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Chapter 1: The Inheritance
VBlew commented on astroguy's story chapter in Chapter 1: The Inheritance
Love the beginning. Seemed like he stepped into a time portal. Looking forward to reading more. -
Was this taken from real life? Seems like all of the characters were narcissists.
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Jesia is trying to give Leo options, even if it’s tearing him apart. Leo is working on his music, which is a good thing Mason seems like a good friend. Leo still has work on himself to do, but without professional help it may take a long time…
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Quatrième partie : Les Farineaux
VBlew commented on W_L's story chapter in Quatrième partie : Les Farineaux
It was a good night at the restaurant. The sous chef trying to take advantage of Reese’s inexperience was not nice. Reese is developing feelings for Dexter. -
Chapter 11: A Week’s Worth Waiting
VBlew commented on The Radish Spirit's story chapter in Chapter 11: A Week’s Worth Waiting
Glad for the new chapter and something to look forward to. Learning to use a sword. -
Wow, no wonder Micah really didn’t want to go to DC. This is a twist. Razi seemed to know something and this may be the murder. Possibly Killian’s extra perception will be needed to solve it…
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Very interesting that they had clones made for them to be killed off. On to Denver and house hunting.
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S2 E12: I Came From Dylan’s Apartment
VBlew commented on StoriesByTroy's story chapter in S2 E12: I Came From Dylan’s Apartment
Hot. I have a hunch who the photographer is going to be, and Troy is going to have to decide what he really wants… -
Chapter 1: River meets Zayn
VBlew commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 1: River meets Zayn
Interesting start, two desperate men needing each other for their financial needs… will it turn into more? -
Great story. The honesty of their relationship led to revelation that neither expected, but had a happy ending.
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That seemed to be a great voice for the then president, had no idea that back then he wanted Canada to be part of the US… Will handled himself very well, given the circumstances. It’s scary how much intelligence was known. Also, a question if Father has any connection there as well. We still don’t know who the attacker on Andrew was, or who sent them. It was assumed it was Father’s organization, but could be another source.
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Lyn is over Brad. Brad can only blame himself for putting Lyn and Alexander back together, at his wedding to a woman! Brad’s time with Lyn will be interesting. Alexander is marking his man, Lyn will be smelling of Alexander, and probably marked as well. Alexander keeps promising that Lyn will feel different after being penetrated by him, and I have a feeling that is true. Lyn is still clueless about how much Alexander wants to be with him.
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This was an interesting story, boys caught up in a spiral of abuse, then breaking out, at least for one.
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Snap, this was a trap. Will is good, can he make this good for himself and Canada?
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Part 1: Welcome to the Estate
VBlew commented on StoriesByTroy's story chapter in Part 1: Welcome to the Estate
Loving this so far. With Calvin calling him pretty boy, pretty sure he’s not straight… -
Graham is doing better with his self promotion. With the help of friends and acquaintances. Will be interesting to see what compensation and increased attention the radio program provides.
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Quinn took a very long time to reveal he started VIREX…
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This chapter confirmed what a good and secure man Jason is. Apparently he has had a long time to think about this and his love for Blake. He is not hiding or shirking away from this. Would make a great sermon on Sunday, too! He is not his father.
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Interesting beginning to this book. Looking forward the solving of the mystery of the curse.
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Oh… some interesting things happened in this chapter. Zac explained his adventure with Q, Jacob had some interesting experiences while sparring with three of his brothers. The fact he learned his shadow sword could be fatal to Nave. And he exploded the area like a bomb. But has no idea how that happened. Then Q’s father shows up. Maybe he has answers?
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The meeting went well with Noah, and Killian made som new friends. The name association thing I totally get, but it doesn’t seem like a good thing for a detective to have. Micah changed his mind scout going to DC with Killian, but there is something bothering him about his past there.
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(Duplicate of Entry 68 - Sorry)
VBlew commented on D.K. Daniels's story chapter in (Duplicate of Entry 68 - Sorry)
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West is the perfect man for the job. Seems like maybe Will was unknowingly set up for something that can be perceived improper, but actually wasn’t. Seems like religious bigotry exists all over, and their beliefs that they can control a country…. This just gets more interesting.
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What a beautiful ending to this very interesting story. The men were finally able to be together, in peacetime after their service time is over. The house sounds nice.
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Interesting arrangement in their marriage to avoid secrets… not sure that would work in a typical relationship, they have a very special bond. Though this is bothering Andrew, and seems to have him questioning Will, and what secrets he may actually have. Now to defuse the bomb that this info could be. Seems all to revolve around this mysterious “father” person.
