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Great epilogue, to a wonderful story.
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The revelation that Maverick’s crypto investments would make him a multimillionaire astounded him. Now for some sophisticated additional investments. Orion is helping him. Just like he was mentored. Randy and Maverick are really good together. He will be moving sooner than later.
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Awesome fight scene, light overcoming darkness. Well done.
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Swimmers in competition have amazing bodies and physical stamina, the celebration is going to be amazing.
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Kieran passed the first trial on his second try. He needs to listen to what the Morain says. She gave him a huge clue that he ignored. I really like Garran. Hopefully Rory does not get too jealous of Kieran spending so much time together. I suspect the maid they were given of the plot against Garran, the smell of lavender being a giveaway?
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Like a slow drip. Loving the story, just wishing for more. We learn a little about his beginnings.
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Payback is a bit_h… Noah is completely in charge now. But will this end at the end of the reunion? Or continue on?
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An amazing journey. Thanks for sharing.
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Act II - The Point Of No Return
VBlew commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act II - The Point Of No Return
Did the vampires attack the witches and have Gabriel? Or dis something else happen? Ray has an innate sense of what needs to be communicated and just does. Timmy is awesome cheering Ray up from his funk. The suspense you are leaving us with in these chapters is palpable. Can’t wait for the next chapter. -
Cash is a true friend. He loves Jackson and wants him to have something good in his life. That whole rodeo scene was fantastic. All of the tension leading up to the kiss. Jackson needs to figure out what he wants.
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Loved the family time, and the talk about the essay and reading thereof. Good on Toby to leave out the relationship with Russ. He seems more perceptive than the guys were giving him credit for. The family time out at the various places was enjoyable too. Loved they included the Vegan restaurant for Toby. We’ve been vegan for like 13 years now. So always interesting to see people’s inclusion of that in stories.
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Oh, new test subjects for Emerson…
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Excellent chapter. They are working well as a team, supporting and encouraging each other including the youths. They definitely eliminated a lot of the potential threats. Maybe another run around with the loud dozer, just to draw out any missed?
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The new vehicle is going to come in handy. Maverick’s vacation turns into meeting up with someone he went to school with. And their stories support each other. Randy just needed a friend to share with and at Jules command, he did that. It’s interesting to see the crossover now happening between the 2 stories.
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Dinner is going well as it seems is the coming out.
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They have started dealing with their grief. There was a beautiful celebration of life for those killed. The trip to earth only took 5 days! Hopefully they get straight answers from the Brazilian leader. They will destroy the weapons in storage. And hopefully leave Earth better off. I’m also thinking that since Joel and Hank have had the conversations about loving each other before, that they may become a couple in the future.
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Chapter 28 - Aboard a Monster
VBlew commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 28 - Aboard a Monster
Seems like Nuji was tased, much better than being shot. We don’t know what this pair’s mission was so hopefully they will still be able to complete it. -
Seems like an interlude chapter. We do learn that the was “ditched” after learning all that his mentor thought he had to teach.
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Warren has improved his thinking on homosexuality and is now counseling on being gay. He still believes in his calling and being celibate. Maybe he will contact Elliot, they could compare how they are doing. Hard to believe he would cut his friend out of his life.
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Great intro to this character. Looking forward so seeing him develop.
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Definitely need more content. One time is not enough….
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Chapter 16:Gael meets Mia. Will everything go according to plan?
VBlew commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 16:Gael meets Mia. Will everything go according to plan?
So who drugged him and killed Mia? And it looks like the perfect setup. Something Ian had done before. -
They are so good together and are being honest about their feelings. Did someone hint that Danny may not be fully human? Could he have latent genes? Or be something else, just not know it? They do belong together. Hopefully the meeting with Pembrooke clears up the confusion about him being Ryder’s mate. That other seer missed something in her communication.
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The hot lawn man waking him up was a start, but it looks like the day is going well. The production company seem keen. Also pointed out the may have the cart before the horse, not having spoken with Mrs. Reynolds yet. I hope she is keen on the idea.
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Chapter 27 - More Organs
VBlew commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 27 - More Organs
Othering and Tigard, get to see first hand the cloning facility. They are right, this is so twisted for humans to perform “magic” so very differently than the seemingly good use that the magic beings on Earth harness magic.
