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Wonderfully appropriate--Randy turned and the story was published on Halloween. What a memorable, warming and affirming experience well told. Randy has shifted with the support of his pack and lovers, Trevor and Skyler. His alpha's were present. Randy had a great run and his first kill. He is a happy brown wolf. All seems great !
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So.\, Simon might return to the living. A golem was sent to retrieve him from the middle. But, first he will be tested. He is told....“Inside, you will find your greatest adversary and you will have to face it alone.” Let us hope he survives. He might find Yidian.
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I appreciate how carefully the story of those from Seandra is unfolding. They are learning to adapt and have found out how much they stand out and how they must adjust to not attract attention, if they really can. It is not just they are royalty with unheard of powerful weapons and uncommonly skilled fighters, it is that they are children as Lew notes. They are shocking those around them . Garnet successfully changed into his true dragon form so he could best protect Xavier. Lucas helped him. With the help of a magic ring he now maintains the illusion of an Illorc or Orakin as he was termed at the end of the chapter. He will surprise any serious attacker. In his new form, he accepted Aegir to be his student in preparation to be a spirit warrior. The ending scene in Thane's 2 story lodge is stunning. The art and wealth and lifestyle displayed was other worldly. I am looking forward to the questions from Mablin and the answers from Xavier. Mablin does not know what to make of Xavier. I doubt Xavier can truth away from Mablin for much longer.
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On Deities of Escaria, part 1
akascrubber commented on ObicanDecko's story chapter in On Deities of Escaria, part 1
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Let us see how our alchemist finds out about the venomous creatures and shifters. It sounds dangerous and he may leave the library. Will he find a colleague to help?
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Being very focused, the boys and girl with parents visited a new museum and viewed another disk that helped them decide where to see the solstice in a few days. I am impressed with their investigative and team work abilities. The historical background and substantial tour guide information is very helpful. The youths are set up to find out more critical data about the disks and the past. It could be path breaking and might even impress the sponsors who arrive shortly.
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Good for Toby. He found a gay friend with common interest in plants and ecology. They got to see older males act sexually in their workplace and accepted it a normal and still exciting. Who knows how they will act over time. Will they explore their common sexual interests? We will find out, I bet.
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Things are looking up. Seth has his first boyfriend. Randy came out as bi to his parents and they were very fine with it.
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What a touching story. Owain developed a few good friends who helped him when he needed it after his fundamentalist father threw him out for being gay. He went to college, worked hard, too hard and became ill. He has to slow done to live. He returned home to work for a part of his firm and has reconnected with his sister. She has divorced her pedophile husband and learned to become more independent thinking. Both siblings have to visit the lawyer tomorrow to hear the will read. Owain expects nothing and his sister very littles, The church should get most. But, a surprise might be in store. Something was mentioned about what was left by their grandfather who their father said died broke. Did he? Did their grandfather's estate own land which is now used by the new businesses and therefore is very valuable. Will the siblings' life turn around? I guess we will find out soon.
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This chapter has answered many of my questions an left a few open. The Danvers family is one not to cross. Some minor worried/issues--Greg has a man madly in love with him and he is ignorant of him. Will this hurt his effectiveness by letting emotion get in the way? What will his dad advise when he learns of Greg's new role. His dad can help him center Brady. Greg understands he has no choice and he is willing to take on an enormous life changing task for some years. In the end his family will be better off even if he has a strong possibility of dying in a terrible way far away from London. "In exchange for the things I’ll do for my country, my family will have a good life. And that is all I ask in the wake of my impending death. I took the contract and signed it." Greg will start living a complex and deadly fantasy soon. I am very much looking forward to reading the next installment when you are ready. Thank you for what you have written so far.
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So mystical and disorienting. Why is this process so familiar? Is this a good or bad thing? So, is he now living in the past after the plunge ? Or is he living through a past experience in order to become what he will transition into afterwards? Will Teo survive as a separate being and true fraternity brother to Novotny? I hope the next chapter brings clarity.
