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Great ending. Florian has to keep reminding Toby that he loves him.
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Great short story. Fortunately the guys were not jealous of their partners.
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The family is growing up. The plans for the corporation age going well. Marc finds two of the youngest in bed oh his shuttle. Maybe they are bonding? Or just having fun, either way, dinner should be interesting. They don’t have anything to be embarrassed about. They have excellent role models in their parents.
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They are growing closer. I loved the waking up scene. He was not ready for the straightforward Egaro willing to show him how to be a good lover…. Leo does not do spicy food well.
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Chapter 4: The Cage
VBlew commented on BrokenBoundariesGayErotica's story chapter in Chapter 4: The Cage
The domination, and the subordination in this, the anticipation are amazingly written. I do wonder if Blake is going to be able to still function at a high enough level to maintain his job, all of his attention seems focused on serving Sean. Seem almost debilitating. The cage restraint is very interesting, custom made. This is not Sean’s first foray into having a boy… -
This camouflage seems like a really goo idea. Will be interesting to see if the others can find the ship when they want to return…
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Act II - Empty Chairs At Empty Tables
VBlew commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act II - Empty Chairs At Empty Tables
Ray waking up without his mat, goes looking for him… only to find out the witches have him. Renato steps in to save Ray from whatever Mother was planning on extracting from him. Very sad chapter. Ray is not a warrior at this point to go save Gabriel, so mother is sent with a warning… hopefully she succeeds. -
Amazing chapter. Is Aiden really that clueless about Sev? Why did his date know all about him and know nothing about her? I can see Tak being a really good friend for Sev, he doesn’t seem to have many.
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Zdain, is too stuck in his guilty feelings to consider that Josel would like more than friendship. Danae is going to stir things up. Wonder if she will tell Josel they are related?
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Fun start, quick paced. Looking forward to the rest.
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Glad for the update, seems like they will all be converging on the same place. Very good to follow the Fairy’s advice.
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That phone theft was a bad thing, but maybe there is something there that they can use as a defense? Victor is a bad guy, thinking he deserves to be seen by his only friend, that he bullied into being his friend.
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Nice background for the formation of the house. In the future it has magic wards. So something else seems to happen with this. The Aunt was a seer, but religious, and has lost that sight…
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Ash had been hinting about wanting children so at some point one of them has to get pregnant… and in this world is seem only special male Fae and women can do that…. But that could be years in the future. I really loved the strategy session. That shadow magic of invisibility will be coming in handy, I’m sure. Great advice by both Rory and Kieran. Looking forward to more.
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Chapter 2: HR Wouldn't Like This
VBlew commented on BrokenBoundariesGayErotica's story chapter in Chapter 2: HR Wouldn't Like This
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They could have had something for him to snack on knowing he was going to be hungry after turning… hopefully a human doesn’t get in the way.
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Beautiful short story. It took a caring mother’s intervention to get these guys together, and it led to a happy ending.
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Chapter 15 - The Human
VBlew commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 15 - The Human
Now a possible human rebel to join them? -
They really seem meant for each other.
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This chapter had a beautiful coronation, a battle royal, a rescue, games, sex and a speech of hope. This old Fae Zareth needs to be called out for his treason and executed or stripped of magic? Desmond and Ash are hilarious. They will be good spies.
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Maybe the relaxing time will help Leo. I still don’t get why he won’t get his tongue fixed… but as a plot device it’s working.
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Not sure how much power the witches have with the King gone, that this is even worth the trade of a potential heir. The vampires will come but how soon, and with the return of many shifters the may be able to hold them back. I’m thinking this is a very bad thing and Ray is going to be very upset, maybe not at Gabriel but this seeming betrayal of his mate is going to have consequences…
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I was surprised at Alan’s reaction, and his feeling he was violated. The discussion afterwards was good. And I agree he needs to do some more soul searching. He doesn’t want to be labeled gay for some reason…. The upcoming date should be interesting. Was Alan’s “keep your distance”something other than health reasons?
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This was an unexpected twist. Maybe it will bring them closer together. Jim needs to learn some mental health skills and quit spiraling thing out of proportion. Some meditation practice for example. Will he bring Jon to meet the boys, outside of Alex’s training? That could be a big step forward.
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Jasper is taking notice of Ryan and encouraging him. After initially misjudging him. Hopefully the relationship grows to help each be better.
