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Yes, Al, I agree with you, but these boys appear to have good heads on their shoulders and understand what they're getting into. This is a dream for Devin, one that Mac wants to share, and I'm sure they will do whatever it takes to make it happen.
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Yes, Daddyd, it's doable and will require a lot of hard work, but it seems the boys are up for it. I'm certain they didn't decide to do this on a whim, so we'll see how it goes.
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You're very welcome, and I don't think you'll have to worry about the boys. It will be difficult for them to accomplish these ambitious goals, but they seem to be up for the challenge.
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Yes, it will be good for them, Chris, and hopefully it will eventually lead to them getting a job in the same field, possibly with the same company.
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Thanks for the feedback, Al. One thing that might have become obvious so far, and will become more obvious in the future, if that once these boys put their minds to something, they persevere until they accomplish their goal. They proved it in high school, with each one becoming Valedictorian of his class, and I'm sure they'll do the same thing here. Stick with me and I'm sure you'll see what I mean.
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Yes, Raven, Devin not only handled the situation and helped the girl, but he seems to have fun with others with they think that he might have been involved by making fun of his current build, such as he did with the waitress. And yes, the boys are extremely committed to each other and looking forward to a future they can share, even after graduation. You will see how committed they are as the story progresses. I'm glad you're enjoying this story.
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Thanks, Johnny. I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. Devin has a complex about his size, since his dad and grandfathers think it's best that he not be too tall and muscular in his usual form, so he doesn't draw much attention to himself. Seeing he can't do this in his everyday life, he takes full advantage of the opportunity to make up for it in situations like this, and he only does it for good reasons.
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Thanks, Danilo. Mac sees Devin as you do, as a hero, if not a superhero, but he did a great job of saving the girl and showing the guy what it's like to be manhandled by someone bigger and stronger. What more might he have in store for us in future chapters?
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Chapter 8 – Devin to the Rescue The guy who was outside the diner and harassing the girl had just told Devin to “fuck off” without even turning around to look at him. Then, without warning, the guy suddenly spun in Devin’s direction and sucker punched him in the abdomen. That’s when he realized he’d made a terrible mistake. “Damn, are you wearing fucking armor or something?” the guy yelped while holding his now throbbing wrist and hand. “No, those are the muscles I’ve devel
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Chapter 10 - Ironing Out The Wrinkles
Bill W commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 10 - Ironing Out The Wrinkles
Thank you, Dan. I'm glad you enjoyed this story. It is one of my earliest stories, but it still draws a lot of readers, and I'm glad you were one of them. -
And don't forget the progression of razors for the straight razor, to the Gillett Safety Razor, razors that used single-edge or double edge blades, to the disposable razors, and today razors with all types of disposable blades. And then there are a variety of electric razors and even razor scooters. It's no longer as simple as it was for Sweeney Todd: The Demon Barber of Fleet Street.
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I'm glad you said nose. I thought you might suggest another appendage.
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@wildone said, "you all are invited . You can all crash on my new couch " Hmmm, that should be cozy and interesting! 😈
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Culinary, a word that is dear to my heart, palate, stomach, and expanding waistline.
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It doesn't say where Spike is currently residing, but with that feather coat I hope it's somewhere cool. I take it Spike is a juvenile, because otherwise he would have lost the feathers already.
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In other words, when we say bicuspids we mean the molars or wisdom teeth, however for some people they don't give them too much wisdom.
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And sometimes the herd seems to be headed toward a cliff.
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Having grown up on a farm, I'm very familiar with the word bovine, but the political arena has given it an entirely new meaning for me, as Myr and Raven have pointed out. .
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I wonder if he got the dual meaning his sign had? It's obvious this place isn't in the Bible Belt or he offend to many people and would probably be picketed by the local churches. And the minnow shot? A drink with a live minnow swimming around in it? I guess to each their own.
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Yes, there is still on long, long way to go on this story. I'm glad you're enjoying it.
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Mea culpa.
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Yes, I see that as being very auspicious as well.
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Yes, I know that, but why can't there be a Lassie and Laddie together. lol
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And my family had a collie named Laddie when I was growing up. I guess they gave it that name hoping it would become as famous as Lassie.
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Yes, the average height during the middle ages was around 5 feet (152 cm), so imagine was it was like during Biblical times. Goliath may have been considered a giant if he was 6 feet (183 cm) or more.
