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I had an interesting thought after reading this chapter. Is any of this related to Kieran’s father wanting a different kind of son? Was Ben brought in to forge a man who could take over the family business??
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Jody finally got to be a top, so now he’s versatile.. it also will help him be a better bottom. Junior year is ahead.
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Maybe the brother need to connect with the bad nurse boy, then all get caught with the illegal drugs. The beginning was good, the ending tragic. Hunting accident would be good. Shaun does not need murder on his hands, he has a family to live for.
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Good on Jasper, even in his mental state for standing up for himself.. his drinking is a problem that he needs to address too. Ryan really messed up, he should have called the police….
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Great work. I would love to see what happens with them after this. The story stands on its own very well.
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The apologies were good. His mental health seems to be improving. Using gAI to assist with the learning in class seems to be a good thing. The VR training seems to be working. The Prof did not buy the more cum absorbed the better he got reason… that is part of it, but not all of it. He needs to be ready for this next trip into space… hopefully no more saboteurs….
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So just the beginning with oral, Will Theo mate Jack and bite him? Will He do that to Vince as well? Do they need to go that far to get through the Veil. Seems like Theo finally let his guard down and embraced his 2 mates.
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@Topher Lydon this entire series around Merrickville is a lot like Dabeagle’s Sanitaria Springs. There is definitely something in the water, gay boys either grow up there or are attracted there, and they learn to support each other, and for the most part have support from the community. This chapter shows Alvin’s self reliance, and his willingness to ask for help when needed. The town supports them both. Tabby’s postcards are both a geographic journey as well as a reflection of his inner journey back to his home with Alvin. Seems like they both needed this time apart. Love the Jeep being Peters coming into their lives, it has a lot of gardening history…
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Love the beginning of this SciFi story. Maybe it was Mark saying the name written on the outside of the chrysalis that started the revival? Will be interesting to get more background on both of them. This tech was more advanced than the space faring race who brought space travel to earth? Is he from the future?
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Seems Adrian has his own past he is wrestling with. Hopefully they don’t wait too long to really connect.
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Finis: Graduation and Beyond
VBlew commented on Invnarcel's story chapter in Finis: Graduation and Beyond
Great ending to a very interesting story. Love the world you created, and most of the characters. -
Fun short story.
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Ryan needs a restraining order agains Damian, then if this happened, he could call the police and it would be Damian in jail for the night…
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Wow great interaction with the opposing sides. Nice Cliffhanger. Is it Q in the world as a human? Or a doppelgänger? This should be interesting.
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Chapter 60: Weekend Recovery
VBlew commented on astroguy's story chapter in Chapter 60: Weekend Recovery
This was building up. He was having sex as an escape but also with a purpose, so he could improve an ability. Matter manipulating seems to need some additional component that neither he nor gAI know about yet. -
The interaction with the bird was delightful, can’t help touching where you’ve been warned. It is surely true of parrots, they have once bites and others that would take off a finger. The new clothes sound amazing and make him look amazing. Still trying to imagine what the more human form is like. Does he have a snout, or more human face?
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Are people targeting Shawn for some kind of abduction? His teacher is backing him up and knows about 2 abilities. The director assumes just 2 abilities too, but picked Strength for the 2nd one….
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That was awesome mentoring Billy.
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Nice reconciliation of the brothers.
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This snuck in and captured my attention. Looking forward to how this story plays out.
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This is not just bullying, it’s like stalking. How did they know where to find the guys?
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Preparing to Lose Everything
VBlew commented on Littlelovestories's story chapter in Preparing to Lose Everything
Ace made a good decision going to the counselor. Now for some other decisions. -
Loved the baking lesson Brian granted. And the exchanging of information to get a little more background on out previously intrepid young men. Now they have something to build on, the initial tension broken, and sleeping in bed.
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Chapter 3: A room full of unlocked doors
VBlew commented on Kileoli's story chapter in Chapter 3: A room full of unlocked doors
Very interesting this app. And then is the responder a person or AI? -
Frosted Hearts: The Gay Bar
VBlew commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Gay Bar
Interesting chapter, Five dressed up his boyfriend like a gay Ken doll… the scene at the gay bar was interesting, Ethan was horny thinking he could get something going, but Percy seems committed to Five now, even if he is flirty… I could imagine the scene on the dance floor, reminded me of my early days in dance clubs.
