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Thanks, Stix, and empathy is a rare and valuable gift. It will be interesting to see how quickly or how well Xander fits in and how much Dion and Trey will have to deal with concerning TJ, but I'm confident it will all turn out well. I also wish to thank you for your concern. The only time I go out is to pick up groceries, and then I wear a mask. I'm at an age where I can afford to take any chances. Thanks again.
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Thanks, James. I'm glad you appreciate what a loving family this is and how the boys are paying it forward.
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Thanks, Danilo. Yes, Richard has brought two more boys to the Hotel and now we'll see how Xander and TJ make out.
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Thanks again for the feedback, Butcher. Yes, the Hotel is taking in two more boarders as Danny and Brandon agreed to take Xander, and Dion and Trey agreed to take the baby. Even if the baby's mother had lived, I have a feeling the baby would have been taken away from her and might have come to Richard's attention just the same. Either way, the two new members of the family will be in good and loving hands.
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When Becky stopped by to pick up Revin later, the boys immediately began to pepper her with questions. “We want to sleep out in the tree house, and we want Revin to do it with us,” began Tristan. “Will you let him join us when we do it?” “Did you have a particular time in mind for when you’re planning on sleeping out?” Becky asked in return. “Our dads said we should prolly do it on Thursday or Friday,” replied Hunter. “I only get to spend time with Revin on the weekends, so T
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Chapter 14 – Winding Up My Stay in Allentown
Bill W commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 14 – Winding Up My Stay in Allentown
Thanks, tor. It's nice to have such a dedicated following for this story. -
Chapter 14 – Winding Up My Stay in Allentown
Bill W commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 14 – Winding Up My Stay in Allentown
Thanks, Wesley, and I realized everyone is into more than just my series. Yes, they're back together again, at least until the older kids head to college. Thanks for the feedback. -
Chapter 14 – Winding Up My Stay in Allentown
Bill W commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 14 – Winding Up My Stay in Allentown
Thanks, Stix, and I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. Richard may have another boy, but then again it may be a personal issue. We will soon find out. -
Chapter 14 – Winding Up My Stay in Allentown
Bill W commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 14 – Winding Up My Stay in Allentown
Yes, Danio, I'm sure every betting reader is putting his money on Richard having another boy he's trying to place, but maybe we're wrong. I don't think you're ever too old to be best man, if that's who the groom has chosen. Thanks again for the feedback. -
Chapter 14 – Winding Up My Stay in Allentown
Bill W commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 14 – Winding Up My Stay in Allentown
Yes, Burtcher, there has always been a lot of love at the Currie household and now Danny and Brandon are paying it forward by taking in even more boys. I'm sure Josh was touched by Frankie's comments, because he is an old softie, and he's proud with how all the boys have done with their lives. Yes, Richard's request has left us all wondering what he wants, but we shall soon find out. Thanks again for the feedback. -
Chapter 14 – Winding Up My Stay in Allentown
Bill W posted new chapter in The Castaway Hotel: Next Generation Book 4
Sunday morning, we each had a Western omelet, home fries, and toast to start our day, and then we got ready to go to the next place we’d agreed to visit, which was the Museum of Indian Culture. I suppose if we were being politically correct the name should be changed to the Museum of Native American Culture, but either way it was our first stop. We started out in the Northeast Woodland Room where we learned about the history and some of the customs of the tribes in the east that made the fo- 12 comments
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Chapter 13 – We’re Together Again
Bill W commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 13 – We’re Together Again
As you know, I try to tie some current events into the story, but being a rural location in Pennsylvania, I'll try to avoid any major disasters. -
Chapter 13 – We’re Together Again
Bill W commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 13 – We’re Together Again
Danilo, thanks for all the suggestions and I shall take them into consideration. I'm glad to see that this story is sparking your imagination too and that you're enjoying this story. I like your suggestion for the door at the bottom of the slides, and I'll have to see if I can work that out for the following summer, since I've already written well into the fall and winter already. -
