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The healed vampire has extraordinary strength and silver does not seem to affect him any longer… did the graze of Gabriel’s fang on Ray’s neck cause something to happen? Or was his healing something inherent in him? Seems he may already be some kind of shifter, just had not shifted before? At the end of this he still wants answers. Will he change with this full moon? can’t wait to see what happens next.
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Interesting that he needed to get up and write. Sometimes I believe that’s our subconscious bringing out ideas an it’s good to capture them. The morning walk was interesting. This house keeps coming up. Seems like foreshadowing to me. The introduction by Scott of the guys was brilliant.
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Chapter 4: Gael's world gets rocked. Is it in a good way?
VBlew commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 4: Gael's world gets rocked. Is it in a good way?
Gael is very different now. He is much stronger after the trials he’s been through. -
I had to go look. I haven’t seen any story of Joshua Thatcher here on GA. So am I right to assume this is a story coming soon? Loved the Blue Whale analogy. And we know from Eric’s story he is a billionaire.
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Chapter 6: The Distance Between Us
VBlew commented on Hikaru29's story chapter in Chapter 6: The Distance Between Us
Oh hell, Adrian help save Aelios from his nemesis Kaelen, who tells him that Lord Theron is still alive. So he is going to have to kill him all over again. Bit maybe with Adrian at his side, he will be able to. Will Aelios have to make Adrian a vampire for them to be together forever? -
Such a beautiful love story. Meeting with Steven the coffee roaster, who genuinely wanted to know about them, now a cheerleader for them. The time at home getting more into a rhythm, and realizing they belong together. Now breaking the news to the sons…
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So, I’m wondering if this “phantom” empires heart is from the future? As we have no knowledge that in this timeline the ship can open wormholes… this seemingly is the time when Luther and Richter were in the throes of passionate lovemaking if I remember from the other story where Luther’s memory was hidden from him by Richter. So much more to uncover. Fantastic storytelling.
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Some progress, a good shower, showing the food replicator, although not quite right. But getting there.
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Chapter 2: Christian isn't giving up.
VBlew commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 2: Christian isn't giving up.
Smoldering tension between Miguel and Christian…hopefully they will overcome their differences, get Christian’s father freed, and find common ground. -
Luther saved a stunned Abel from the phantom, then the abandon ship and speed away. 2 Empire’s Heart ships? Who or what is controlling the drones from the other ship? Someone with Richter’s level of psychic abilities?
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Hearst was called in to consult, and was lovingly embraced by his boyfriend, even if he’s not ready for that label yet. Jamie’s manager was right on target Jamie is being maliciously maligned by the folks at Livefeed. After a couple of blowjobs the guys need to get to strategy.
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The boys kicked ML out of their group. The will be better off without her. Things are going to begin to stop working, like the electricity, then running water, etc. they will definitely need to band together with others.
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True feelings come out now. No more lies. Maybe Joshua has enough treasure to quit being a pirate?
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Yes, Luther saved his lover. And the plan to blow everyone up was averted.
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Part One: I'm Never Gonna Pass...
VBlew commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: I'm Never Gonna Pass...
I’m thinking that Devin saw Brandon around Tyler that day they spent in bed…. And he’s upset Tyler didn’t tell him about it…. Asshat is right. Talk, kiss or hug, and make up. This teacher is going to be a pain. Maybe there is another class he can improve on? -
I’m thinking like Andromeda Strain, but that was a virus, not a gas. Where else does that water drain into? Lots of dead people…
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Seems like all of their foes showed up at the same time… where are the youngsters in all of this chaos?
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Act I - Oh, What A Beautiful Mornin'
VBlew commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act I - Oh, What A Beautiful Mornin'
Interesting turn of events. His blood did seem to revive the almost gone vampire, so you could see his desire to have more of Ray… on the other hand, he does seem to be like a possible bond mate to Gabriel, who still doesn’t smell him, but is instinctively protective of him. Ray is right to ask these questions. Who am I? -
Hopefully Lucas will recover and get justice he deserves for being beaten by his uncle. And maybe the guys going to see him will help too.
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Part One: It's Not You, It's Not Me
VBlew commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: It's Not You, It's Not Me
The interaction with Matt was interesting. He paused after sayin that Tyler was like his old man, then he probably liked Brandon, and did not say that Mr. Scott was not his old man. That mystery is still hanging out there. And may lead to a hurt Tyler. They both need to talk with each other about their feelings. And why is Tyler still on time out with Devin? -
A nice ending, two boys got a loving and supportive family. From what started out with a disfunctional Bart running from an intimate relationship, to having a loving husband and family. Great story.
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Excellent chapter, with all of the estate information laid out by the lawyer. The family legacy mentioned a few times. Heir became something implied but not stated outright. Thinking that will be an interesting topic. On to London.
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Just when things seemed to be getting better….
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Had to go back and read that chapter, somehow missed it. Now this makes much more sense, being threatened at gunpoint to put this collar on. Hopefully they get some rest, and find a way to get the collar off without electrocuting him…
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Abel got a kiss in the middle of his I’m sorry speech, and is totally thrown off kilter. They do make a good team. Why would he have put on another collar though?
