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Wow, that was sad what happened to Dailan, and sharing it with Creek may have helped him heal some more. And Marvin explained where his head was at. Wanting to be friends. Though, if he hadn’t run into Creek at the cafe, would he have reached out? He had been silent for a while. Glad Creek is in a good place now too.
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This is very good seeing this from Barghast’s perspective.
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Chapter 31: Physical Skills Class
VBlew commented on astroguy's story chapter in Chapter 31: Physical Skills Class
Interesting that Agility ability seems to make things appear to move in slow motion. Like super speed. -
Back to the beginning again. I really like these two. They were stuck in a time loop in the last story.
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Hopefully Shane just had to go get some test done and was not abducted.
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This chapter had some interesting sex… Jesse started to get into the controlled pain. The gaming might give Shaun another outlet for his want to see blood, but could also become a distraction from the music. The interaction with Brian and Shaun is so sweet. Sam got his knife back to Shaun, and Jesse would be pissed about that if he knew. Interesting about the Nurse and the stolen identity… that could be a real way to get back at Erin.
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Chapter 30: Shower, Dinner, and Dessert
VBlew commented on astroguy's story chapter in Chapter 30: Shower, Dinner, and Dessert
That being versatile in this universe is unknown. The gene therapy story is a good cover especially since he is so much more endowed than most of the population. -
What a beautiful ending to this very interesting story.
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Chapter 29: Back to the Dorm to "Relax"
VBlew commented on astroguy's story chapter in Chapter 29: Back to the Dorm to "Relax"
Curious how many points he will get for that little orgy, also maybe a top session with Caio later on. -
Mac and that burner phone, doesn’t seem like it’s made up. That much back and forth between 2 people for that long, especially if there are photos… If he goes to jail and that is found out, he probably won’t last long.
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Now, not only does Alex know but so do Steve and Kenny. hopefully they can make a hasty retreat and not get caught.
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What does Brian know about the dam? Or was he supposed to lead Alex there for capture??? It doesn’t seem likely they would have been sent there to try to get the Dam back from the Wolf. So it must have been something else…
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The Thing About Konstantin Is...
VBlew commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in The Thing About Konstantin Is...
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So he has to watch out for more bullies now. Seems like he did a great job avoiding being hit. And not showing off too much.
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Chapter 15: A Family "Thing"
VBlew commented on Jason D. Karl's story chapter in Chapter 15: A Family "Thing"
Emily’s powers are way beyond everyone else’s. Maybe she can do good and save the country from AHOLE? -
Wow, an amazing ending to this story. Hopefully these guys are as successful in their family as Peter’s fathers have been in theirs.
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Damian needs to be brought up on charges for drugging Jasper. Wow, what a demented soul.
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Prologue: Where it all begun!
VBlew commented on vanalas's story chapter in Prologue: Where it all begun!
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Some Answers and More Questions
VBlew commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Some Answers and More Questions
Theo thinks Jack is too puny to take him on in bed. I’ll bet the mouse has more going for him, and will surprise both of his lovers…- 15 comments
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If Alexis had been floating out in the harbor was he tossed off a boat? Or did the current take him out there? And typically dead bodies don’t float, so did he have some floatation device on? Who is the mystery man who keeps showing up in Rick periphery?
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That action by Andrew seems counter to the good guy we have seen previously. Brian is being manipulated, for sure, but he will get out, and then he and Alex can possibly get back together, but probably not in Canada.
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Braden is getting better, Mason is just wary.
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Chapter 15 - Date Night Gift
VBlew commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 15 - Date Night Gift
Beautiful dinner. The intro to the parents seemed to go well. -
I really liked the Joel and Colt banter in the AG class, Colt catching on to Joel paying close attention to the hot teacher, who seemed to have caught on to the attention as well. Maybe he is out and could be a good mentor to Joel? it would also do him good to do some more riding lessons, he could learn to like it.
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Beautiful ending to a very dramatic story.
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