Chapter 13 – We’re Together Again
Bill W commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 13 – We’re Together Again
Thanks, Stix. I'm glad you're enjoying this series. There won't be a Captain Hook, but there may be other villains. I chose to write in first person, rather than third, because I've always felt that gives you a more intimate view of what's going on - and actually makes you feel as if you're in the room. Thanks for the feedback. -
Chapter 13 – We’re Together Again
Bill W commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 13 – We’re Together Again
Yes, it's probably something we would enjoy as well. I have a Peter Pan complex. -
Chapter 13 – We’re Together Again
Bill W commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 13 – We’re Together Again
Yes, the tree house is a major accomplishment and will bring many hours of enjoyment to the boys. -
Chapter 13 – We’re Together Again
Bill W posted new chapter in The Castaway Hotel: Next Generation Book 4
Becky showed up around 5:00 on Saturday while I was working on dinner, and one of the boys let her in. “I’m not too early, am I?” she asked. “No, but your son and the others aren’t here yet. They should be arriving shortly, however, and Danny should be getting here soon as well.” “I hope there weren’t any problems with them getting back from Texas.” “Brandon called me from the airport after they landed in Pittsburgh, so the only problem they might have encountered would be ge- 12 comments
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Chapter 12 – Frankie and Carolyn
Bill W commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 12 – Frankie and Carolyn
Thanks, Wesley, and school will be in session for quite a few more chapters. lol -
Chapter 12 – Frankie and Carolyn
Bill W commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 12 – Frankie and Carolyn
Thanks, flesco. There is definitely a lot going on, and you're right, this will be a busy summer with two weddings to plan, and don't forget that Beth and Katie will be having their babies in the spring. Yes, Frankie is also doing very well in his career, and Carolyn seems to be doing well in hers as well, so they should have a very nice life together. Thanks for the feedback. -
Chapter 12 – Frankie and Carolyn
Bill W commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 12 – Frankie and Carolyn
Thanks, Stix, and thank you for the background information on the breweries. Yes, we got to learn a little more about Josh, as well as about Carolyn, and who knows what may be revealed in upcoming chapters. Thank you for the feedback. -
Chapter 12 – Frankie and Carolyn
Bill W commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 12 – Frankie and Carolyn
Thanks, Danilo, I'm glad you guys still enjoy learning new things from Josh's adventures. Yes, Josh gave you a look into his past as well, mentioning how he used to love the pinball machines and model trains. You also got a chance to find out a little about Carolyn, and Frankie's not really that old, but he does work hard and that makes him tired. Some of us also need more sleep than others. Thanks for the feedback. -
Chapter 12 – Frankie and Carolyn
Bill W commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 12 – Frankie and Carolyn
Thanks, Tony. With Josh being a former educator and principal, he's always emphasized the educational aspects of the trips he took with the boys, and I guess some aspects die hard. I'm glad you still enjoys these adventures. The were also meant to draw out memories of past experiences in the readers, as Josh checks in with some of the boys. Thanks for the feedback. -
Chapter 12 – Frankie and Carolyn
Bill W commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 12 – Frankie and Carolyn
Thanks, Butcher. I'm glad you are enjoying Josh's trip to spend some time with his adoptive kids and their partners, and it looks as if we'll be seeing more of them this year. I appreciate the feedback and your kind comments, and I hope you continue to enjoy the chapters as I post them. -
Chapter 12 – Frankie and Carolyn
Bill W posted new chapter in The Castaway Hotel: Next Generation Book 4
After Ricky and Tiffany left for work, I took my time and did some research on the computer before I left the apartment and set out for Allentown to visit Frankie and Carolyn. I had been looking at some sites that I could stop at along the way, since I felt I had enough time to visit a few of these places before I reached Frankie’s house. I knew he and Carolyn were both working and wouldn’t arrive home until after their shifts ended, and I didn’t want to sit in the car while waiting in their dri- 12 comments
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Chapter 39 - A Christmas To Remember
Bill W commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 39 - A Christmas To Remember
Thank you, and many readers have told me that the various adoption ceremonies make them tear-up. Thank you for the feedback.
