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    Maybe you can try food but when it's pulverized.Take it like you starting anew...small portions of what you like with a serving of the fruits you like
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    Exactly...that's why was like am just so fed up of nefarious people messing with them
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    Oh at least lawyers are mostly competent.....these Fae ones are just terrible
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    More likely squeal ...they wouldn't want to have their nails dirty 😉
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    You have this knack for writing pretty detestable characters .I mean Ash said the Fae court was a despicable nest of vipers...these Fae elders are just the worst!.I rarely do this but pl here is to hoping there will be a way to revoke those stipulations.I find myself wishing for a resolution to that...Keiran and Roy have been through a lot already to be ensnared again by some nefarious characters . Thank you for the update ..now let me sleep off😀
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    It seems between you and @Casualwanderer82 there is undeclared 'battle' going to see who can outdo the other in 'psycho-analysis' of our protagonists 😀..I for one am not picking a side .hihi. Like always thank you for the thorough psycho-evaluation @Cane23
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    MOMy.oh.my!..I cannot even.I have been looking forward to get a glimpse of who Adrian is. You did not just give a glimpse...it was a full blast of chaos and damage. Lorenzo(from one one your earlier stories),was a mess but Adrian must be a close second. It makes one realise that humans are complex indeed. we all come with our individual neuroses and psychoses. This chapter was just so rich.It gave us a back story. What a rewind that was!.However what made it really rich for me, what the last part of present day!.I dare say Nick has finally got his brand of catharsis! so to speak. Thank you for the update!.
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    Chapter 5

    Seraph28 commented on Inkognito's story chapter in Chapter 5

    Now that is a really fun and cool format of making a character backstory..😀.. At least now we know something about our protagonists...thank you for the update!. Blessed week ahead!
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    Am of that same thought line actually
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    You just know when I could use a light up moment..This was it!. I like how you have made Desmond the focus of this chapter.We had never really known him before,other than being a prodigy priest and all .Reading the scene of his meeting with the priests reminded me of how most of the time ,priests/religious persons are actually uber judgemental and so unforgiving. Thank you for the update . blessed week ahead!
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    Finally Danny has decided to cross the Rubicon so to speak.I for one am all for it...sometimes it's just best to just take the plunge😃.. Thank you as usual @Laura.Now all one has to do is patiently wait till next Sunday .😃😀. In the meantime,here is to wishing you a blessed Sunday and new week ahead!
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    I actually like it. I usually re-read a chapter twice since this is pretty subtle work to discern in one go.Your dissections help me understand better. Among CasualWanderer82's body of work, this is the most cerebral piece he has produced. For folks like you who have had the fortune of reading Freud and Jung, this is pretty easy to understand😃
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    Chapter 4

    Seraph28 commented on Inkognito's story chapter in Chapter 4

    Personally,I would suggest that you use what you feel works for you.It will be good either way since it's a stand alone story .
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    You are becoming Professor Nick Morrissey now?.hihi
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    You are doing it again;that wonderful thing of dissecting the chapter thoroughly.I for one am all for it.I know it's a ride but are we 'allowed' to get in-universe and just smack that 'oaf' Adrian😃.Not that I condone violence but he really could use a psyche adjustment of sort .
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    I was thinking along the same wavelength regarding Adrian. I guess we will just have to wait and see since so far we only have Bobby and Nick's perspectives.We are yet to 'immerse' ourselves in Adrian's psyche so to speak .
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    For some reason,I feel like Adrian is just beyond help. Like he comes off like someone too oblivious,if that is even possible ,and self centered. At least that is to my understanding..Maybe yours differs
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    Blimey!..I think for this book..you have decided to outdo yourself with each preceding chapter😉😃.Each chapter ,so far, seems better than the previous one.I cannot help but feel as though am a fly on the wall, witnessing this story happen in real time..I am now wishing this ride never comes to an end .It is that phenomenal for me. Thank you for the update!..Blessed Day to you!
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    I am in total awe of how you dissected this chapter.Have always wanted to try Jung but always deemed it too cerebral for me...Now,you have given me impetus to finally get started on it . Thank you!
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    What on earth did I just read?..You must have had a hoot conceiving a character like Professor Nick Morrissey!..He is a scary person!..Reading this chapter made me think of Col.Hans Landa from Inglorious bestards . The raging storm under the veneer of polished calm.Soft-spoken,calm and yet dangerous. I never re-read stories but have had to re-read the first two chapters,and now this ,just so that can understand Nick. I must admit though it's so far an exercise in futility! On the other note...this story is somewhat educative and I would be loathe to admit it openly but I now understand why people cheat😃😉
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    Well, has anything ever phased you before?😃.. If you do not mind my asking . ..what is the intended schedule for the updates?
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    Had to read it this chapter thrice ..the last part of it at least. That is an exercise in restraint ..eh. I read all your stories but for the first time ,even though it's just at the beginning, wish the main character would just leave,take the high road. Adrian and Bobby are despicable in my opinion and you have really written nasty characters over time.😉 .cheating is bad ,always been bad but to drug someone so that you can cheat is just ..plain evil . Thank you for the update....going to anxiously wait for the next offering. blessed day!
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    Just curious ...Is Jack speaking in a Brummie accent?.😉. Am never going to tire from thanking you for keeping Jack around..He is just so...motor mouthed.haha.. Thank you for the update! Blessed Sunday to you
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    Is there such a thing as Beautiful angst?😃😉.Am asking because this is a full course meal of angst served beautifully. Imagine getting out of bed to get a notification to such a beautiful serving..Thanks for the update ..it has most definitely made my day! Blessed Friday to you!
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    You must have missed the emoji at the end of it..that was meant in jest. Of course no one has a bearing on what and how @mastershakeme she writes.
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