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Marc‘s Rachel,” she said. “And my God, sometimes I wonder which one of us is dating the guy. He talks about you constantly.” That sure made Sawyer think som more…. Glad they got to the point of agreeing to quit fighting their feelings for each other. Bruce is literally bigger than life, and seemingly a good friend. Keep the chapters coming.
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A great find in the search for stolen assets, and a fin day at the lake… it seemed like Randy may have been coming on to Trever, but they kept it all bro like. Something’s up with the little brother. Fun chapter.
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How did the young man know about the croissants?
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Unexpected Guests for Supper
VBlew commented on Biff Spork's story chapter in Unexpected Guests for Supper
David is now out to his parents with both his boyfriend and the Mara. That’s a big step. And River named him and is his sidekick. Another day of connecting with River in the Mara, and then possibly them meeting with Zhiv. Hopefully Hector and Celia will help protect the boys too. River may also come into a lot of pain being on the pig farm, and have to escape there, or possibly free the pigs? -
An old Victorian house with a secret passage on the first floor? Dues it lead to secret rooms? A basement with treasures? Time will tell😏
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The teacher is feeling guilty about what happened and trying to make amends, she was there with him when it happened and was actually the only one supporting him at the time. The trial was a complete farce, and she was unstable at the time to be able to help his defense. Perhaps the book is part of the reason he is out now?
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The boys are all getting closer. Jude’s attitude is worrisome though. Zhiv’s idea of sitting in the Mara with River for David to asses him is a good one. Looking forward to seeing what happens at dinner when Hector and Celia find that David is Pete’s son, who they saw playing on the mountain earlier in the day…
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Great story of a man wanting to raise children and gettin to in a most extraordinary way, and being a loving and caring parent with all of the trials and tribulations that accompany that. Well done.
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Fun chapter, and a great way of dealing with bigoted bully!
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Chapter 1.3 - The Fog over Lake Marron
VBlew commented on Simon Iskander's story chapter in Chapter 1.3 - The Fog over Lake Marron
This is an interesting story about dealing with the loss of a loved one. The character development is good, getting to see different parts of them. Looking forward to where you take this. -
I’m glad to hear you’re on your way to recovery. Excellent chapter. Great news on the Drakensberg Resort, and the launch of Lady Janice. Looking forward to reading about their couple of weeks on board. Is the crew still on vacation? I was thinking they would be there for the launch.
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Great chapter, I’m wondering if Trevor May actually meet his mate. I know in these stories not all of the characters meet their mates, like the Betas that he is staying with. But that would lock down his sexuality..
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Chapter 26 Be My Valentine
VBlew commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 26 Be My Valentine
If you imagine the qualities of the one you really want. They will show up when you’re not expecting it. That’s how I met my husband. -
It’s good Zafiro made the team!
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Thanks for an awesome story. And the coming out was very dramatic. And well accepted by their families. Nice ending on the roof looking at the stars. It is truly amazing what can be seen without the light pollution. Kind of a metaphor within the story.
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Was the box not showing Zafiro what the others were seeing? He was seeing blue sparks, and the others were seeing red blood? Or was it his augmentation showing him something different. Those voices are really annoying him too. Hopefully they can get something to get that fixed soon.
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It’s good to have you back with this story. Not that rough. I think you’re being hard on yourself. You did cover a lot of things going on simultaneously. Looks like Duane will get his wolf back, and that’s a good thing. Hopefully Greyson will git his head straightened out… Tala is getting close to the source of the problems again.
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Good for Dad. Hopefully everything was recorded and that will be enough for a hate crime defense. Maybe Dwight’s not dead, but that could be worse. Only one more chapter? Bring it on, this was a huge cliffhanger!
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Loved this chapter, a mysterious man looking. For Dante, Tani telling most of the truth about his past. Their love is sure and true in this incarnation. As to the trigger warnings question, that was very subtle the way you wove in the thoughts, but it does not seem obvious enough to warrant a warning, but I’m not a moderator either.
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Tonight’s Not About Bubbles
VBlew commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Tonight’s Not About Bubbles
The beginning of this chapter has some interesting interactions with Maddox and Jonathan.. do they have an idea of what's happening with Rusty, and are just helping him along.. Getting all dressed up and cologne is unusual so revealing that something else is going on in this relationship with Matty, not just mentor and mentee.. especially after they get to the party and he's anxious for Matty to arrive -
You got me on this one, glad that it was Lucas that he was to save, and that Macy was ok. Now to know more about who Jace was, and now that he has had this experience what will he do with his life. There is a definite attraction to Lucas. I did miss the earbuds…😊
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Chapter 35 - Epilogue 5 - The Beginning
VBlew commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 35 - Epilogue 5 - The Beginning
This world you’ve created and the stories you’re telling are most engaging. Looking forward to the next books. -
The Interrogation of Michael Anthony Loggerman, Cadet
VBlew commented on Jwolf's story chapter in The Interrogation of Michael Anthony Loggerman, Cadet
Corbin mostly killed 2 relationships in this farce of a trial. I feel for Mike. He is a good guy, and maybe this will push him back to only being with women, and never speaking with Corbin again. That was brutal. Are they going to bring Pete in next? A this point all Corbin has done is sow doubt for the charges… -
Was this a trap that Garjah new was coming? Bouncer will be all over whoever has Essell. He never leaves his side. Which is curious how the got separated in the first place unless these traitors planned it in advance.
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Loose Ends Tied & Culprits Caught
VBlew commented on Ticklishboy30's story chapter in Loose Ends Tied & Culprits Caught
Janice is caught again. So bad that she was able to bribe officers.
