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Did you expect anything different?,..This is @vanalas's MO...the characters are happy and then pop...a shady ex or obsessed best friend of one of the characters shows up to create upheaval...we have seen this chorus play out many times😂😂

You ever watched Chicago the musical?..There is that song ..Cell block tango...especially the chorus...you know...I think it applies to you here😂😂 'You had it coming, You had it coming',.'You only have yourself to blame'😂😂😂

And here I thought Rook and Huxley had started eating each other's faces already😂😂😂 If you don't mind me asking...would it possible to have a multi-perspective chapter.?I mean like having both Huxley and Rook's perspectives in the same chapter? Thank you!

me thinks you doth protest too much😉😂.....I wish could make a bet with you😂...I would definitely win of course

Just take your time...we the 'faithful'😂😉..will wait for whenever you are ready to indulge us with your imagination..

Go and read the synopsis @VBlew....it's scary ...It felt like someone had dropped a pail of ice water on me ...I suspect it's before Noah...I feel like I become too attached to stories here..it's almost scary. I didn't want Elijah to be proven right but somehow I know he will be if the synopsis is any indication

@vanalas...but why?...why build up our hope so...only to shatter it into smithereens 😂...Honestly for once I was like finally a story from you where our main characters are in a conventional relationship...doing conventional relationship stuff like bickering over finances, fighting then having earth shattering make-up sex..You know normal conventional things...but now with this new character you introduced at the end..you are going to create upheaval for this beautiful family who have just finally found the way back to each other!..I had to go back and read the synopsis for the story and it left me scared for Noah....But why?.... This is something unusual and this is your story ..you are the boss but please for once ...give us a story that does not glorify toxic relationships.. and whatever happens don't break up this family...Is that possible?...which deity can I pray to so that my humble plea is answered?😂😂 It sucks being an ardent reader of your works sometimes you know...I once said you must get off on despair 😂 😂....Am.quite sure you are going to prove us right with this tale . Thank you as always ..Blessed week ahead! P.s .Am off to booking appointments with my therapist because I know you are about to spike my blood pressure in the coming weeks😂😂😂😂

I think what makes Jamie/Luca's world different ..and by extension Simon's whom we are yet to 'meet' is that the main characters have come into primary contact with direct abuse.They collided with the abuse head on either emotionally,physically or both. Writing such stories,I like to believe, makes one to go into dark spaces so to speak. That can somewhat affect you as writer,at least that is what I believe.

Oh God!...the dynamic between Jack and Theodore ...is just so nice to witness....it reminds me of banter between Jeff Huntsman and April Summers from Be the Father of this child . The way they pushed each other's button..it's fun and nice I hope you don't mind me asking...but if you had to base these characters on the Hollywood actors...who would Ryder,Danny,Jack,Vince and Theodore be based on?..It's something that has been running g in my head but cannot seem to make it work right..🤭

The song is in my native language.I come from Uganda,East Africa. ..basically it's title is 'It hurts alot' in English..

Thank you ..am glad you re-traced your steps in Luca and Jamie's world...Especially since you have so much going on..you have like 3 ongoing works on your hands ..that must tax your creative imagination to no end... Thank you!

Please don't tell her😂😂

I figured as much ..You know sometimes I envy those folks who have read ahead...two days ago I almost subscribed but then changed my mind.. I would miss the engagement that happens in the comments section.😂...I even patted myself on the back for being so strong in fighting the urge😂😂

Eh..you are right...about so many stories .In fact in so many stories you can tell who the main paring are within the first chapter. This story on the other hand is a multiple character arc story like Wheel of Time.. so for folks like us who have read that, we can get it....what makes your story different is that it's GA forum story but the focus,at least for the first book, was on straight horny angst riddled youths and the only certified gay character was on the periphery... Oh God!..Zal and Ragart are just so different ...and yes opposites attract but eh...not this time😂😂

I like to believe that it's the greatest gratification a writer can get. That your work can evoke a debate among the readers. Take this story for example....all of us have all sorts of theories going and I imagine it makes you laugh when you reading about them in the comments section. Personally for me BDSM is not my cup of tea ,so I avoid anything related to it. However when I read the synopsis of this story when it started here, something about it was catchy so was like let me give this a try.It has also helped that the engagement in the comments section would give me different perspectives . Thank you!

Eh...how come you never talk about the scene immediately after the ironing...the one where he dresses up Alexander...or is that all included in the ironing ?....I liked the scene where Alexander called out Lyn on his poverty too

You know most folks are just inching for romance😂...Folks are used to reading steamy scenes involving the main characters even in fantasy series such as this one...You are on your way to getting the 'Slowest slow-burn ever' award!😂😂...We are in Series 3 and we have no idea who the main romantic pairing is😂😂😂 That being said....am not going anywhere...am here till the end...am after all a Virgo..and we are suckers for romance😂

In this story that adage is subverted ...each of the villains seems to be having their own agenda..so doesn't seem to apply here

No way!😂😂

Now you are being a 'meanie' with that glue assumption about our favourite resident jock😂😂

I don't know what your mind space was like when you were writing this chapter..it's just so intense ...I could imagine the fear that Will had when the doctor said Sepsis and Critical...those words are a harbinger of doom when they are spoken in regards to someone who is the hospital ... Can you imagine , I subconciously skipped the thrill of the Bank infiltration...and was as restless as Will and Jared .😂 Thank you!

I felt the same way too about Brad's nonchalance when it came to the gift that Lyn gave him..He acted like it was no big deal and was glad that at that point Lyn came to the realisation that friendship was better than something more with Brad. Now am anxiously waiting for the infamous event that made them go incommunicado until the wedding invite came in

His thoughtless in that 'You invited yourself ' was so hard to read ..and what is worse is that he did not even notice what it did to Lyn

Indeed...but you noticed Alexander even in the past was not abrasive, sure he is straight forward ..but he is not like his grandfather.

Careful there on the sex part...you are stoking @Cane23's sexual fantasies 😂😂... There are two things to always expect...@Cane23's thorough chapter analyses....and the drawn out sex scenes in your stories😂😂