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What about the woman’s prophecy that Kai was told to bring Milo to the cavern? Was that it or is there more to it? It seem that both Kai and Sebastian need to talk about their loves…
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It’s great Jason is making progress with the work for the queen. And the growing closeness with Devyn, who has wanted the attention so badly.
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Great Chapter, it’s good to see Noah embracing more of his true self, dressing the way he wants to in front of his family is a huge step. Seems like everyone had a good time at dinner.
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Troubling chapter with ending seemingly ominous. Glad Brad was in the library to keep Beau safe when he almost ran into the rape session.
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Another great chapter. It’s great how quickly Henry picks up and the extrapolates what is the next logical idea to him, and that helped JJ get the AI connection. Still looking forward to finding out who the boyfriend is that the story started out talking about. Henry could be a possibility in a couple of years.
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So that’s a twist to the story. Nathan being in jail, not that he was out and gay to his father and going to corrupt Jason that way…. Still there is that kiss… looking forward to the send off for Aiden.
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More progress on the relationship front, and now we know where the money came from. That was something huge for Seth to share!
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Good talk with the Dr at the end there. They do need to communicate more about the bonding, and what each of them want to happen.
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Tears over the loss and that huge act of friendship for them all, such a beautiful chapter. People need friends in their grief even if the thin they want to be alone.
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Chapter 19: The Specials Summit, Part II
VBlew commented on C. Henderson's story chapter in Chapter 19: The Specials Summit, Part II
So cruel making Dani have to kill the Dogs, hopefully he gets to befriend the remaining one. Demetrius’ story is sad that he had a good Mentor then a miserable one, just like Dani. -
The Truth is Going to Leak Soon
VBlew commented on garfwiz's story chapter in The Truth is Going to Leak Soon
Good pieces of the story here, it will be interesting to see what Matthew discovers about his family, and then if he wants to be a shifter, can Tala awaken that in him? It’s all interesting, my vote is for Oakland have not seen a female Alpha pair in any other story so far. -
What an amazing journey you are taking us readers on. Jin as gruff as he is is very caring it seem of Levi. Such power with all of the elements, and what seems like an innate ability to have those who get close to be drawn to him. Looking forward to read what Levi becomes as a natural leader.
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Wow, this chapter has so much going on. The revelation he was kidnapped by a pedophile. Then the talk about what he wants to do in the future. All of the different tech, and business practices, then not knowing about the stock angle of his compensation. Someone looked out for him in the beginning.
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Nice that they are gently working up to the true mating. Sounds like a very loving relationship continuing to unfold to the next level of them all being werewolves.
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So much trauma from the abusive parents still lingering. This is a step in the right direction.
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A Family Beyond Comprehension
VBlew commented on James Matthews's story chapter in A Family Beyond Comprehension
Action packed, wow. Just added to how dysfunctional the happy family really was. Seems like with what Colin was saying Alan being like Jake, the photos are of Alan with another man. -
Chapter 18: The Specials Summit, Part I
VBlew commented on C. Henderson's story chapter in Chapter 18: The Specials Summit, Part I
A very interesting display of their abilities. Not liking Deadnus at all, pure malice intent on getting rid of Dani it would seem. I think he will surprise them all. -
Another great chapter. Arric and Kieran’s relationship develops more with some rules of engagement. Interesting possible lead with another previous associate of Eike being guilty and needing rehabilitation. Hopefully there is a clue to track him down.
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Confronting the Lies, Hammering Home My Destiny
VBlew commented on James Matthews's story chapter in Confronting the Lies, Hammering Home My Destiny
What a huge twist at the end there. Very glad Cody is going to get back with Luke, that was a raw deal, especially now that we know Ethan’s death was faked. -
Seth has a lot of emotional baggage, but it seem Noah has had some too, and is farther along the healing, coping path. Great chapter. Looking forward to more to come.
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Another amazingly well written chapter. I felt like I was right there with them, and wanting to tell Mitch to open his eyes to the love of his life standing there to be by his side no matter what. If time is short, it’s best to enjoy it and leave no regrets.
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This switch into their own bodies in the other world is very interesting. Lookin forward to where this goes
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That was an emotional roller coaster ride. Still not knowing how Nathan is feeling for Jason other than as a best friend…
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So some progress on the mate part. The missing notebook is troubling, Jason will have to redo that research.
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Great chapter with a lot more out in the open, and some emotional healing happening. StrikeLight, perhaps a taser?
