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Poor Rory!...must be pretty sad if your parents don't give a damn about you😏

Been worth the wait!...am glad stayed up till 1:15 am my local time to read it .I noticed you have planted seeds for sequels(Holden/Elion or the children of DeSh and RoKei) if you ever want to continue in the Arcum universe! Thank you!

Each time I feel like you cannot surprise me anymore in your works ...you pull of an epic stunt like this one..and my was it a surprise!. I am of the mind to nominate you for the award of Best User of Chekhov 's gun..😂😉 When you introduced the lawyer, I knew he had to be someone of vital importance to introduce him so late in the story. Not to mention when Hearst hired his services,I knew he was here for the long haul...good to know was vindicated😂😂😂... Thank you so much for this ..I have a feeling we are entering the twilight of this tale.

Here comes the King of double entendres😂😂... I was talking about JJ...who is open minded and can listen.

I have a confession to make...When I started reading this story, was kind of skeptical about its premise. It starts off as a voyeuristic undertaking of Alarik's Then you introduced Justin. Afterwards you gave us Alex/Wolf and then the relationship between the 3 men in the last three chapters. It has been so riveting but this chapter is something else entirely..It is a gem..it's one of my most favourite.. the one where Alex 'confronts' Alarik tops this one...barely!. This story is a case study of how friendship between gay folks should be.Well in an ideal world. Friends are meant to talk to and listen to each other the way it is here... Unfortunately in our community, that is something that does not happen much. That being said, I find I do not really care that much anymore that Alarik is not romantically involved with either Alex/Wolf or Justin. I just like that they are friends who genuinely care about each other.. I used to clamour for the Alex/Alarik pairing, in my head of course😂😂. Now can't wait for the next chapter update to come along.lol Thank you and hopefully you have a great weekend ahead!

This chapter nearly broke me...It validated what I have always believed. That adulthood is a scam we are never prepared for when we are young😂.. What makes it hard in this chapter is that, the villain this chapter is an abstract entity... Responsibility. Noah has been so swamped with responsibilities that he has inadvertently created an opening for turmoil in his life .....reading this line below ..was just so hard.. In that moment I was like...what have you done Noah?.... Basically this chapter was about adults making bad decisions. Jace , keeping his past with Matteo a secret...that right there is bad news. Noah, through no fault of his,naively thinking his new role at work would not clash with his fatherly and spousal role. Matteo, trying to renew friendship with an old friend whose spouse he is yearning for. I think this chapter should have been named 'Adults making really bad decisions' . Reading this monologue below ..was just so hard.. In that moment I was like...what have you done Noah?....

Now that you mention it..it does indeed seem like Hugo has a bit of an advantage.He has the benefit of education and History which Stoker seems to lack.

Deeper down the rabbit hole they go😂😂...I can only imagine how ruffled both youths must have felt being in the other's timeline.

It sure does...perhaps that is what the title of the story refers to ..

I wish such more conversations happened in real life too ...a lot of folks would be be better for it Dallas seems to be having his own ish going on,me thinks

Why do I get this feeling of de javu about that escaped thug!?..

Okay..I concur there on the first part The naive bit.I feel he is overly idealistic.The type that only believes in absolutes. No grey areas for him..😂

Am guessing even you shocked yourself 😂.... Am glad to know you are at least know what the issue and are getting the medical assistance required .

Do not think it will be long...not if it is Gregory Templeman on his tail now ..He is coming after him with the full weight of M15 apparatus

Oh God!..my heart skipped a beat when saw that line!..in my head I imagined the concept coming alive.. harkened back to when I read Tolkien 's ainulindalë😂😂....Please be our Creator .

Okay...am going to try and sue your partner😂😂😂...How can he not like Franz😂😂

Wait..are there people who find Franz not likeable?. I always found the four lads compliment each other.. Like their friendship defies logic to begin with and yet they really compliment each other....Josel 's impulsiveness and need for attention , Bartos 's calm and diplomatic nature, Franz's seriousness and Darren's carefree attitude coalesce.😂...That's just me though!. P.s...Will Darren also get his own POV at some point?

We all do...some of us want to even enter the book and shake some sense into Nick lad😂...Not that I condone violence😂

I just want to say this chapter was a gem...and you have written gems before..Elion and Holden was just so great. What made it even more beautiful for me was their coupling. By not going into detail of their intimacy, like you have done for the other two couples before, you made their coupling beautiful and sacred!. That is the beauty of revealing little ...it makes it more profound! Thank you for this update...Blessed Friday to you! P.s...Hope you are faring a little better today ?

Series 3 has been going at a slow pace @Lupus till you hit us with this gem of a chapter. I have just re-read it thrice ..just to make sure am not dreaming . This chapter is not just a dearth of information....it subtly connects all the characters..without them being in the same location. You even subtly hinted that Franz might have the Might 😂👍.. Now I finally and fully understand what you meant before. That the pacing might be slow...but everything is inter-connected.. Am just so in awe. Thank you and now find myself wishing was a time turned so that Next Thursday was here sooner .

Your updates are actually my wake up alarm.hihi...The notification alert on my phone usually wakes me up.. Thank you! That being said ....I learnt something from this chapter..I have always wondered about this statement .'Man proposes, God disposes'.I always thought it was a little naive till I read this chapter. Enrico planned everything to the last detail, so confident in his 'invisibility' and yet if this chapter is anything to go by he will be undone by a small detail that skipped his notice. A camera !!. Oh Ezra Reed, you poor lad!...reading Ezra is reminds me of Marianne Dashwood of the Sense and Sensibility fame.. Thank you @Topher Lydon for a story that is equally entertainment and education for me! Blessed day!

Oh...am not going anywhere ..you can count on that😂...Years ago when I had discovered Nifty archives...there is a story that I read there..it was such a dark tale that more than a decade later I shudder when I remember it. I know I have said it countless times ..but kudos to you. Usually stories here almost always culminate in happy ending for the main characters.. I find myself just hoping for healing for Peter,Lucian and Daniel. In my opinion that is the Happily Ever After for them...

Sorry...basic addition got past me😂 The reason am not that frustrated is because my solace lies in the fact that this is the tale of Nicky and Jack. So will just have to just hang in there 😂😂😂

Well...we got more 22 chapters to go.. so buckle up😂😂..So we ought to prepare to be pissed off to no end