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Chapter Chapter Twenty-Three
Seraph28 commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Chapter Chapter Twenty-Three
Oh it's more than okay ..you worried for naught...I hope the next chapter is not crazy ..I seem to have noticed a pattern. When the previous chapter(s) are calm...then the preceding one(s) are anxiety inducers.😉 I for one am glad Keiran apologized to his brother .Thank you for the update!- 14 comments
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Beyond all Misunderstandings
Seraph28 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Beyond all Misunderstandings
Well ...this is definitely a fairy tale.. why is Danny refuting it😃. Thank you for the chapter.- 31 comments
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Good things come to those who wait....patiently I must add 😉😃
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Oh .My!.I am rendered thoughtless! .I had to read this thrice .It was that good an epilogue😉.. I take back my word.Even though our protagonists are in peril, introducing Prince Otello ,who is an astute fella at that, makes me somewhat relieved!. Dropping that familial bombshell of Josel's Uncle is icing on top of what was already a hot cake. Thank you Lupus!...Hopefully don't die of anxiety waiting for the 3rd series😃😃
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Whoa ..it's such a hoot getting an update !.It has been a while!. Hope you are fully recovered now? My question for today..Are there therapists in this universe?.😉.I am just asking because Lachlan really did a number on Keiran. Do not even get me started on the damage Oeus wrought on poor young Desmond and the Queen.That family has lots of trauma to deal with . Thank you for the update!
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I was just thinking the same too. He really could use some attitude adjustment...I know Lachlan was a jerk but he is long gone...so Keiran has no more reason being an asshole towards his young brother.
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Thank you!..I must admit that last bit of the chapter today had Jane Austen vibes..😀😃.
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Is it possible to swoon through reading a line?.haha...Because 'his heart beat with a precision of a machine,but Ryder was sure it could have skipped a beat' is just class A swoon material .😉.. Thanks for the update. Blessed week to you..
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Oh..you did not just go there!..You introduce a character who could be relatable,likeable and you off him like that.That is an unacceptable😀😉..More so during Easter holidays. Bashar reminds of a current head of state,who I shall not name, who uses big gestures to hide his inadequacy and ineptness!. Always blaming someone else for their failures .ring a bell?.haha Thank you for the update...though am gutted that just as we we learning about Malik ,he is offed.one good thing is at least now we know the magnitude of the fight that awaits our heroes. Will anxiously wait for Chapter 19!
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First, I want to say it's really great to have you back albeit in a somewhat limited capacity. Hopefully the pain is not as intense as before? Now that one hell of a way to enter a weekend!....that was a wonderful chapter....Glad you never killed of Ash. Blessed Friday to you
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I really hate it being a reader sometimes....we know Renn is dangerous but our heroes have no idea...it is one of those times where one would wish to enter the story and warn our protagonists😀.. Just curious, do you already have the next series already ?...I for one ..cannot wait Thanks for the update and here it to blessed Easter holidays
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Don't even know where to start or what say...just woah 👍... Am really glad you kept Jack around...his 'neurosis',for lack of better word, is just so amusing . Thank you for the update as usual ..Now going to count hours till next Sunday!.. Blessed day to you!
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Sometimes I feel like you really like putting our 'heroes' through the wringer..If it is not Josel,Zdain and the other youth ,it's Zal and his company 😀😀.At this rate am going to go into 'depression' . I like the chapter format ..it is still from the same perspective but not in a linear format ..Till now we had no idea that Zal is capable of relating with people. This chapter,at least to me, has put that to bed somewhat. Thank you for the update!...will anxiously wait for next week's update .
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I’m Harboring… a Fugitive?!
Seraph28 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in I’m Harboring… a Fugitive?!
You really have a unique kind of cliff hangers...hehe... Thank you for keeping around Jack...and for the update!- 22 comments
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Oh no ..I cannot begin to imagine what you are going through .I am however hopefully that you will win the fight .Quick recovery to you
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At least they are on the way to getting along ...now if only Franz would join soon..I for one like the gang back together. Thank you!
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Sometimes, in a Crystal Ball
Seraph28 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Sometimes, in a Crystal Ball
You know each Sunday night I anxiously wait for updates...Now I can finally sleep .thank you! Please do not take away Jack....he is such a hoot!- 26 comments
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My..oh my!.I really thought would never get to 'interact' with these beautiful characters again.Thank you! Zain has so much stacked against him...damn. Going to anxiously waiting for the next chapter. P.s...this format of having PoVs of the characters in the same page is really good. I for one like it since it helps know what is going on at the same time. Blessed weekend to you!
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This has been a really wonderful journey indeed...Thank you!
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You are getting 'naughtier' with the cliff hangers..hihi...Thank you for this chapter...At least now almost all the crew is in place,that way Josel and Zdain are not alone anymore. Looking forward to the next offering . Blessed day to you!
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That's a nice way to wake up on my side.Thank you! Am sorry to hear that you are having a health crisis.I hope it can be resolved quickly.You just need to hang in there for a while and all shall be well eventually Blessed Thursday
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Blimey!...what a cliff hanger..Now all the main players are in the same place.The anxiety of waiting for the conclusion is going to do me in😀😀. Thank you for the update!.
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What a way to spice someone's Sunday evening. The plot thickens indeed..At least I have hope now that there are going to be good twists on this ride. Thank you for the update Blessed week ahead !
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Whoa...two more chapters to go....the plot is definitely thickening now
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At least that cat is officially out of the bag now ..so to speak. Thanks for the update.
