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    So Matt has more “queer” friends, even a best friend since high school, who looks very familiar to Brandon. Why was Matt so insistent that Jesse know Tyler was Brandon’s boyfriend? I sense a red herring here with an implication that Jesse is Tyler’s “Old Man” Brandon gets a job with Matt. The whole scene with Ashley was hilarious. Brandon is taking his relationship status seriously, refusing to do anything with Ryan, even to the point of getting hurt.
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    Family

    VBlew commented on empath's story chapter in Family

    Walter looks like he is going to make it. Will this life changing event have him come out? Who else did Mr. Sampson want dead? 4 people? This Wolf is going to get caught. Micah’s time as boy ended. He was a hero.
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    Act II - Helpless

    VBlew commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act II - Helpless

    Ray gets trotted all around by a very proud Gabriel. The change back to human form now accomplished their Mate desire for each other is full on. Seems like some pleasure is coming up.
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    Scarlet deserves the evil one in her. Now with a nights rest, the Queen is back, Lachlan’s death didn’t kill her too, was it because their bon was so weak and he had married Scarlet? On with the Fae elders to the lake to crown Rory.
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    Being Seen, Maybe

    VBlew commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Being Seen, Maybe

    Luca is helping Jamie let his light shine in the world, getting him out into an artistic community where he can see more potential in himself. Love the development of their relationship. They both like watching the other sleeping. Jamie just captured his impression on paper.
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    So this is a huge redemption from the last chapter…. Who is Gael’s secret partner? Alex? He just destroyed two families with one move.
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    Chapter 5

    VBlew commented on Josh Aterovis's story chapter in Chapter 5

    Will finally admitted out loud that he’s figuring out his attraction. Nikki sees talent in his work and shows him what good framing can do, and he’s surprised. Seem like living away from his parents is a good thing. Aiden is very good for him as well.
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    Friendly banter in the bathroom. I’m still thinking Dylan was crushing on Tyler. Brandon does have some mental work to do with his new relationship status.
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    Irresistible

    VBlew commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Irresistible

    How long will it be before Ryder figures out that Theodore is not his true mate? Will Danny be able to resist temptation that long?
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    Wow, just when it seems crazy, you ratchet it up to the next level.
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    Chapter 6

    VBlew commented on Mark Ponyboy Peters's story chapter in Chapter 6

    Beautiful chapter, so much loving support from the family. Kieran has a huge weight lifted off him.
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    Stilettos

    VBlew commented on empath's story chapter in Stilettos

    So, Walter was the target. Who ordered the hit, his father? Will there be fingerprints on the weapon? Will Walter live, and come out? With Micah as a new friend Teyshawn may get pulled into Liberty Academy’s sphere and protection even more than he unknowingly already is.
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    I think Buffy landed in a tree where everyone could see it. The sex is not worth the drama with Nathan. I’m still rooting for Rory to come out.
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    Chapter 42

    VBlew commented on P. E. Knapp's story chapter in Chapter 42

    Another fun vacation, then on to business. The newly bonded DuPonts bring an interesting opportunity. Marc is so decisive that he is prepared to leave early and possibly merge the corporation in on the way home. Robin and Pierre seem genuine to want to save the legacy of their family heritage.
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    Great start on this story. From one of your comments, is this something autobiographical?
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    Chapter 17

    VBlew commented on Mark Ponyboy Peters's story chapter in Chapter 17

    Great chapter, and with Tony sharing the part of his life he never told anyone else about, with Aaron that was huge. I hope Aaron realizes that. They really are good together. I’m betting one of the things he asked Harry about is the abandoned house.
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    Alex Comes Out

    VBlew commented on Late to the party's story chapter in Alex Comes Out

    Funny moment in the past.
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    I really like your writing and having both the Prequel and Sequel here would be good for continuity of the stories. Would give us the knowledge of how the hand came to be. And for sure the Sequel to see what kind of world Alex and Jacques create together.
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    Insecurities

    VBlew commented on empath's story chapter in Insecurities

    Interesting chapter, rich pretentious girls, and boys hiding in the closet. Who is the Wolf’s target? Walter? Interesting to see some of these familiar characters in this new story. Looking forward to where it goes.
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    Nice ending for this part. I agree Marcus needs to go home. Jacques and Alex have an alliance, it may still take some time for them to be lovers, after the torture they went through.
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    Chapter 40

    VBlew commented on KKirk's story chapter in Chapter 40

    Calvin is a lot bolder now that he has come out to his Dad. Curious about why Alan said Fuck, just as Jordan was leaving for work? Is he realizing that he has feelings for Jordan? What will happen waned Jordan tells him he doesn’t want to expose himself at the parties?
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    Great mystery, the defense was pretty good getting him off the murder charges… glad there was enough to get him locked up. That was his undoing.
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    Chapter 2 (3/6)

    VBlew commented on RedMoon's story chapter in Chapter 2 (3/6)

    Seems like they are setting Zorro up for home to get info from Porthos. To avoid seeing him tortured more… shivers from the absolute cruelty of the goldens. Much like what happens in the future, still torturing.
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    Interesting they decided to go out but are disconnected from the people around them.
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    Nice chapter.
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