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  1. So much pride and loving support for the new family member.
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    Chapter 10

    What a great bonding day. I love hiking like that but it’s been a long time since I have. Alex’s questions are good, letting his dad know they are OK and he wants to get to know him better. This whole walking Jon off is just insecurity and he needs to face that, or he’s going to loose it. It also seems like Alex has more of a clue about that. And may be able to help…
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    Chapter 3 (11/11)

    Michael’s fighting is most definitely Psychic abilities. Zorro is still alive to continue fighting. And this is the beginning of Railroad…
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    Chapter 10

    We learn from Caitlin that this behavior of Joe’s has been happening longer that their conversation about Will loving him. Seems like wince he was out of his home he went crazy, but he did set Will up with Aidan, even if he didn’t consciously know they were both gay, their may have been a subconscious recognition. And the anger seems like a lot of internalized homophobia… The big question is who is in the pool? The story seemed to have started with drowned people in a river if I remember correctly, so it may not be Joey.
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    Fire!

    Great beginning, something from the ashes is brought forth.
  6. Fast pacing, love the characters already. Just the tension between Troy and Dylan… is Dylan gay too, and Jake was setting them up?..
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    26: Emmett

    This chapter was deep. Connecting emotionally, opening up. Still leaving some things unsaid, but in the end they are comfortable together. Wonder if being around a dragon would prolong the unicorn lifespan? Can’t wait for the dragon to come out and play.
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    Chapter 5 of 10

    So I’m wondering more about the missing underwear, the mystery man outside the strange dreams, and the pentagram that Troy wear. Then Ralph’s “accident” are they all connected?
  9. Gabriel forgot that just swallowing Ray’s cum wold be detected by the wolves at the party… We still don’t know what kind of shifter Ray is, he seems to be more than just a wolf. That magic bouncing off him was interesting. Seems like they need to truly bond soon.
  10. Great chapter, Rory is accepted by the Euphon, has a vision and is told it will take them all working together. Ash is going to wear down Desmond, they will be a great couple. Love the joint kings idea… the homophobia has to go… on to dinner, crowning ceremonies in both kingdoms…
  11. Blake seems like he may be a predator, and definitely doesn’t want anyone playing with a new toy before he has his chance. The boss employee relationship is headed right for a sexual harassment case…
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    Chapter 21

    Love that Tony is thinking of Adam and their business and for sure moving back to Thompsonville. Not sure about Randy Thompson for the pen name, could be a bit close to home for the Thompson family the town is named after… Adam was very helpful, and once he recognized Tony was overjoyed. He may need an invite to the party??
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    Chapter 2

    Loving the ticklish superheroes.
  14. Very interesting world building. Loving the story so far.
  15. That was a big cliffhanger. What is Mother, if she was not a wolf from the inter species breeding options? Ray now know that his presence can lead others who touch him to possibly start to shift. That means he could be used as a weapon… So much more to learn.
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    Chapter 1 SO

    Loving the relationship development, and they happen to be living in a gay friendly area, so hopefully that will help too.
  17. Damn, after waiting so long to talk with Greg, Bry finds he may just be too late.
  18. VBlew

    Rewards

    Beautiful chapter blending all of the religions in the household. What is Tankiso’s religion? Buddhist?
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    Chapter 9

    This inner dialogue of doubt is hard. He at least needs to talk with Jon about what he’s feeling, if he won’t be honest with his son…
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    Chapter 7

    Well handled, Aiden arrived in time and was able to get Will professional help right away. There is true caring there.
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    Contentment 

    Love the ending. Wonderful how all of their lives intersected.
  22. Lovely chapter. I was thinking Matt could be the minder, but maybe Vince is a better option, lawyer and all helping negotiate things. The piano is a huge success. This cult is something that definitely needs to be looked into.
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    Affection

    Interesting chapter, wonder what’s happening with his father?
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    Chapter 3 (2/11)

    Is Klaus a white wolf? And a psychic? He is a sword fighter instructor, I gather. Very interesting chapter, with the three musketeers together.
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    More than Maybe

    The setup for taking Jamie to see Luca’s film project was perfect. The reaction to seeing himself as the subject of the film, then the emotional unfolding afterwards, brilliantly done. So much in this chapter. Jamie is seen and loved.
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