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I somehow think Xavier and Kandric can find common ground. Xavier and his crew kill dragons, too. Kandic already knows the rumor that beings--including dragons- from Seandra escaped before the fall. Both are shamans. Xavier can help Kandric fight Frexla in the spirit world. Maybe, Thane would be a good negotiator to help Kandric understand Xavier can be a friend.
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Is that really Caleb? Does he really have such nasty teeth ? This has to be a fake,
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Yes, there is hope--Our distinguished author writes on a grand scale with a layered drama covering many beings not normal for most authors. 9000 words might be three standard chapters for a regular writer. Maybe Kyle will not write another record setting book length chapter. I bet 2-4 scenes would make a compelling chapter. Kandric has to meet the King and get his brothers back from Frexla. These could be two of possible great topics for the next chapter--just saying.... Of course, I want Kandric to meet Xavier, the great sand dragon.
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Awesome--you have seen a draft of the next chapter of Kandric You are making me and other fans of Kyle very happy Thank you for the update.
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EPISODE 10: COVENT GARDEN
akascrubber commented on LJCC's story chapter in EPISODE 10: COVENT GARDEN
You will be redeemed with a great reveal and a fascinating development with Greg facing new pressures and having lots of sex, I expect, -
EPISODE 10: COVENT GARDEN
akascrubber commented on LJCC's story chapter in EPISODE 10: COVENT GARDEN
Good to know you are his manager-- Too bad you are in the UK. Mailing cummed in items from outside the US is not a pleasant experience. I have bought stuff from the UK and Canada some time ago and the longer passage did not keep the items fresh. The Canadian mail inspectors have not been forgiving and stopped used underwear from being transmitted. Thanks for the offer--You are helping me dream. Anytime you see a guy who you think is a good example for Greg, please post a link, -
EPISODE 10: COVENT GARDEN
akascrubber commented on LJCC's story chapter in EPISODE 10: COVENT GARDEN
OK LJCC you are writing Greg as wanting to be a star--It is your story and you know what you want to happen. Still--I could dream of buying stuff from him--lol -
EPISODE 10: COVENT GARDEN
akascrubber commented on LJCC's story chapter in EPISODE 10: COVENT GARDEN
I wonder why Greg cannot make decent money by having an only fans site--selling private vids, his pics, his cum rags, his fragrant socks, etc. He is hot and a head turner. -
EPISODE 10: COVENT GARDEN
akascrubber commented on LJCC's story chapter in EPISODE 10: COVENT GARDEN
So you suggest Greg is going to be forced to do things he does not like. He has people that depend on him. I like to read Vince Flynn and Brad Thor spy novels--They are straight. I have not yet read a gay spy novel-- -
Two big actions--- Ann was stealing from the kitchen at the home and giving the kids inadequate meals. She was caught and James had the police arrest her. Armand and Colin are going to adopt Pierre. Chistian was not happy but would not accept being his guardian. Pierre has property and money in France. Christian may bring a financial accounting for Pierre when he comes to America next year. GG and Arnaud soke to Armand and approved of the adoption.
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The Straight and Narrow
akascrubber commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Straight and Narrow
I want to read your description of Hudson fucking Otis when he is asked. He will love preparing Otis and Otis will be blown away by the foreplay. Then they will make glorious love. Otis was told to ask by this method--- “You will say this – ‘there’s an empty spot in my bed with your name on it’.” -
I join the others in support of the motion made by our skilled author Mrsgnomie offered the chance for a new story about Max "Just imagine an entire story about Max..." He is mysterious and sexy and likable and gay
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Max is a successful businessman. He acted like a good salesman but he has more money than a normal , commission based salesman. Maybe he is a world class salesman in his territory which includes Oregon. He hated Reid poaching customers by coming into Oregon He has a great house and drives a range rover. He is not hiding from the law and is out, He seems to have lots of free time and can set his own schedule. He may have family money that elevated his lifestyle, but for now he does not discuss his family. He is sharp and very good with his hands and knows many types of locks. He knew and demonstrated the vulnerabilities of locks. He had the right tools with him like a salesman would I can see one of two options: He made his way to the top selling or he had a security/lock company he sold for a great deal of money. His company operated in Oregon. Nevertheless, Max knows locks and security. He must have fun stories. He would have been involved in high security places who needed his help. He can now help Perry and Kyan and the kids to be extra safe
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Max is going to tell Kyan his story. Will he be a spy or criminal and larger than life? Kyan at one point thinks he might be James Bond. Or will he be a successful tinkerer who created best of class locks,? Or will he be a so called OCD salesman ? He at least is more than slick, glib blusterer. He knows locks and security. He has money. He knows what is best for Perry and his advice rings true.
