded when they have outlived their usefulness . Harken back to his confrontation with Jared..his power has deluded him into thinking he is smarter than everyone else.
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Chapter 7: Noah may have bitten more than he could chew!
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 7: Noah may have bitten more than he could chew!
Your version of joyful crying is something else 😂😂.. In case I had not done so before....am personally grateful that you update twice in a week.. -
Chapter 7: Noah may have bitten more than he could chew!
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 7: Noah may have bitten more than he could chew!
When I saw that zinger...I knew we were in for a world of frustration and hair pulling in the coming few weeks..😂 -
Is it me or does Shane Novak give off major Inspector Benoit Blanc of the Knives out fame? The guy is just so analytical ...it's almost scary to read
