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.................AYC, why does that sound familiar ????
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...............Another chapter!! Krista is keeping to her New Years resolutions.
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................I agree, who the hell takes someone with a broken arm, who has never ice skated before to an ice skating ring?? Greg gives himself away by not admitting to being either gay or bisexual, he will become a friend to Corey, but not his lover. Clinton is such a fence sitter and scared to be outed, but I think he will be the one that gets with Corey in the end. The real elephant in the room is Corey's dad though, I'd rather he found out after Corey has left for College. The real question at this point is who is standing in the shadows? Surprised at seeing another chapter, great work Krista!!
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...........Ahem, we in Vegas suffer just as much...
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HAPPY BIRTHDAY MATTIE!!! ............ Hope you have a good one!
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............... I remember when our phone was a party line, meaning you could pick up the phone and hear someone else using it. You'd hang up and wait for them to finish before you could make a call. Also our phone number (all of them in town) started with Dudley then are few digit numbers, I'm not real sure, but I think you called 0 for the operator for an emergency. G-D, talk about showing your age!!
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.........Well that was long overdue, nice chapter. I'm glad to say I didn't have to go back and re-read chapters. I remembered right where you left off, that first scene was revealing with Joel and his mother, I wonder how long the peace will last? I can see a scenario with Tanner and Derrick in bed together and Joel coming back thru the window and making the discovery! great to see another chapter Comsie, keep them coming!
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..........Nope, I'm not that old and that is not me 4th in line with my clearly offended teammate in front of me!! Sorry Benji, I know you aren't that old...but I think of the pictures I have seen in the old high schools of the basketball teams and their lack of shorts
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......................Humm, interesting question, I was raised in an era that only board shorts were in. Speedos was a European thing, and we didn't have a swim team at my school. We did have gymnastics and I was one, but I wouldn't of have the guts to wear a speedo back then!
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......Well what a surprise, another chapter so soon! Nice touch in the begging scene, must of done a lot of research eh Krista? CJ does seem to be able to spoil things, doesn't he, and he doesn't even have to be there, just mentioning his name puts a gloom out there. The remark about Corey's mother and the CJ's dad getting what he was after (expanding his club) makes me wonder if they weren't set up! I think CJ's bluster is going to go down real fast after puppygate is exposed, but I also think he will be exposed for something else. Well great chapter, looking forward to more and to read other reviews!
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................Looking for a cardiologist in my area right now!!
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....... Hey Q-man, here I give an honest assessment of the last chapter, before reading the next one and what do you do? You screw with my theory But I still don't trust Hanna, she seems more interested into getting into Dean's pants and may have realized that she crossed a line with him. Dean giving her a mulligan while still thinking with 'little Dean' for his brain power, he hasn't forgotten his chat with Darryl and that is good. I guess what 'evil' plans you have for the young sex-starved couple!!
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.............. Hey Q-man! Well first Krista's story then yours, I guess those months leading to the New Year were a bit of a blur to me. But I never thought I missed reading your saga. I'm with Darryl on this one, this girl is not going to change. Dean is the one that needs to change, noticed how he kind of blamed Blake and date for ruining his date! He was embarrassed by meeting them in public with his date, and didn't recover enough to admonish his girls' mouth. It was only afterwards when he got home that he felt a bit guilty over everything. Great chapter, glad I found it!
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...............You do realize when this story first posted Posted 24 November 2008 - 03:42 PM I have sneak peeked the tentative first chapter of this story, but the other chapters will be coming soon so I thought I'd open up the discussion now.
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.........Got to admit, I didn't watch it when it first came out, I thought why watch a blood and gore flick. But my daughter turned me on to seasons 1 & 2 and I wa hooked, the drama was more then then the mayhem in it. looking forward to the new season.
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..............Totally surprised!!!
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............................... Hummmmm!!! Next chapter 'CJ & the puppies' or 'Hard night, harder morning' ?? You had me going there for awhile, I suspected the arrival of others but I was afraid the spin the bottle game was going to out those two. Nice unexpected chapter, New Years resolution Krista??
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.............Meh!!! Who didn't see this coming??
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.................Corey is understandably concerned when it comes to Clinton, for too many years he put up with CJ and Clinton. Now that they are starting to get to together Clinton is complicating things by moving too fast on him. Then of course as an evil author you have to bring Greg back into the picture making the situation even more awkward and complicated. Great chapter Krista.
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............ Damn girl you are on a roll here! The bike was a surprise, yet in the back of my mind I thought it would come into play again. Well I see you have another chapter up, so I'll leave this review for now. LOL! Great chapter the puzzle deepens though!
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............Humm, how did I miss this update? Well, I really know how, I wasn't around much for the last few months. Great chapter Krista, still leaving bread crumbs of clues to this story I see. Corey's dad is still a piece of shit and his mom is an angel with Corey in the middle of this strange marriage. There is going to be fireworks in the near future, a final confrontation between Corey and his dad, and one with CJ . Finally a resolution with him and Clinton, remember Krista a spider can only weave so many webs!!
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.......................Hey Brat! Good to see you have written another chapter (finally, LOL). What is nice is that I was able to pick up on the story without going back and re-reading the prior chapter, not many stories I can say that about. I picked up on a hint in this chapter about things to come I didn't realize it then, but the idea of tragedy bringing people together would become very important in the not too distant future. I also noticed a small mistake, you have the judge telling the coach the funeral in on Sunday, but Andy telling the guys they need to be there for JT on the funeral on Monday!! Great chapter!!
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........Nah, you know goats can't count, he meant October of 2014!!