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Perry voiced the words--I love you. Kyan is happy. They are going to be a real couple and Kyan thinks at some point he and the kids will move in with Perry. Hooray! The sex was great and their minds and emotional links are strong.
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EPISODE 10: COVENT GARDEN
akascrubber commented on LJCC's story chapter in EPISODE 10: COVENT GARDEN
Greg is on the way to be what he hopes to be a high class escort. He badly needs the money. His friend Danny is connecting him to the job. Meanwhile, Greg and Nathan and getting closer. They are kissing and enjoying heavy petting. But, Greg alone, he thinks, on the street in the dark after a waitering gig feels he is being watched. Who is spying on him and why? Is he in danger? -
The Straight and Narrow
akascrubber commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Straight and Narrow
Hudson made his bones with his big boss by acting quickly to save the top young male talent. Why did the police raid the place wen Watkins pays them off? Otis is so naive. He is charming and clueless. His co-worker is giving him advice on how to get Hudson in his bed. I am sure her plan with work. They both will be in heaven in his bed.- 31 comments
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Sorry--I had to problem here in California with my cable connection
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When he can think str8 and Blake recovers, will he focus on his mother and Stacy ?He is disgusted by both and may want to hurt them. Will he get his vengeance by leaving pics of Stacy having sex for his mother to see. He should not be present, but let his mother take her anger out on Stacy, He can think both can do little more to hurt him.
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Wow--Seth found out about his family and it totally upset him. His mother is messed up. She favored Stacy due to a troubled childbirth and ended up pushing away her husband and Seth and favoring Stacy over Seth. Seth had done nothing. Stacy needed professional help, but her mother would not agree to it. She felt she might lose her. Seth is livid. His mother never explained what she was doing. She treated him badly for no reason of his own. His past guilt was not based on fact. Seth, Ty and Craig went looking after school for the lost Blake. They found him in a bloody mess at the warehouse. They think his father hurt him. The police and Mr. Ellis were notified. Blake is in the hospital. He may not live. There is lots to reconcile and forgive and heal.
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If Caleb does see a therapist, he will certainly need more help than talking. A human would be given meds for depression. I do not know if depression meds can help a shifter or if Caleb will take it. Maybe, Caleb's wolf will crave sex from Asa and help the human side of Caleb to begin to improve?
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"Coming close to death didn’t give him the clarity it gave others. He still felt blackness and despair threatening to crush his soul." Caleb's despair and depression is very deep. His wolf recognizes Asa as his mate. Caleb rejects him for now. He does not feel worthy. Let us see what Asa does and says.
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Brian and Gordon are finalizing their plans in preparation for moving home. They are eventually live together. They will be meeting both sets of parents. Toby is ecstatic . He wants to be with his dad, He has told his boyfriend but kept is mother in the dark. She has made some strange comment about Brian pulling his own weight. Does she want money from him? Is he paying child support already? When Brian tells her or she finds out before he tells her about his boyfriend, will she keep Toby away from him? It could be a future legal battle.
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Beckett is an underground tunnel maze that is dark and fearsome. He has found Valrinda who is hostile to him and injured, Beckett could be in danger . He is in pain. He wants to flee since Valrinda has rejected him. He has one lone small wisp to be his guide. Can he help Valrinda? But, will his dragon hurt him even more? Is in real danger? Can he get away, necessary?
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hmmm Asa is a light shifter in disguise. His ability connects with the story title. The story title is--The Light at the End of the Tunnel
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