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Wow, that was a brutal cliffhanger, this chapter had so much going on. Zain chose to be human until he could figure out his powers. The Order is seemingly bent on evil, not good. Hopefully Zain will be able to withstand whatever they try doing to him. Without his magic he is useless to their purposes. Will the effects of the pills wear off and Hadrian be able to use his powers again to rescue Zain? Does the tunnel where the light last shown lead to Earth? Does Bashar really want to give up another son? He already lost one, possibly two for his twisted purpose. His wife probably wants his head for having the first one killed. So many thing yet to know.
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So Creek has two guys crushing on him….
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Interesting that CSIS has a chess board set up. Also, you have the story marked complete, but keep adding chapters?
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Making the decision to buy a place without consulting your boyfriend is not a good way to start a relationship, but Jasper is not thinking that way yet…
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Chapter 14: The Morning After
VBlew commented on BrokenBoundariesGayErotica's story chapter in Chapter 14: The Morning After
Mason was fully alert when he followed Eli and watched him with Coach. So why is he playing this game of being blackout drunk? Is he afraid of wanting Mason, so still playing straight. He is at least bi-curious… -
Wonder who thought he needed a working heart and left it for him?
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Chapter 12: Where Is Crescendo?
VBlew commented on Jason D. Karl's story chapter in Chapter 12: Where Is Crescendo?
Calling on all special people to band together. Maybe they will be though to change the laws? -
Love in Disguise at Halloween
VBlew commented on Rafy's story chapter in Love in Disguise at Halloween
Lovely story. I figured out the costume switch, the modulated voice really hiding the person in the werewolf costume. It’s true, sometimes we need masks to be authentic. -
Great conclusion to this book.
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So next they need to find the boy and have a paternity test done ASAP…. Will is even unaware that he was possibly raped.
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Pumpkin and Tea - Tom & Kevin
VBlew commented on Celian's story chapter in Pumpkin and Tea - Tom & Kevin
Tom is a loving supportive man, and apparently exactly what Kevin needs in his life right now. Away from an abusive upbringing. -
Very interesting, quite the dilemma. Looks like they worked it out.
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Cinquième partie : Le Poisson
VBlew commented on W_L's story chapter in Cinquième partie : Le Poisson
The Oxi took the edge off, but will it become a dependency? Will Reese wake up and regret his actions? He did want it, but under these conditions? -
This should get interesting. Chris, probably will be an amazing asset. And maybe learning more about the escort business will loosen Killian’s attitude
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Chapter 5: Feelings on the edge. But whose?
VBlew commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 5: Feelings on the edge. But whose?
Harry is a manipulative bastard. River is such a good person, and Zayn really doesn’t deserve him.- 29 comments
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Mirror of Dreams, interesting device. The coincidence of these people coming together is very interesting.
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Yes, Will is going to make an excellent PM. Andrew endorsing him. The villains are going to be sorry they messed with this family! Looking forward to the next book.
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Creek is so oblivious to his surroundings. Max and Art could be good role models.
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Very beautiful chapter of the two surrendering to the other for their own needs. They were both anxious going into the shower. At the end they had transcended that to something more. Still don’t know how far Kenny wants to go with this first time of intimacy. He still needs to undress…
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Interesting multidimensional portal walking into the house. Which one will come out and what will the world the return to be like?
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Beautiful, their love together saved the world from the singularity, and their fractured selves.
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That was very interesting. Will is now analyzing what it means and possibly who is behind it. Are the forces wanting Will to get out and into the fight and possibly be assassinated by his new security person? So many possibilities of intent happening. I’m so loving this book.
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Glad to have you back sharing this story. Sorry to hear you lost work on your device. I suppose that’s why cloud storage is so popular now. If the device fails, the data is preserved. The children are enjoying time with their grandparents.
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Interesting, maybe an overlap between times, or real ghosts?
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Leo keeps running around trying to avoid Jeisa who saved his life, literally and he’s pining over others. Or just wanting out of a situation he feels trapped in. I wonder if Jeisa came to the tournament to watch and see how well his bonded does, and if the will interact. If so, Will it upset Mason, not being told Leo is already bonded?
