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Great story within a story, and it sounds like history too. Looking forward to the rest. And the fact that they felt comfortable enough to share with the few members of the caravan when they came from and who they are. But after turning into dragons in front of them some explaining needed to be done.
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Another excellent chapter, this is world building at its best. The characters interacting and describing what’s what in their society. The warning was a good idea.
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I think this has something to do with Jacob’s parents and the locked door. Another awesome chapter.
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Great ending to this story. The murderer was caught. On to the next mystery.
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Tom has the makings of a boyfriend, who happens to be the brother of the killer…. Too many good people are being killed. He needs to get caught soon.
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Great chapter, it looks like Mark is coming back 🙂 Mom had something happen that she is no longer cursed.
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Bryan needed to hear and feel that he is worthy to be loved and have friends who will be there for him. James is a good friend.
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Lovely chapter getting to make new acquaintances. And Lyoth is healed.
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We do now have a possible lead that may not be a red herring… fingerprints matching would be a good thing. Do they have any other DNA from the other murders?
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Back to Jerry, A New Boss, and More Appeals
VBlew commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Back to Jerry, A New Boss, and More Appeals
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Sound like this predator had a pattern and Andre was not the only one molested. Hopefully more people will come forward and he’ll be in jail permanently. Good on them wanting to foster Oliver, wonder if the mother knew what was happening and if the court would relieve her of parental rights…
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It was good that Alex had skills to defend himself. Possibly from earlier bullying he want t martial arts. He may even rate an inclusion in the group later on.
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Looks like the perp is again someone related to the Mardi Gras production… cast or crew, that didn’t know about Joe’s helping Keith get the role…, Tom needs a boyfriend to keep him occupied. Maybe he will find one in this new school..,
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Interlude- Search for Avalon Part II
VBlew commented on W_L's story chapter in Interlude- Search for Avalon Part II
So a neutron bomb was why the settlement disappeared. The robots are interesting. And now the first omega who may be destined to be a great Japanese hero… -
Loved their breakfast and becoming boyfriends, the game went well for Kieth. So I’m curious about the “Fags for Football” banner. I’ve understood fags being cigarettes slang, and in the US fag is very derogatory for homosexual. Does it have a different meaning in this context? Or maybe not as offensive there?
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So we move from a very boring day, except for setting Nam up on a blind date…. Will two people who love to gossip so much get along? To this action fighting sequence, and a surprise knockout from behind…. Was it a bad guy or the Minister…I’m still not trusting him, even if he’s been attacked too.
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Chapter Eighteen: Confluence
VBlew commented on drown's story chapter in Chapter Eighteen: Confluence
Fun running in the forest, and mating. Next, meet the family. Chronos does explain a little about the strange magical properties around the area that Grey grew up in. -
I found it interesting that the coach first chose supernatural being to say that he was not bigoted… maybe he has had some interaction with them?
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Intriguing chapter. Progress from just banter to a formal contract negotiation?
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Nice ending for Cary and Apollo. Thanks for the journey.
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Looking forward to this new story.
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Angel is being all superior, has no clue he is #3 in the show….karma is a bitch.. these bad guys are really bad.
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Chronic is frustrating the boys with his cryptic answers. They do need to complete their mating… 😉 this is so interesting, a very different take on a shifterverse.
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A nice domestic weekend for the boyfriend, a good discussion. SEX. A nice evening with the good parents. Lovely interlude to what is coming.
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Oh, such a great start to another installment of this series. Same M.O. on these two killings, is it another family trying to make it look like Joe is the culprit? Looking forward to this mystery…
