Seraph28
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I like how you come up with some stuff ,out of the blue like this ,sometimes๐๐ Except Elion was forced into that life of priesthood....he was mistreated and never had a choice
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That's the mixed signals was talking about in my comment ....He was definitely jealous...but personally I don't think the jealous was towards their earlier coupling...at least not yet .I think his jealous must be towards the fact that they seem to be getting closer...Notice they(Lyn and Alexander) have not exchanged any barbs during the whole volleyball match setting?..Brad seems like someone who revels in attention being focused on him...so seeing that Lyn has not been his usual fawning self...that must have triggered something fierce in Brad hence his weird reactions....At least that is what I think.
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They are a real hoot indeed!
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A succession of unexpected events
Seraph28 commented on Thomas Lindblad's story chapter in A succession of unexpected events
The tough love mentor role Alarik has taken on is nice ...young ones can have volatile emotions ..๐ Thank you! -
Chapter 5: Twists and turns!
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 5: Twists and turns!
More like the Devil's incarnate in designer clothes .. -
Am telling you...was thinking Luke better tone it down....good thing he seems a himbo๐
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Chapter 5: Twists and turns!
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 5: Twists and turns!
Oh @vanalas ..I cannot even๐.. I knew it was too good to be true...that Jace would be safe from temptation...but just as I was having my victory lap, the telenovela demon goes and possesses you and we end up here.With the best-friends-in-love with- the -same-man trope!..๐๐Have you decided that you want us to go to bed with frustration and elevated high blood pressure each time you update?๐๐....I am starting to think you are just the male version of Nurse Ratched from One that flew over a cuckoo's nest๐๐ To quote Ennis del Mar from Broke back Mountain....'I wish I knew how to quit you'๐๐ Thank you for the update ...even though you are too much -
I guess we will have to wait and see... But Brad...eh.That lad is something else...the mixed signals would drive me crazy!
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Please don't indulge him
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See?...looking for justification..๐๐.. It would be a disservice to the character of Elion...honestly...he has just discovered he can be his own man...kissed a boy for the first time and is just starting to come into his queerness(fits and steps)....you having them have sex just seems rushed ....but like I said before ..at the end of the day ,you are the Author...and we your humble readers .
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Same point really...it will just be sex for the sake of sex..someone mentioned that
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That's all we can ask for ...shit has been done in his name by that church
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Am starting to think you just like stirring things up for the sake of it๐๐...I like them..but really it will will forced ...you took time to build up to the sex scenes with DeSh and RoKei....so when their sex scenes did finally come ...they had been earned. Including a Holden/Elion sex scene will make it seem like you are grifting for ideas๐๐. P.s....I am inclined to believe you have already made your decision...you only asking us so that you can justify your decision to include it๐๐๐๐
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Morning chat & evening liaison
Seraph28 commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Morning chat & evening liaison
Here in my country ....knickers is what we use for the female underpants . -
Nah.. I feel like Des has outgrown that ..He has gotten agency which he didn't have when he was the High Priest in training....That position is a poisoned chalice!....It takes all of you away .leaving nothing for you!...No identity .No personality!.. You see now what I was saying sometime back?. The rules of the Magic system were never fully explained!...In the first chapter or was it the prologue,you mentioned the history of this world. And in that History you portrayed Cian as a benevolent Diety.I personally believe he is too .That would explain why his two High Priests(Des is a high priest to me) fall in love and choose love over their vows and not get divine retribution. The way I see it is; either you are having fun(letting these two lads consecutively 'renounce' their vows ) at our expense or it's a plot hole . Thank you!
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That is so on mark @drpaladin.๐
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Are Caleb and Asher confirmed to be dating!?..All we have is Kendall's assumption.
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Killian Kendall was wondering if he failed some test of sort...I would say he did.. he let his emotions get in the way..his dislike of Caleb Cohen.That can however been taken as a rookie mistake...Hopefully he will learn from it .... Can't wait to see how this pans out! Thank you!
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I feel like that would be robbing them of their moment..If you added their sex scene it would be just an add on. Personally I feel like they have earned their place in the sun. If you ever get inspired to continue in this universe, Holden/Elion would be a great tale to tell.
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He does...last time was thinking he is a sandman/Rumpelstiltskin hybrid....but in this episode he is Pre-Infinity war Loki(the marvel one)๐๐
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Pregnancy fits him indeed .I saw that coming...those lads were bonking like Armageddon was upon them๐๐
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Morning chat & evening liaison
Seraph28 commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Morning chat & evening liaison
He does indeed entertain us ...and for those with underwear fetish and nudist/exhibition leanings..he is the gift that keeps on giving๐๐๐ I need to watch that movie...need to look for it...I am a fan of Almodovar's work.... When I saw knickers the first time, I was like this guy is having a laugh at our expense.He must have had a laughing fit to himself when was he was writing that line๐ -
Whoa you have literally lived the whole 'Experience is the best teacher ' thing..
