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I am also surprised how perceptive Toby is, He knows that Brian and Gordon are so close and that they play with Russ/.Toby approves of it and likes Russ. He is verry pleased Brian and Gordon will be getting married. Russ keeps coming up. They are setting boundaries and more willing to take up his offer to use his Normandy property and are aware he might stop by for some fun. It seems fine with them and even Toby. They are ready for the meeting with the lawyers next week. They do not know the agenda. Deirdre is going far away with Jasper. They should give up custody of Toby and cut out the maintenance. Maybe this is something for negotiation ? Toby has the nasty comments Jasper has made to him on a list. He seems to be unfit and not creating a healthy environment for Toby. What Toby can add wil strengthen the case for Deirdre to give up Toby. She has made her choice and it is not Toby.
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The most disturbed family member is Taylor Buck. She has been fucking her father for 6-7 years. Maybe she is getting too old for him and he rejected her for a younger girl and she atacked him? Maybe they had a large fight after she chose Curtis over Zach and she got very upset about Curtis not wanting only her. Who knows? She has to be so mixed up and unhinged? Someone said--who shot JR? Well, we found out later after the cliffie that JR was not killed. I think we need lots more info about the death of Curtis and should get it in the next chapter. Travis was at the home and just spoke to Curtis. Jake was mysteriously in town. They could be police suspects. It should be a major well investigated crime.
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I took methodwriter85's point that our dear author has not chosen to show Will in housekeeping roles and not to suggest he did not do them when needed. He will need to be more independent at Harvard without a family staff helping him. I am sure he can adapt. I still bet he will let Stef dress him when he visits Cambridge and New York Will spends his own money at times. A few instances have been made part of the chapters and maybe there are others not reported. He bought the house and land and funded renovations in Hawaii. He has come into $150 million from a trust and made an angel investment from his assets in the early version of Facebook. Stef was impressed by him. Will has bought gifts for Travis and others recently. Will can live a peaceful, very upscale , unhurried lifestle with his own funds. If he was on his own without a family support system after college , he might need to hire trusted people.
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Wonderful--What a delightful time as Hudson prepared and fucked Otis after giving Otis a blow job. Hudson is intoxicated with Otis. He carefully prepared Otis to be fucked and Otis truly enjoyed what Hudson did. Otis loved being fucked and wanted to be fucked agan as soon as possible.Hudson was in love with Otis but could not bring him to say the word "love." Otis wants no longer than to be a temporary boyfriend.However, Hudson feels guilty thatnhe is lying about his police job and what he is doing to catch evil doers. He does not bring up Jackie to Otis. Otis says the most provocative things to Hudson and turns him on Otis has told Hudson he wants to wear a tail. Now that his ass hole is loser from being fucked, I bet he can wear a tail and make Hudson happy. Otis wants to please Hudson.
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Oh No! Simon is bought as a slave by the orc king, a huge beast. He is not bring used yet, but Simon lusts after the king's stunning cock and magnificent cumming ability. The now alive Simon loves sex, being bred and blowing male cocks. Will Simon stay a slave to the king or will he escape soon? Yidian has yet to help Simon.
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If Sebastian has a psychological operations /deception annex to his war plan, he might task Elijah to appear as Huntington at a critical place and time to confuse and misdirect and turn to the side or around Huntington's forces and weaken the attacks on the Montana shifters. Elijah as Huntington could order a retreat. The Montana shifters could exploit any opportunity given them.
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kbois--Might your epic battle be stretched over two chapters with a cliff hanger in between ? The tension will be very high. Just saying--I know you cannot give your plot away
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Huntington, I expect, will stay back and give orders . He could be surrounded with powerful guards. He could see his role as a modern general who approves the plan and charges trusted subordinates to carry the plan out. Generals do not fight unless pressed. But battle plans never survive the first contact. Huntington will be a top target if he is found. He knows this and will not expose himself unless he is critically needed. Asa and Caleb will be looking for him. Note : Russian generals in the Ukrainan war are being killed by snipers at a large rate. Communication between Russian troops is very poor and generals have moved to the front lines to resolve unexpcted problems and to make sure their orders are carried out. Ukraine snipers and signal intel experts --who will notify the snipers --look for Russian generals to kill.
