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Teenage years can be confusing for many. Teens are young enough to just want to have fun and live a carefree existence, but it's also a time filled with a great deal of angst. That could be caused by issues of parental control and expectations, school, or relationships, and that's true about gay males as well. Even though homosexuality is more acceptable now, there's still a lot of pushback and for some there's no way of telling if they'll be accepting and if they'll turn on you. That's why some gays are hesitant about coming out. But what if you're questioning your sexually and haven't yet figured out which sex you're attracted to? This is a story that covers many of those topics, while also pointing out that truth and honesty is important in any relationship - gay or straight. If you want to see how these teens answer these questions and resolve those problems, then you'll want to read this short story. You'll find it to be hard-hitting, skillfully presented, and definitely worth the time and effort it will take you to read it.
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I agreed with Oliver when he asked Patrick why he wanted to wait before coming out, just asking for a reason. Was it that he was afraid of his parents reactions? Possibly other family members or friends? Was he confused about his sexuality? Or was there another reason? It's unfortunate that Oliver found out the way he did, but on a positive note it prevented him from wasting more time with someone that wasn't honest in the relationship. The good thing was that Oliver still has a good friend in Leah, but there's also hope of a possible friendship/relationship with Dylan. I hope that one works out for him.
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Marc is a twenty-something gay man who comes from a dysfunctional family. He is also is raising his younger sister, Coralie, a high school student, due to that family dynamic. He was having a very bad time at work one night while tending bar for a private party, when a handsome stranger who was part of the group came to his rescue with some obnoxious and drunken customers. Marc later discovers this attractive man has an equally attractive boyfriend, and after "last call", they invite him to join them for drinks and something to eat at another location. What does this mean? Are they only being friendly, or do they merely feel sorry that the others at the gathering had been verbally abusing him so horribly. This is an interesting and well-written story with many twists and turns, and it is well worth the time and effort it takes to read this short story. Be advised, however, that there are some very graphic sex scenes scattered throughout.
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Cassie, another great story and I really enjoyed it. I know others have commented about how difficult a three-way is, but the reason this one will work is because Gabriel is gone so much. I kind of feel the some as Coralie, in that I'm also upset that they all have two boyfriends now and I still don't have one.
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Adulatiion is from the Latin word adulatio means "flattery." It's made up of the roots ad ("to") and ulos ("tail"), and if you're thinking of a dog wagging its tail to and fro to get a treat from its owner, you're on the right track, because adulationem (nominative adulatio) "is a fawning; flattery, cringing courtesy. That was then passed along to Old French adulacion and became adulatiion in late Middle English. The earliest known use of the noun adulation is in the Middle English period (1150—1500). OED's earliest evidence for adulation is from around 1400, in Book to Mother.
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Very interesting, and once you get past the spiders on The Lord of the Rings and Harry Potter, they become much harder to believe.
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Draconian “unusually severe or cruel” is based on Latin Dracō (stem Dracōn-), plus the adjectival suffix -ian. In ancient Athens, a city-state that is now the capital of Greece, Draco (known to his fellow Athenians as Drákōn) was a statesman who was famous—or infamous—for the unusually harsh laws he enacted around 621 BC. According to the Oxford English Dictionary, the first recorded use of "draconian" in English was around the 1870s, with the earliest evidence cited from 1876 in the writings of Charles M. Davies.
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There were a limited number of evil skinwalkers to begin with, but it doesn't mean that a misguided shaman might create more. There's also the question as to whether the evil skinwalkers that already exist can reproduce with a willing, or mind-controlled partner, and thus create even more evil skinwalkers. Little is known that would answer these questions and only encountering them can give us a true count on how many there are. The gang has killed one so far, when they were on the Navajo reservation during Mac's training to become a good skinwalker. How many more there are, as of now we only know of two- the one Mac and Devin saw on the Ute Mountain Ute reservation and now the one reported on the Navajo reservation. I hope that clears things up for you, since it's like trying to clean dirt.
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Maybe evil skinwalker magnets, but they won't be hunting the evil skinwalkers by themselves - they will be working as part of a group. Now, we'll have to wait to see how that turns out.
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That's why deer hunters sometimes go out in a group. Some act as drivers and push the deer in a particular direction toward other hunters. I'm not saying that's what's going to happen here, but somehow they're planning on working together to eliminate a threat.
