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Great ending. Still some unresolved feelings even if they did talk about it. Ellis granting protection seems very out of character… looking forward to the next book
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Trillion is having a tantrum, and taking it out on everyone around him. And he doesn’t believe in the god? Or just in the belief about the marriage? Ember knows more. They are both very special beings. Looking forward ronEmber’s POV.
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The first story is amazing. This one is starting with a bang.
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Great evening of 2 couples meeting and having a good time.
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Chapter 1 - How It Began
VBlew commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 1 - How It Began
Growing apart. Was Evan truthful about his time apart? Was what the other people said just something to get into J’s head? Evan seems serious about getting back together. They do need rules, so they don’t drift again.- 9 comments
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Now they both know how the other is feeling and has been for a while. And they are both getting into the same university, somehow.
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Part VII: The Forever Watch [Extra]
VBlew commented on Cap's story chapter in Part VII: The Forever Watch [Extra]
Absolutely amazing ending. These guys are the embodiment of a loving respectful couple. The sex is amazing. No hiding the truth, standing firm on their commitment to be there for each other. Loved the puppy, and the discussion about children. It is a future possibility. Thank you so much for sharing this. -
Great way to celebrate a league championship. Does this lead to more competitions?
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Killian is finally getting training on his gifts, and is lead by an ancient Shaman to the burial site. Interesting his spirit name and form are White Deer, probably the same one Killian has been seeing in the woods on other trips.
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Sam is still dealing with the deaths of his parents, from the nightmare to the sale of the horses. They are getting to know a little more about each other. Being able to ride abreast now they can get closer possibly.
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Reading through the script together, they are having fun. I’m worried if Braydon doesn’t try out for the male companion role that he’s going to get jealous of whoever is going to be kissing Charlie on stage…
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Fenn is tormented again, at least he now realizes Ain still loves him. He did good pulling Petre and Arlin to safety. Ain would have been miserable if he has accidentally killed them. Which windwalker took Ain?
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Great beginning. Maybe Emory will find out how Peter met Sam, but it seems like he has an obsession with Peter, that may or may not be healthy. Ali, seems like they will be helpful. Looking forward to this story?
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Yes, finally the reunion.The talk with Andy in the park was good. Maybe just the push Kitt needed. Now more decisions.
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Gabriel got seriously cut in that attack. How did they know where to find him? Seems like multiple parties are on the kill Gabriel train… Sean’s conversation with Michael seems to have helped both of them. Hopefully Michael and DJ can be boyfriends, but DJ seems to be very promiscuous, can he commit?
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Avoiding your friend just to process your fears. He finally got them together and it was unfounded. Kissing commences. Will the tell their friends?
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Jack thinks he’s hallucinating in this real, but it just seems to be magic manifesting. He saves Vee with the tree leaves. I’m feeling that the tree Theo found is not the one he was looking for. The boys need to find him soon.
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The mood the music, the realization of what has been in front of you all this time. The beach is beautiful in the moonlight. Hard to tell where this is going. Some of the first chapter was in flashback, so we know something changed, but not what yet.
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Bringing Up Himbo, Part Three of Three
VBlew commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in Bringing Up Himbo, Part Three of Three
They got together. And the possibility of a future together is there. The law of attraction is real, I was thinking that in the last chapter, Finn is the result of the work on the book, and Mr. Choi confirmed it. -
Morgan thinks she has outmatched them all, but she doesn’t know Simon is a warlock and has the book. This will be a good fight.
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Good cliffhanger. Will he be free to go or something else?
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Ain was able to get to Fenn before he got too destructive, the invisible man was able to take him down, and disable him. Then the Orinoco forces arrived. They’re going to be dead soon if Ain unleashes his power on them. How did they know where to show up? Seems like the Herald needs to be captured and held accountable too.
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Bran is doing much better after getting his sea legs. The first few days were rough. Lloyd is a good teacher and telling Wylan what he thinks he needs to know and Shaunterra him how to protect himself, and letting the sailors see the training so they’re aware if they try something they will likely get injured. Ser Val is amazing.
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There is a lot of foreshadowing in this. It seems like Julian is living an amazing life, but it’s all on the surface. I have a suspicion that Victor and Mark have something going on, just a hunch, but it’s clearly hinted at. That alone will devastate Julian, when he finds out.
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Steps Forward, Shadows Behind
VBlew commented on Tony S.'s story chapter in Steps Forward, Shadows Behind
Now with the phone number he can call Matt! Tom would let him use his phone. Good on the studying. He may even “graduate” before Matt, with the GED. Then he could try getting into Northbridge.