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Huntington has to be in Montana leading his side and surrounded by tough fighters and maybe some of his reptile warriors. He wants to see Sebastian and others die. I bet Sebastian is going to attack when he sees the enemy and not just defend in place. Asa and Caleb would be perfect, fast moving killers for Huntington , if they see Huntington find an opening . Kill off the head of the snake is a common tactic to win.
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Huntington has to die. This conflict must end decisively with the evil leader terminated !
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This build up felt like the beginning of the movie The Longest Day--preparation and waiting and anxiety “Goddamn!” Asa exclaimed. “This is fucking unnerving. I’ve never hated cats so much as I do right now!” Now, Sebastian has confirmation that Huntington has landed all his forces and brought them together and will attack shortly His forces are ready--Asa and Caleb will be at the front Sebastian sets Plan A is being executed--I hope he is ready with a Plan B and Plan C. Huntington may well surprise him with feints and a commando raid or two. Maybe, the Pixies or some fae forces might be able to impair Huntington in some way? I cannot wait to see what happens?
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Mhari is extending the olive branch to Colin and finding common ground of family similarities and a possible renovation project Colin might do for her. She seems supportive and made a point of asking Colin to be a friend--a good friend --for her brother who has been uprooted and needs less stress. Colin was strong enough to say he needs a friend, too, since he has come out. I think Mhari cleared the air in a good way. Let us see what happens in the pub and hopefully she will continue to be supportive of Owain and Colin.
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There are some important things to learn in the next chapters. I hope Frederick and the three wagons Mabil sent on ahead to Silverton made it to the town safely and were not attacked by bandits. They can help Mablin, if and when they meet up. The upcoming plan and trip can be agreed upon to Silverton, Scorpion Falls as the entrance to the Desert Realms and then to Lucas the Lost. Mablin and others might take time to advise Xavier and his friends how to maintain a low profile so they can move without any issues.
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The evil Boris almost l killed Winston and he fell over the cliff. james went down and farther to find Winston. He met mysterious being and saw beyond ancient sites, beings and statues.Knowledge of the past was transmitted to James. Winston was alive and later rescued. They did not speak to anyone what they had seen or learned. The site is staying hidden. Winston and James were rescued. The original discovery by their parents was announced to the press and public. Boris was undergoing care and not around. In celebration, James and Winston made love for the first time that night. What a magical event. James was the vessel that honored those beings from the past who wanted to speak to him and reveal their knowledge to him.
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Both Charlie are fitting in and growing into the family. Charlie is working well at the autoshop. He is encourage to speak up. Max made sure he was using the focus with the business paying the bills. Stacy got Michel to open up. A new haircut made him look amazing and extra handsome. Stacy led him into considering working part time and then going to college. He set Michael up to sing a special , touching song and then a happy one and and his performnce stunned the people. He sang beyond their expectations. It was magical. I was reminded of the surprising impact Susan Boyle made when she sang "I Dreamed a Dream" at Britain's Got Talent. Michael has a great potential. Tomorrow they are going to help Harry go home. He should be pleased to see all the improvements made. His home will look and operate better and will be safe. Stacy and others will stay commited to helping Harry. Life is good!
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Zoel's mocking tone was evident. "Fuckin’ freshies. It means that we have everything we need now. The satchel, the greycells, your girl. Yep. Consider our beef squashed. You won’t be a thorn in your asses anymore, squirts." He did it. Zoel angered and energized Rafe and his mates. They will fight aggressively and seek to win back their kidnapped friends. Zoel willl be ready. He has been preparing. BTW, is Zoel taking on others without the approval of his alpha, Cain? He did not mention Cain. This upcoming battle should be epic.
