Seraph28
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What is that running joke from cop shows and B-action movies ...oh yeah cops only show up at the end ...when the hard stuff has been done already
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You couldn't have stated it better indeed
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Omg!..this is one messed up tale..Kyle is just so....insidious .It reminds me of David from the Alien movies..That is just one scary person!
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You are right...however if he made it seem like a robbery gone bad ..I would like to think it would be caught right away by someone savvy
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Here it begins ..
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The Beach Episode (Because Apparently Thatβs Required)
Seraph28 commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in The Beach Episode (Because Apparently Thatβs Required)
Well not a good episode for us Team Ryanπ....we was hoping the Jock with abs and our resident tragic emo Twink would have the honours of being each other's first ...well Gabe is not all bad for breaking bad!ππ That Lex is a serious man gobblerπ Thank you...Episode 6 cannot get here soon enough.- 48 comments
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The Beach Episode (Because Apparently Thatβs Required)
Seraph28 commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in The Beach Episode (Because Apparently Thatβs Required)
Please don't encourage them @Jeff Burtonππ- 48 comments
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The Beach Episode (Because Apparently Thatβs Required)
Seraph28 commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in The Beach Episode (Because Apparently Thatβs Required)
This chapter is a case study of what happens when horny and angst riddled teens are left to their devicesππ...Bad decisions all around .π- 48 comments
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Next Monday cannot come soon enough. I must admit at first I found your style of writing a bit non-continuous .I mean where chapters do not feed into the other organically. An example is the previous chapter with the cliff hanger ...usually being resolved immediately in the next chapter.. You don't do that and I used to feel it gives the story a serial vibe....but over the weekend ,I re-read the story from chapter 1 and got to realise it actually works better that way since Alarik is our main character and we are getting his perspective in form of a journal. Thank you Sir...this story resonates a great deal with me because in a few years I will be like Alarik...Am 36 this year and what Alarik shows us in this story is what happens when you hit the wrong side of 30 in our communityππ
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Pinemoor, Here We Come?
Seraph28 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Pinemoor, Here We Come?
Whom were you talking about?...Personally I haven't read KBois in a long while . Not since COVID time -
Pinemoor, Here We Come?
Seraph28 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Pinemoor, Here We Come?
Yes...that one.. thank you @Cane23. -
Pinemoor, Here We Come?
Seraph28 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Pinemoor, Here We Come?
Well...it's GA @drpaladin...stranger things have happened...opposites attract is a running theme in all her works.. plus Clairvoyance can come in handy when you are an Alpha and have your pack members' lives at stake . There is an author here, have forgotten the name, who specialises in fantasy especially shifter romance and I can tell you, all most all the main pack members are mated to malesπ -
Motherβs questions & queers dancing
Seraph28 commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Motherβs questions & queers dancing
Oh Matt and Gray have come a long way. ..the personal growth these two lads are showing is just marvelous to say the least!. Made me envious ..of having to dance with a bloke you like in public like that.. -
Pinemoor, Here We Come?
Seraph28 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Pinemoor, Here We Come?
Well..how sure are you?..Besides @Laura S. Fox has not explicitly outlined the rules and customs of the supernatural community in this universe...besides I like to believe that she did not just include this for fun. It is the classic Chekhov 's gun! -
The wait will be worth it...they are after all in a precarious situation...what with that evil entity trying to possess Huxley .Romance tends to take a back seat when you are busy trying to survive death or a possession in this caseπ
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Pinemoor, Here We Come?
Seraph28 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Pinemoor, Here We Come?
Seems we are still not in the know...you will probably be back from the Mediterranean when we get to knowπππ- 58 comments
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Pinemoor, Here We Come?
Seraph28 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Pinemoor, Here We Come?
I am counting seconds till next Sunday pops around..π- 58 comments
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Pinemoor, Here We Come?
Seraph28 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Pinemoor, Here We Come?
I have my theory that Jack is Theo's fated mate.....I have read enough shifter stories on this forum to recognise the pattern .. two characters who are fated mates getting on each others' nerves without much effort.. You notice how they seem to wind up each other....that right there is typical sexual tensionπππ....I could be wrong though!- 58 comments
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That statement right up there just flared up my hormonesπππ... God! GA tends to evoke the inner horniness in most of us Thank you!....Can't wait when the chapters start dropping ..whoa
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Basing on the way he killed Marcus ...a robbery stage up would definitely raise immediate scrutiny .
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Oh Enrico...you badassπ...There must be something wrong with me if am rooting for a duplicitous and ruthless character like Enrico, right? You really had fun writing this chapter π π.It must have brought out your inner boy worship of action figures Thank you!
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Eh..in your mind they are Nick and Schmidtππ
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Chapter 4: What changes will time bring?
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 4: What changes will time bring?
Not unless you want me to literally become Popπ -
Chapter 4: What changes will time bring?
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 4: What changes will time bring?
Finally someone says it out loud ππ..There is something a little loose with you @vanalas..you can't keep doing this over and over again..unless there is some deep rooted issue that makes you churn out such work...tale after tale πππ...I know some really good therapists...could recommend you....if you ask ...Nicely of course π