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On the chart for New Year’s Day, 1972, Stevens debuted with “Morning Has Broken,” an attractive version of the Christian hymn published in 1931, with lyrics by English writer Eleanor Farjeon to the Scottish Gaelic tune “Bunessan.” The new rendition featured the elegant piano playing of Yes keyboard wizard Rick Wakeman, and after opening at No.36, took just three weeks to give Cat his first UK Top 10 single since that “Matthew and Son” success of fully five years earlier. Morning Has Broken Song by Cat Stevens Morning has broken like the first morning Blackbird has spoken like the first bird Praise for the singing, praise for the morning Praise for them springing fresh from the world Sweet the rains new fall, sunlit from Heaven Like the first dewfall on the first grass Praise for the sweetness of the wet garden Sprung in completeness where His feet pass Mine is the sunlight, mine is the morning Born of the one light, Eden saw play Praise with elation, praise every morning God's recreation of the new day Morning has broken like the first morning Blackbird has spoken like the first bird Praise for the singing, praise for the morning Praise for them springing fresh from the world
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Nice place-Prince Harry lives nearby California has many high-class homes, I bet
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The March of the Wretched, Part 3
akascrubber commented on Stephen Wormwood's story chapter in The March of the Wretched, Part 3
Ed is deep in the thick of the war. Even as he faces danger he thinks still of Fran and turns down a man bought to aid his night. Edith is merciless and has a code that leaves the c common folk safe while she takes revenge on nobles. Fran is faced with a choice. Send the troops he commands to aid the Duke and received the title and land he prizes or send his men to aid Edith and face supreme danger, What risk will he take? I do not think it is an easy choice. Will he decide to join Ed and Edith or the Duke? His choice is momentous. He is writing ,,,,a" single written missive that would forever alter the course of Morish History." We do not know his decision. Next chapter will take us of the cliff. I hope he joins Ed, -
https://www.allrecipes.com/recipe/244929/lemon-meringue-cheesecake/ Lemon meringue cheesecake
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Cheesecake lust Subliminal expression and power--mm For some reason, I feel a need to visit the Cheesecake Factory for a piece of lemon cheesecake
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200 hybrids in different locations and countries ?? The process could take weeks. It would be faster if the hybrids were flown into Sebastian's pack. But that plan may not be practical ?
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Thank you Asa and Caleb--They team worked and healed the two hybrids. It took 8 hours for the toughest, oldest hybrids to recover. Could Asa and Caleb heal two a day from now on with time off to recharge? I am sure they want to be careful and give each hybrid the best chance to transform. They can find out what makes sense as they take on new hybrids.
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Love this--the newly transformed guys are ready to be normal again “Screw dessert! Let’s go,” he said, ready to drag Elijah back to their suite if necessary. Having overheard the exchange, Austin smacked the back of his head. “Don’t be rude. Show a little restraint.” “Restraint, my ass,” he retorted. “Don’t tell me your wolf isn’t just as anxious to complete your mating as mine.”
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Roger died quietly in his sleep. A sad but graceful way to leave this earth. Armand was hit hard by the death of his long-time teacher. He grieved for a several days and weeks. Roger was placed in the mausoleum. An angel was painted on his door that connected all. Roger and Jean and Arnaud are together. Colin worried about Armand leaving him. The are still relatively young in their 60[s. They have time to live and be with those they love. They should be looking to deepen the quality of their lives and strengthening their relationships. GG will guide them.
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Mark stated his inspiration. I kept thinking it was a smaller version of Hearst Castle https://hearstcastle.org/
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I liked Max. He was good looking, successful and well balanced--mostly. He understood finally that Perry and Kyan were a perfect couple, He did not look back. But for some as of yet unexplained reason, Reid got his goat. Finding out about their past and potential future can be fascinating. You have fertile ground for a terrific story when you are ready.
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Wow--it is stunning. What a magnificent, enormous house with dramatic gardens. It would be true joy to tour.
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Only The Right Things
akascrubber commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Only The Right Things
From the highs of Matty's mom--who called him toots-validating his choice in Rusty and wanting to meet him--to the lows of Ray who accused Rusty of all sorts of bad deeds and pranks and depressed Rusty. One parent showed love and trust and the other completely hurt and misunderstood his son. Rusty can grow without his dad. He has Matty and good friends and supportive adults, Ray better wake up.- 34 comments
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kbois said 2 hours ago, Mrsgnomie said: But Aiden is old enough, but he doesn’t want much to do with the little kids. I think Maeve is the boss. She's gonna be the staff Sargeant No---she will be a Command Sargeant Major--the highest ranked SGT
