Seraph28
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Exactly ..and that is what frustrates me.. I feel he knows deep down it's trouble ...but then I think he is subconciously on some sort of ego trip...that two boys are interested in him .
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He really got on your nerves for you to dub him Arsehair😂😂...
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Now we are entering into CW Nancy Drew territory and am all for it😂.. Thank you!
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Oh Nick!..you keep messing up with the mixed signals ..The relentless need to feel accepted and make friends is going to cause trouble... I did not particularly like him in this chapter because he came off as a bit emotionally manipulative in his interactions with Jack...He knows how Jack feels about him and he keeps using it .Not to mention he also likes Jack but wants to have both Jack and Noah like him.. That is emotional irresponsibility of the highest order!. I know these are teenagers but that doesn't cut it anymore since he is smart enough to be studying philosophy..he should know better! Thank you for the update....and pardon my ranting today😉😂
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Oh eagerly waiting for whatever you are cooking 😉
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It's like each new chapter of this tale is a movie of its own. A genre of its own...The previous chapter was a combination of a family drama,action and romance. This new chapter is a thriller and a legal procedural...the contrast between the chapters make for an engaging read @Topher Lydon..... Thank you!
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Are you also waiting for Zereth's take down like me.
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Oh my...Next week cannot get here soon enough. But am sure you already have a resolution set up in place...am wary that this might blow up into a mess.. Thank you!
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That's exactly what I said myself too😉
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Oh my Thalion is such a hoot!..when was reading his part...could decide if his cadence was like that of Dream(current Sandman series) or Rumpelstiltskin/Mr.Gold from the Once Upon A time series😂... Now am almost sad he has been introduced just as we approach the end of the story. .. .Thank you ....can't wait soon enough for next chapter!
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This chapter was so good...It had an awakening and a revival. It has been good to see Enrico tap into his still intact albeit highly concealed compassion when it comes to Ezra . it makes him human, very flawed yes but human.That makes him relatable even though he is on the 'wrong' side in this game of shadowy 'chess'... Reading the part where Jacob stirs was sort of cathartic for me....And he is just a story character😂😂 Thank you @Topher Lydon.
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Even you don't believe yourself 😂
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Omg!..these are all horrible and messed up people....Leo..Carter and Ace .
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You know...I just can't even
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Please tell me you didn't just make the guys suddenly acquire the telenovela bug ..you know like the heroes suddenly becoming stupid all of a sudden😂...It has not been hours since they talked about two kings being required for the sacrifice .Not to mention the sudden change of Ewan.That Rory and Keiran cannot see anything off?.. let me just enter my bed ..it's 3am here, lest I pull my hair 😂😂 Thank you!
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God...another update in frustration...keeping secrets,like Ryan and Jasper are, is never a good thing especially if said secrets can impact other people(in this case their band mates).. Thank you for the update!
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The Beach Episode (Because Apparently That’s Required)
Seraph28 commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in The Beach Episode (Because Apparently That’s Required)
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The Beach Episode (Because Apparently That’s Required)
Seraph28 commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in The Beach Episode (Because Apparently That’s Required)
I actually agree with you on Luca/Jamie ...I feel like Luca is just so easy..so safe. Like Its those typical boy meets cute relationships..Sure they are perfect for each other...but the stakes are not that high. Nathan and Corey ....oh now that is epic....It is so beautifully chaotic yet so grounded. I have read that story thrice😂...and when you resume working on it ,I will be among the first people in the reading queue😂😂 -
The Beach Episode (Because Apparently That’s Required)
Seraph28 commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in The Beach Episode (Because Apparently That’s Required)
Say what?...Did you just out yourself?..You are like the first author have heard who is biased when it comes to their literary characters 😂😂..I am going to have a beautiful meltdown😂- 48 comments
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Pinemoor, Here We Come?
Seraph28 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Pinemoor, Here We Come?
Well ..what have learnt from reading @Laura S. Fox's works is that she never adds a character for the sake of it ....there are some stories which you read and are left wondering why you bothered in the first place ...because ,Like you have said, some many characters are added who have no bearing on the plot. Makes you feel like you are watching a 2000s CW production.😂 -
Pinemoor, Here We Come?
Seraph28 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Pinemoor, Here We Come?
Oh had forgotten that story...have read so much from here sometimes I forget till someone brings it up .haha -
The Beach Episode (Because Apparently That’s Required)
Seraph28 commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in The Beach Episode (Because Apparently That’s Required)
If you went through with that tired tragic gay trope,I would be among the first to sue you😂😂😂...For emotional torture. -
The Beach Episode (Because Apparently That’s Required)
Seraph28 commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in The Beach Episode (Because Apparently That’s Required)
Haha...@Jeff Burton, for all his craziness sometimes, is a sucker for the classic one-on-one romance😂😂...At least that Is what I have concluded from his works 😂😂 -
The Beach Episode (Because Apparently That’s Required)
Seraph28 commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in The Beach Episode (Because Apparently That’s Required)
Eh...been Team Ryan from day 1 mate😂😂😂 -
The Beach Episode (Because Apparently That’s Required)
Seraph28 commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in The Beach Episode (Because Apparently That’s Required)
I like to think Ryan ,being an intelligent jock, had to play the role of a himbo because he was expected to..If you remember the conversation in Sky's room in the previous chapter...I got a feeling the lad was grasping at straws to be seen for who he is ...not what he is- 48 comments
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