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Chapter 8: The Mistake
VBlew commented on BrokenBoundariesGayErotica's story chapter in Chapter 8: The Mistake
That was intense. The end where he was told the risotto was delicious seemed really wrong. Like lying for effect rather than the truth. -
Seems like Killian has some psychic abilities, seeing Seth is something. tread carefully with this murder. Hopefully bring Novak in..,
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Mother’s questions & queers dancing
VBlew commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Mother’s questions & queers dancing
Loved this chapter. Mum wanting to know more about who her son was dating, all ok with it. The invite for them to the Grange. Interesting the band has a gay following, and they get their first dance in public, a huge step for Matt. -
Chapter 4: What changes will time bring?
VBlew commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 4: What changes will time bring?
Oh, just when it looked like everything was going well someone from Jace’s past appears. Was this before Noah? Guess we have to find out… nice cliffhanger -
That was an ordeal, but in the end the police were actually looking out for him. Sperm donor is going to find out what happens for assault and filing false claims. I noticed that the money coming into the education account was not from his father? So who or what is the source? Maybe it will continue and he will ba able to complete his education. And then pursue his art.
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Jack seems to be insinuating that the and Vince may be kissing Theo in the future, possibly to become pack members? On their way to confront Cassandra. Maybe the 2 Alphas can take her down. Did Danny bring his toaster?
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Seems like Aurelio likes playing with his older brother. He has very bold clothing choices. Loved that there was enough concern to have him tested for color blindness. Such a loving family.
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Another reunion, of brothers. Great way to end this book. Looking forward to more stories with all of these great characters.
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Beautiful ending to this book. I was concerned seeing complete on this story. Now I’m excited for further stories with these amazing guys.
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[Memory, Freshman Year, Winter Break] – Two Types of Friends
VBlew commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in [Memory, Freshman Year, Winter Break] – Two Types of Friends
Lyn has feelings for both guys, just not sure about either. -
Interested to hear more from the Dr, like we read in his son’s story. Egypt is so interesting with all of their ancient history.
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Brother Mathias is a formidable foe. Having to learn about the source of the knowledge that Amelie learned from her family. What will he become? Power can be wielded for light or dark, and his past has been very dark indeed…
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Loved this short story. Interesting that the impetus for his transformative time was a Clark Gable movie… loved the happy ending. Sometimes you just need a little push in the right direction.
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Beautiful ending to this part of the story.
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I had the same thought as @Paladin the uneasy feeling, and the dangerous situation, just seemed to be linked because they are in the same chapter. Hopefully it can all be tickled away.
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Act III - Master Of The House
VBlew commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act III - Master Of The House
Powerful chapter, what a twisted web there is, interesting seeing the different perspectives, and what each thinks they know and are aware of. nice cliffhanger. enjoy your travels. -
Things are moving quickly, and listing the flat furnished souls get multiple offers.
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Awesome chapter. And the possibility of another defrocked priest? They unlocked the bond between the 4 of the with some very hot sex… having the old Fae king still alive could be a great thing for Garran, they need to tell him.
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Nice to be out of the hospital. Dads are happy he is home. Have in the computer available to teach him will help as well as having gAI. The sex toys were a surprise.
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Both now single, maybe they will pursue something more.
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Every New Beginning Comes From Some Other Beginning's End
VBlew commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Every New Beginning Comes From Some Other Beginning's End
Great conclusion of the book, the holidays were good for the guys. Baseball seems to be a good thing for the good guys. Gavin is making huge progress. Can’t wait for the next book. -
It’s good they reconnected, even though it was an accident of Grandma Bridge. There is a spark of something, and it was Todd making the move to ask the Dr to drinks…. Frost very much wants to keep his professional life and personal life separate.
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Chapter: What lies ahead for Noah and Jace?
VBlew commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter: What lies ahead for Noah and Jace?
So the Elija playing with Rain is very different from the version he presents to Jace and Noah. So easy to just disown your son again, really? Have to wonder if this is just an abusive family relationship passed down. He could try harder. The boys do love each other, and now realize how much. Hopefully it stays that way. -
That was good news about the coins, and gettin a few professionally graded to get max value is a good thing. If the don’t need the funds for anything urgently, them keep the coins as they are is a good option as well. They also have the option of buying stocks that in the very long term could make them even wealthier. Having a financial advisor in the family really helps too. This way they can focus on working doing what they are passionate about and not work just to pay the bills to live.
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Calm before the Storm
VBlew commented on Absolute Debauchery's story chapter in Calm before the Storm
It seems like Peter is a good guy and really likes his brothers, but Lucien is on this sadistic mission to get back at Bruno, and can’t see how destructive it is to himself.
