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Just know the frustration this chapter invoked in me is just off charts ...it's the hair-pulling type of frustration!. You are putting our boys through a grinder@Vanalas😂😂😆.....I know that it's all about the journey to the destination....but damn. I am almost inclined to sue you for emotional upheaval😆😆😆...I got invested in Alex and Gael from the moment you introduced Alex in the first book...I even coined a name for them in my head(Galex)...yes am that into them😂😂. Thank you for the update..

Just earlier today was wondering how proud @CasualWanderer82 must be that this story has sort of become a beast of its own. That we each come with different perspectives and end up in such lively debates..Imagine yesterday slept at 3am, just because we were debating!... That is a mark of a true story teller😆😂

I am starting to think you really have something against Alex and Gael...😆..Can't these two souls ever get a break...This chapter just taken me back to your first book....the turmoil you subjected Praveen to.haha Now am going to go into a frenzy waiting for the next update! Just curious,if you do not mind, is this going to be a long read in terms of chapters

CasualWanderer82 is becoming a sage of sorts Like you @JohnHenry... My dad almost did a number on me ..Though am lucky his sort of abuse was mostly verbal and had my Mum to look out for me.. That being said ..this book resonated with me because it made me realise that I am not hopeless like he told me.

Looks like we keep forgetting the whole point of this story especially when it comes to Morality....hope you can have patience for your slow students Teacher😂😆

Why do I feel like I just got reprimanded by the teacher at this moment?😂.... When you put it like that...It comes off wrong...on my part

Thank you for this analysis....I mentioned in my comments in some chapter back ...that Adrian for all his shit can be attributed to his NPD. Nick was more emotionally mature and knew exactly what Adrian was. He knew he was dealing with someone who is insecure but hides behind the veneer of control. Basically to me both men are just bad news but Nick is calculating...

As usual this is a comprehensive!. At least we seem to agree that both adults(Nick and Adrian)...were not acting like normal adults😂

I concur with you on Nick...have been beating that drum for a while now...

And you just warning me right now!...am a goner already.....especially this particular one!😂

Now you are being too cerebral😂😂

Looks like someone shares my sentiments on that matter😂

Eh...you know@CasualWanderer82 is as unpredictable as an eclipse..I stopped making guesses when it comes to his work😂😂....But will take your word for it....let's patiently wait...albeit with some anxiety.

Indeed...just imagine the pain you have to endure ...to do that.

Oh no...Nick and Adrian are definitely done. I meant does he deserve forgiveness.

Yes he did....I like to believe those tears in the car scene are a lament for what has been lost....an attempt of a soul cleanse .

Like I said before...this book has been educative for me...I have been lucky in my life I guess...I have never had the misfortune of being at mercy of a narcissist when it comes to romantic relationships.This book has however shown me that such people do exist. Usually when you have no experience ,you can never know how profound somethings are .This book has made re-evaluate the relationship or lack thereof that I have with my father.I would never have realised it before . Bobby will indeed start the healing .. Question for you....do you think Adrian deserves a second chance?

I was just waiting for your take on this ..haha...and I somewhat expected your thought process would take this trajectory ...not that am telepathic though!😂... Always happy to see your analysis...though lately they are becoming a bit brief...Losing your touch?😂😂

We should all thank CW..I like that have this kind of discourse when the chapters come out..😂...

Yes..it is...just curious have you ever read a book and hoped for an ending where the protagonists do not end up riding into the sunset but rather at points where they are comfortable and fully healed .Peaceful alone?. CW once mentioned this book is meant to challenge us to see beyond right and wrong...I cannot believe am saying(personal opinion) this but Bobby deserves better....neither of these two men deserve to be in Bobby's life .Adrian was bad news..a narcissist indeed...but Nick. That's calculating....he must have poisoned Adrian over a long period of time. That's scary.!...No wonder in that scene even Adrian was 😳...Now see what CW has gone and made me become...am scared and it's just a book character 😂

Damn!...I said it before and am going to keep saying it...you have indeed outdone yourself...CW...I mentioned it before that Nick was not all that innocent,that underneath that polished veneer is a beast of a man. Reading this chapter reminded me of the song...'Human'...there is a part where she sings that she can take much until she cannot take more..These people are just so messed up ..eh. Adrian did really break them down...damn!...Imagine holding in all that resentment,bitterness and weariness all those years!. I had just had a thought...an epiphany of sorts.. This book is phenomenal...It's quite educative. Usually when am reading stories on this platform...it's mostly a sort of escapism. A way to unwind from the grind that is life in the 21st Century...When first read your books ,did not like that they dealt with incestous and toxic,angst filled relationships.I after all come from a society which acts as moral police of sorts...so that kinda tends to pretty much shape one's outlook on life .However I have since understood,from reading your books😀, that human emotion is complex. That emotions don't apply logic or have a set SOP. I have to admit it has been a bit of an eye opener. See, in the Science world we know what to expect when we mix certain formulae,reagents or algorithms.Your books however have disabused me of that notion when it comes to emotions and human behavior. There are no rules ,no logic, no formulae when it comes to tempering the human heart . You have woven a such a riveting tale of the human psyche that I almost feel like am in a class. A class that I did not pay for or expect and yet I find the thought of it ending makes me sad!. Thank you CW...May your imagination never wake!

Definitely going to do that..

You seriously going to drive me insane with anxiety .haha ..now going to have to wait restlessly for the next offering .. Thank you!

I thought so too ...he exhibits Agape love as demonstrated when they were together on that island like thing scene in the chapter.... Just curious...do folks really speak like that in the South?.or it's just a product of your imagination....I am just loving it😀