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What an intense battle! The ambushers fought skilled warriors and lost. The descriptions of the individuals from Seana taking on attackers showed why they are formidable and fierce fighters who will not stop no matter the injuries they incur. Gradon was impressed. Olga thought the battle was shorter and less brutal than she expected. The enemy was with one exception poorly trained. In that case, a well equiped warrior adept fought Syth and stood out as critical. Syth took a dagger to his stomach to be able to kill his opponent in a most gruesome manner. The enemy's scream when his rib cage was pulled away from his body paralyzed the enemy still in combat and they stopped fighting. At the end, the caravan fighters and their animals were healed. Prisoners were taken for bounty in Silverton. Mablin will need more care.Thane transfered his unbonded bear scorpion to Madelyn for her care and bonding. Garnet and Gradon will decide on a leadership structure. They have to plan. They all seem inclined to move beyond Silverton with a final goal of reaching Lucas the Lost in the Desert Realms.
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What a horrible childhood trauma. The attack was not explained and Micco is still very disturbed by it. Micco agrees to be interrogated without a tribal rep or lawyer if they will check on his animals. They agree to do so after he answers their questions. Calhoun seems to agree the evidence against Micco is too convenient. Micco understands he is being set up. Micco is in great peril. He is an innocent lamb and the pefect patsy for the real hidden killer. It is his word against an unknown other and an anonymous tip where to find the evidence. He cannot and should not trust Calhoun. Will he be railroaded since it the best suspect at this time? The impending hurricane adds great tension and is very upseting. How can the truth be found in this closed space with the area in great turmoil. Others cannot be sought now for new information. This is set up to be a disaster for Micco. What will Calhoun do and say? I cannot wait to read the next chapter.
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"Gordon gave an ironic laugh, “Bloody hell, organising our friendships and love life around a teenage boy.” Brian smiled, “Believe me, I’ve heard worse stories.” Actually, I think they like Russ. The sex is consensual and internse and not mechanical. They just felt things got too generous and out of their normal lifestyle.I bet the follow up email will be well received by Russ. He seems to want to be with them and now has a better sense of knowing how far he can go oiutside the bedroom.This is healthy.
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What a touching and lovely ending to a rich,complex, fascinating story of two men who grew well together and created a loving, extended family. Thank you for taking me along your compelling vision. I felt I just had to read every chapter. Well done!
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Family Life: Church reconciliation
akascrubber commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Family Life: Church reconciliation
I am very happy at this surprising turn of events. Joe can be trained as he wants. His mother changed her mind and appologized to Owain. He announced Colin as his boyfriend. Ths groups is getting along very well. The church service and Lily dedication turned out to be vital and encouraging for them.- 18 comments
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You should achieve the number 2 spot with the comments on the upcoming battle scene. We are really anticipating this huge fight and many will be reading it and then commenting.
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Good--The pixie helped find a weakness at the new creature warrior prison electric cell. The fire spirit . Enya, found the weakness of the new creatures that was captured . They can be defeated. Sebastian has over 500 wolf shifter fighters and is ready to face Huntington and his mixed forces. The grand battle should begin soon....All are on alert. You can feel the energy and anticipation.
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Who’s The Toppest Dog, After All?
akascrubber commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Who’s The Toppest Dog, After All?
Great resolution--Connor lost. Rusty and Matty beat him with the help of their close friends and a visual/sound expose of Connor by Xpress. Who would have expected it ? Dean Preston's job is saved. A wonderful pic will show up on Xpress tomorow to show the victory is won. Hooray! Well done.....- 33 comments
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Armand and Colin are making a good and lasting impression on their friends in Paris. The three in Grandmere's house and Armand have drawings to reinforce their good memories. Colin is making the plans to expand the cottage. Pierre and his gf are happy to see the plans. Armand found trusted workers to expand the cottage. Christian was ignored and became a non-entity. Colin stayed behind to finish the building renovation. Armand made it home with more hidden coins for Pierre and his inheritance is secure. Armand is hoping his last sons' are going to get married. He is very pleased at the prospect. What a happy , large family. They are living well with no regrets.