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Bill W reviewed Sasha Distan's story in 2017 - Spring - Unintended Consequences & Jagged Edges
How would you react and what would you think if you were suddenly feeling pain and noticing bruises on your body when you weren't doing anything and hadn't been injured? After this happened multiple times, Gerard concluded that he was feeling someone else's pain and somehow had a supernatural/paranormal connection to that other person - he just had no idea who it was. If you like well-written, enchanting, and unusual romance stories, then check this one out. It's not only sweet and charming, but I'm sure you'll fall in love with the main characters as they're falling in love with each other. -
After it had been established that Gerard's pain and bruises were caused because he was feeling someone else's pain, I immediately suspected Faris when he showed up as the new kid at school. It's just that I thought the red horse was a metaphor for Faris' red hair, but I had no idea about the true significance of the relationship. I enjoyed that story very much at it's why I just finished reading it and I'm writing this at 7:00 in the morning without any sleep. I was already staying up late, but I didn't think I'd be staying up this late. Thanks for the fantastic story.
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It was easier than speaking for an otter!
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They could try to shoot it, but they're not sure if normal bullets would do the job. And did you forget how fast the evil skinwalkers are? It might be able to escape, even wounded, before they were able to kill it. That's why they're not taking this lightly. The conversations over the 4th of July will probably only happen if Mac's parents are ready to discuss this in greater detail. Devin's parents might bring it up, but I doubt they'll push Mac's parents until they're ready to talk about it. But I could be wrong.
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Yes, having multiple skinwalkers pop up is troubling, so we'll have to wait and see how it all turns out.
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I believe the two shaman asked for their help so they can confine it, possibly surround it, and avoid having the evil skinwalker escape before they can deal with it. As far as whether the other evil skinwalker will show up, we'll just have to wait and find out. 🤪
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I don't know if they're getting brave or desperate. Possibly they're having to move into these new areas because they can't locate enough food or other items where they'd been living. But, yes, this does mean the four of them will have to go to the reservation to help the shamen deal with the problem. Even though Mac's parents know about his ability, I don't believe he's quite ready to tell them about everything he's involved with when it comes to certain items, like dealing with another evil skinwalker, because he won't want them to worry. I'm sure talking to Devin's parents will help some as well. They may need all the luck they can get while they're on the reservation, because who knows how the evil skinwalker will react or if things will go according to plan for them. Wish them the best.
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Yes, they're off on a new adventure, so we'll see how it turns out. Hopefully, everything will go well. As far as Gramps and Pops go, they've never mentioned anything like that before, so I'm not sure. Maybe eventually they'll let us know.
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Chapter 54 – A New Adventure. “Don’t take this wrong, but now that you know everything about us and the vacation is obviously over, would you mind if Devin and I go to see if Gramps and Pops might be ready to leave early? We were going to be with them in a few days anyway, so would you mind if we go now. If they’re willing and ready to leave early, then we might get back early as well.” “What if they’re not ready to leave yet?” Mom countered. “In that case we’ll just hang ou
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Now why would the guy do something stupid like that?
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A Diamond in the Rough
Bill W reviewed comicfan's story in 2017 - Spring - Unintended Consequences & Jagged Edges
This is a powerful and poignant short story about the relationship between a problem student from a wealthy family and first year teacher at a private school and demonstrates what can be accomplished when you listen to what the other person is saying. Bright students that are unchallenged in school can often become behavioral problems, and this story shows how a new teacher made such a lasting impact on an unruly and troublesome student. If you read this story, you might find it better than "Goodbye, Mr. Chips", and if you aren't familiar with that story, then look it up. -
I got rid of my leisure suits long ago.
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Naming the bar Toad Hall - was that a nod to the story The Wind in the Willows? This story really made me think, especially since I'd be on that roller coaster called love a few times before. Oh, and by the way, I've always loved the song Brandy and the song Two Out of Three Ain't Bad struck a deep chord in me. Thanks, Cole, for this provocative short story.
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Bill W reviewed Cole Matthews's story in 2017 - Spring - Unintended Consequences & Jagged Edges
What is love? Is love real or is it something made up and we just accept it because we've heard about love in songs, books, and movies? What if it's unrequited love and your feelings are never returned? This is an interesting short story that addresses those questions through characters that have given their hearts, yet their love has not been returned. Can they ever find love after these experiences or will their hearts be forever hardened into stone? This story will cause you to think about these questions, but don't expect to find any answers here. In fact, I'm not sure if you'll find those answers anywhere.-
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Ephemeral comes from New Latin ephemerus, which comes from Ancient Greek ἐφήμερος (ephḗmeros), the more common form of ἐφημέριος (ephēmérios, “of, for, or during the day, living or lasting but for a day, short-lived, temporary”), from ἐπί (epí, “on”) + ἡμέρα (hēméra, “day”) The word "ephemeral" was first used in English in the late 1500s. The earliest known use of the word is in 1576, in a translation by Thomas Newton, a translator and Church of England clergyman.
