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What a bloody menace Theodore is!... I had a feeling it was going to be bad for RyDan...just didn't think it would be this bad ..But then again you warned us .haha Thank you!

It's nice to have you back....it's been. A while....am just glad you updated again.. Power and knowledge can become addictive indeed!..It was such a nice detour from Connor and our lad...and the others Thank you!

Being a good person in the Vanalas universe is detrimental to one's life..especially if you are the main protagonist😂😂

Oh no...that was like a death knell.So much pain conveyed in that statement.. I have read your stories over and over again to know a storm is coming to Willow Creek and with it the inevitable emotional turmoil. Someone is going to lose out even though it's no game..But then again you having a knack for taking us on such emotional whirlwinds😂😂. Thank you for the update!!

Ophelia really does grate on your nerves too?...What Vanalas story would it be without a controlling and cruel bitchy mother😂

That broke me @vanalas. You have really put these two lads through the wringer it's almost cruel..I know one is not supposed to be emotionally invested into story characters but what you have done to Gael and to some extent Alex is worse than what you subjected to Praveen. It's like the universe has decided these two wonderful fellas have to be broken and hurt. Completely hollowed out ! I was looking forward to the downfall of the Sandoval siblings ..but when it came , was left empty. Like it was non-climatic and then you go ahead and pull the rug from right under us. like Galex, and by extension us, have not suffered enough🥹 Thank you for the update.Just thought of something...I think you are developing a reputation as a creator of angsty tortured youths.😂..Your whole body of work so far has our main protagonists being hollowed out ... Going to anxiously wait for next week's update! Blessed week to you! P.s....please do not break up Galex for good😂😂😂

Eh..Alan is kinda manipulative!. And quite self serving. I know this is a story but am so disgusted with Alan.

He is a pregnant 15 year old lad....am quite sure angsty is a default setting for that age😆

Eh hormones can be a brutal bitch😆...I find myself wishing could enter the story and throttle Lanelle's neck😆. Thank you for the update!

Exactly....and Hearst warned him many times....but he thought he knew better ..and now he is gaslighting Hearst for his own mess.

Now I find myself wishing had not wanted the truth to come out .haha... That was ugly...really ugly!...Jamie was really brutal .He was warned many times but he was hungry for fame and threw caution to the wind. And now he is being a git that he has been entrapped .I almost want to enter the story and slap him a few times😃😆 Then there is Hearst....he has to equally blame for this mess...He had many chances to come clean especially when he knew Wencel was circling Jamie...now we have this colossal fuck up on hands...I cannot even Thank you for the update!...Am going to take a cold bath even😆

I thought am the only one who is liking the slow burn nature of it..

This story is just so...fun and catchy so far. And it's just beginning !

Oh ...have you forgotten Renn is just the worst...Don't you remember the chapter where he had a POV?..He willingly serves the dark..Usually such people are evil to the core...totally without any redeeming trait...Think of Bellatrix Lestrange and Barty Crouch Jr in the Harry Potter series.

Funny, I don’t remember you ever making too much effort to get to know me, although we’ve been friends for twelve years.”.... The above statement from Alexander emphasizes the warning @Laura S. Fox gave us from the beginning...Lyn is not a reliable narrator . Personally I think it was Lyn who was hostile to Alexander since he considered him his 'rival' from the moment he saw him. I am inclined to believe that College Lyn only tolerated or engaged with Alexander because of Brad.

To misquote John wick...'I will serve. I will be of service' ..😃😃

The angst of youth..eh😉..At least finally Josel is starting to react to anyone showing an interest in Zdain. In my head have even coined their couple name already(Jozda)😆😆😆.. You know each time you write a chapter and give that Renn creep a POV...I feel like entering the story and getting rid of that guy..He is just so despicable and evil..See how he nudges my dark impulses 😃... I like how you drop minor bits of the backstory of the Sandkan family ...first it was the brother everyone thinks is dead, and now you finally revealed their family background....I find myself wishing had the ability to control time so that Thursday is here soon.hihi Thank you for the update!

Like anything is ever going to stand in the way of our next adventure.😆..

Okay these witches are starting to grate on my nerves😂...Can we have us some witch hunt that culminates in a burning!...See how they have awakened my dark impulses😂😆.Because they are just the worst ... Thank you for the update!

I find I rather like it too....like Matt😂... This is such a feel good chapter! Thank you!

You had better....and he better be really good😉😂😂.... Btw...out of curiosity...when it comes to this story.. is it your plan to update a chapter per week?..Am asking because I noticed it's kind a pattern .

That much is obvious that they are all wearing masks at this particular point in the story...haha...As longer Lyn and Alexander are together...that's all that matters to me 😂😂

Eh...thats one kind of a maze..😂

I hereby officially sue you for inciting an emotional imbalance @Vanalas...😉😂.. If I didn't know better would say you like being a sadist!...You have not given Galex any moment of peace since they got together...first the Galex's mother...then this. These lads have been to hell and back...cant you just let them have a moment of peace?😂😂..and you had to leave us at another bloody cliff hanger!!!.. Am not a psychologist but am inclined to believe Leo is a nihilist .eh.. You would have to be one to do something as despicable as what he did to Alex and Gael ..I would understand if he did it out of some sort of longing...But to sleep with Alex ..just because he wanted to see Gael broken ..and Alex alone....that is just beyond despicable Thank you for the update!...Anxiety begins now ...till the next chapter😂

I was hooked ...the moment I saw..'In the beginning..😉....I just love me the way you have written the boy's POV... I am inclined to believe this is going to be one hell of a good journey and am for it. Thank you!