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Excellent beginning. Loving the characters. Looking forward to where this relationship goes.
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Chapter 12 - All Hell Breaks Loose
VBlew commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 12 - All Hell Breaks Loose
Kris likes Dean, but what about Ethan? This could all come back on him if his work crush gets jealous and sabotages his possible new job. Hate to think like that, but it’s a possible outcome…. Leah’s doubts are not unfounded, unfortunately. Will she confront Dean when they meet again? To what end? Will Dean be able to stay true to who he is or hide back in the closet?- 11 comments
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Great chapter, the young lovers reunited. The bail hearing going as planned. A new witness, and further allegations to come for some crooked cops and a kinky commissioner… now to keep them all safe.
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Excellent chapter, minor scuffle on the dock. Kenny us save from killing. The boys have a quick reunion and are off on the plane…. Looking forward to the epilogue. And the next books.
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That comment about the time had me go back and look at the clock on the last few chapters. They are 98 days, and this one is 99 days… so either this happened before he was drugged, or the clock is off? Andrew needs to know he is loved by Will…. The fight with Jarod was just not himself… so it has to be the drugs. Will can’t quit now. There is too much at stake. I don’t think that action would relieve them of the Father’s actions wanting to destroy this family.
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Wow Steve was excellent at playing to the AI’s task… loved the Robin Hood action. 3 Trillion can do some good in the world. Wolf is stopped. What other good things can they use this very powerful AI for? Will Steve be able to retain access remotely? Looking forward to the reunion, Alex is going to need some recovery time.
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Damn, that drug is doing a job on Andrew, it’s not quite doing what the enemy expects, but how long lasting are the effects. What is it going to do to his marriage? Can Will compensate for it? Will is the king on the battlefield now, not the one living peacefully in the castle. Can he step up to that level of commitment? He has not backed down from fighting before, when necessary. Tommy pulls Jacob in so that they both are aware of their feelings, and have a first kiss.
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The end of the evening was amazing. Their growing connection. I do have a question about the dinner invitation, I thought that they all met at the art supply store that Kahiau works at? Maybe Eric thinks he doesn’t know about their background, but the store owner certainly did, so that’s why he explained his friends the way he did.
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Caleb asked for Carter, it didn’t specify which one…. Could be Andrew. I called it with the PlayStation… internet access was needed for those cameras, they’re just hopping on the backbone, hopefully they can describe where they are enough to get a rescue chopper there, and take some of that good food with them.
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Very glad Wishbone and Mason were reunited! Captain Williams needs some Orc attention…
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Good job Killian, tying the two cases together along with Micah’s article. Lots of corruption, hopefully no more ghosts involved, but knowing Killian’s past, there may be. He really needs to find someone to train him.
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The credit card tracing got them the help they needed. New equipment and good medical attention, albeit with a time limit on function… 12 hours… Kenny is now in charge of a “Technical” with a lot of firepower. They get cool toys. Steve needs to remove all of Wolf’s wealth with that AI. And see about wreaking some havoc on the backers.
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Where is Braden in all of this, just facilitating this farce. It’s upsetting how both Mason and Wishbone are being treated in this situation…
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Hopefully Andrew follows West’s leadership regarding the medication…. Loved the Peter story, and Tommy’s attempt to come out.
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That credit card usage, leaving a digital trail, so I’m thinking either his father, or Steve had the super AI track them down and it’s Brian calling to apologize…
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That was just cruel, and Braden is going to be severely reprimanded fo allowing this to happen…
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Arthur is a Jerk, and will later find that Creek was already interested in men. Does he have some internalized homophobia? Or is he just ignorant. Creek had told him to back off, but he must have said something to the parents for them to react so poorly. Dailan is a breath of fresh air, knowing how he feels, and stating it unequivocally. Now it’s up to Creek to decide what he wants. Marvin needs support too and has some from Emma.
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Chapter 35: The Lesson's Purpose
VBlew commented on astroguy's story chapter in Chapter 35: The Lesson's Purpose
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Wow. And that just the first chapter.
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Brad messed with the wrong guy this time. But will he know where Peter was taken to? Or was it just revenge?
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Wishbone was pretty viscous during that initial attack in the woods. This is an interesting turn of events.
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Just how straight is Len, when he keeps getting BJs from a guy 3 times a day? Maybe he just can’t admit he’s bi?
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Good fight, they have a map and a rifle now. Just need to get that silver bullet out of Barghast’s shoulder.
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What a gentleman, and an amazing introduction to Hawaiian cuisine. They are really enjoying each other and starting what I hope is a great relationship.
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Mason learns that maybe not passing the test to be a medic saved his life. This is Orc warefare, not playing by human rules…. Braden is still as crazy as ever.
