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Act I - Into The Unknown
VBlew commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act I - Into The Unknown
Such funny banter. Then into an area he should not have walked into apparently. Now a vampire? Nice cliffhanger. -
Oh Dillian, where art thou?
VBlew commented on garfwiz's story chapter in Oh Dillian, where art thou?
Glad to have you back continuing this story. Lots of things falling into place for Tala, not so much for others. Sounds like Tala is going to be fighting with his grandfather… -
Richter is learning inter species etiquette, and more about the academy.
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Part One: Rejection Is Never Easy
VBlew commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: Rejection Is Never Easy
It seems like Tyler is being honest with himself about his feelings, and was able to open up to new girl in town, Christine. I think it will be harder to tell his best friend. -
What a change in Rory after they enter Fae territory. He instinctively knows what things will heal, and are good to eat. It does seem like morning sickness… so maybe he is pregnant. Seems like Kieran was right about something not good following them. Now it was Rory’s turn to be the hero. These new Fae are very funny, teasing them.
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Great beginning. Looking forward to all of the series.
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Jerry Fits In and More Time Goes By
VBlew commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Jerry Fits In and More Time Goes By
This group seems to have dropped any inhibitions they may have had. After Jake and DM had their first full penetration they just put on a show while Gene gets his wish of blowing a group of guys. -
Looks like thing went from fast to light speed. Finishing the first movie, and now a contract for 5 more.
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Thanks for adding this. It’s always interesting to get a peek, “behind the scenes” as it were. Sorry for your loss. Alternates to current reality are the fruit of imagination, and you read with it. Truly a captivating story.
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Great ending to book 1. A reflection of how the family came into being, and all of the love these original two have for each other and their added family members.
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This chapter just emphasizes what good information an a supportive family can do to help a doubting person com to accept their gay child. Very well done.
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Orion has learned big picture thinking from his mentor and it shows in this chapter. I’ve only been to PTown once and that was in the 80s, it was a fun week, got to water ski on the bay on a day that was calm as glass. With their diving and restoration projects this could be a great expansion. While helping locals have work and lodging.
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Wow, didn’t see that coming. Will Finley now show Emmet his Dragon? Fun chapter, hiccuping fireballs…
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‘Felices para siempre’ (Happily Ever After)
VBlew commented on Mark Ponyboy Peters's story chapter in ‘Felices para siempre’ (Happily Ever After)
Awesome ending to this great story. Ups and downs and they survived and grew. Beautiful love story and a great place to end this book. With maybe a sequel? -
I’m thinking that all this sex will make it easy to get a divorce…no question of infidelity if the videos are discovered.
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Yeah, playing for the other team… keep telling yourself that Alan. it does seem like a good idea of asking his dad for advice. Will see where that goes.
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Damn, after barely missing being caught by Arcum soldiers,surviving the wolves, the rain and torment, they get their stuff stolen by bandits…. Maybe the6 will have better luck with the Fae?
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To Have Lost vs. Not At All
VBlew commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in To Have Lost vs. Not At All
More misunderstandings cleared up, or mostly. Now for some cuddle sleep. Does Vince maybe work in the building that Ryder needs access to, to meet his mate?- 27 comments
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Chapter 7: A night to remember. Or is it?
VBlew commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 7: A night to remember. Or is it?
All of this because of a homophobic father who already disowned one son. Such a twisted family. -
Ben, taking a morning walk has a surprise visit from the Duke. It’s good that he told his origin into this world, and good that the Duke was concerned to want to inform his parents of his whereabouts. On to breakfast…
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So, it seems this story needs tissues. It’s beautiful so far.
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A little clue as to how they will have children. Wonder why they serve plants that offworld people could get sick from? Plans are coming together, and back in the public eye… still keeping the mystery of their surrogate selves except for family and close friends. Sounds like something was found in the wormhole, like another ship? They really are a power couple, and love each other deeply, and are working through all that kept them separated to prepare for the future.
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Seems like Walker was possessed…
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Interesting chapter. The clerk got free of his binding rope, and tried to attack the captain unsuccessfully. Then a moment where they both recognize the lust, but it gets pushed away…
