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You had better....and he better be really good😉😂😂.... Btw...out of curiosity...when it comes to this story.. is it your plan to update a chapter per week?..Am asking because I noticed it's kind a pattern .

That much is obvious that they are all wearing masks at this particular point in the story...haha...As longer Lyn and Alexander are together...that's all that matters to me 😂😂

Eh...thats one kind of a maze..😂

I hereby officially sue you for inciting an emotional imbalance @Vanalas...😉😂.. If I didn't know better would say you like being a sadist!...You have not given Galex any moment of peace since they got together...first the Galex's mother...then this. These lads have been to hell and back...cant you just let them have a moment of peace?😂😂..and you had to leave us at another bloody cliff hanger!!!.. Am not a psychologist but am inclined to believe Leo is a nihilist .eh.. You would have to be one to do something as despicable as what he did to Alex and Gael ..I would understand if he did it out of some sort of longing...But to sleep with Alex ..just because he wanted to see Gael broken ..and Alex alone....that is just beyond despicable Thank you for the update!...Anxiety begins now ...till the next chapter😂

I was hooked ...the moment I saw..'In the beginning..😉....I just love me the way you have written the boy's POV... I am inclined to believe this is going to be one hell of a good journey and am for it. Thank you!

I had missed that correlation...😂

Waiting patiently for the long read ..,,😂

What was that?..I cannot even describe what am feeling right now ..I have read this chapter five times..just to make sure am not missing anything...Two chapters back I was praying for such an ending for these fellas and it's like the Literary Diety out there answered my prayers..😂. Adrian,Bobby and Nick all end up well. But Adrian..has finally found serenity.And what a journey it has been to witness this deeply flawed and wounded man finally undergo the metamorphosis I have been hoping for. He is going to stay with me long after @Casualwanderer82...I can only imagine how you felt writing the final scene of this chapter..Now that I think about it...Adrian is the equivalent of Sauron from the Lord of the Rings...he is on the periphery and yet his presence is overwhelming .Affecting everything in the orbit around him ...I swear this story would make for a good Literature book in class...It would be as fun as the discussion we read here . In the end this story ,for me, this story has been about the resilience of the human spirit and healing..We have to break in order to be mended. Darkness molds and tempers so that we can see the light. Healing can only happen if one lets go.If one understands that control is anathema to healing! Thank you so much...it has been such a wonderful journey into the chaotic but world of Adrian,Nicky and Bobby!

To give us two chapters in a row of calm and quiet can only mean the storm is coming in the next chapters...I have gotten used to your style by now😂. Thank you!

Eh ..why must you be so heartless with such a cliff hanger😂😂😂....I somehow suspected such a development would occur...guess I should give myself a pat 😂 Thank you for the update!

God...the suspense of it all...Are these two ever going to become acquainted for real?haha Thanks for the update

Careful....that's brutal ..haha

Eh...we cannot have that now...haha..

Eh...have you just started venturing into the Vanalas universe?hahaha...most of his characters(especially the co-male protagonist(s)) have a penchant for being frustratingly idiotic and annoying at the most important moments ....the villains are just beyond evil....the kind of villains you would want to kill,resurrect and kill over and over ..just for the sake of it .

Just know the frustration this chapter invoked in me is just off charts ...it's the hair-pulling type of frustration!. You are putting our boys through a grinder@Vanalas😂😂😆.....I know that it's all about the journey to the destination....but damn. I am almost inclined to sue you for emotional upheaval😆😆😆...I got invested in Alex and Gael from the moment you introduced Alex in the first book...I even coined a name for them in my head(Galex)...yes am that into them😂😂. Thank you for the update..

Just earlier today was wondering how proud @CasualWanderer82 must be that this story has sort of become a beast of its own. That we each come with different perspectives and end up in such lively debates..Imagine yesterday slept at 3am, just because we were debating!... That is a mark of a true story teller😆😂

I am starting to think you really have something against Alex and Gael...😆..Can't these two souls ever get a break...This chapter just taken me back to your first book....the turmoil you subjected Praveen to.haha Now am going to go into a frenzy waiting for the next update! Just curious,if you do not mind, is this going to be a long read in terms of chapters

CasualWanderer82 is becoming a sage of sorts Like you @JohnHenry... My dad almost did a number on me ..Though am lucky his sort of abuse was mostly verbal and had my Mum to look out for me.. That being said ..this book resonated with me because it made me realise that I am not hopeless like he told me.

Looks like we keep forgetting the whole point of this story especially when it comes to Morality....hope you can have patience for your slow students Teacher😂😆

Why do I feel like I just got reprimanded by the teacher at this moment?😂.... When you put it like that...It comes off wrong...on my part

Thank you for this analysis....I mentioned in my comments in some chapter back ...that Adrian for all his shit can be attributed to his NPD. Nick was more emotionally mature and knew exactly what Adrian was. He knew he was dealing with someone who is insecure but hides behind the veneer of control. Basically to me both men are just bad news but Nick is calculating...

As usual this is a comprehensive!. At least we seem to agree that both adults(Nick and Adrian)...were not acting like normal adults😂

I concur with you on Nick...have been beating that drum for a while now...

And you just warning me right now!...am a goner already.....especially this particular one!😂

Now you are being too cerebral😂😂