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Ed, a graduate student is sent away by his major professor and former lover, to help his former college roommate who is a Sherrif facing a series of animal killings by an unknown type of killer. Ed is upset at being discarded and sent to a dry, desert hell hole on what must be a minor problem not worthy of a serious investigation by a Ph D candidate from a topflight university What Ed learns is really happening should undermine his understanding of history, biology and reality. He is challenged in new ways, experiences sexual thrills, faces death and grows into a better person, Keep reading this with an open mind and you should enjoy the ride.
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Sol, Part Three of Three
akascrubber commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in Sol, Part Three of Three
I feel limited in how I can express my deep appreciation for this story. I have experienced the stress of the dry desert heat of SE Washington. It can drain a person. Ed went through much more than I expected and with luck survived and took on a much better, life affirming mission. Gods in ancient Greece mated with humans. Now Striker, the Sphinx, mated with Ed who stayed behind to try to distract the hunter from killing Striker. Ed was successful but almost was killed by the Hunter but for Gus showing up and firing his gun at the hunter. I suppose it was fitting that Gus fucked Ed who had been a classmate of sponsoring professor and former lover. He left thanking Gus for saving him and began his search for Stroker and other sphinxs -
Mickey and Isaiah have made promises to stay to Dimitri. They might be tested to keep they. The scary fact I learned was that Isaiah's father was the real Father. He seemed to procreate with many women and then did not bond or try to connect with his children.
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Antioch is not strongly defended. It has huge, irresistible lengthy walls but only 5000 men for its expansive area to defend.. Maybe expelling the Christian dwellers will give the crusaders information on the strength of the defenders and possibly weak points in the defense that could be best attacked by the crusaders. Ishan has been sent 30 miles away, He cannot be seen as getting credit for the defense by his brothers, Can we expect Rashid to have his brother killed. Ishan will know he will be a target for killing later. Ishan has as one of his missions is to see Wylan killed. How will he handle this? He does not want to kill him. Will he alert Wylan before a killer is attempting to kill him?
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Noah was released from the hospital. Shiloh is with him till he goes back to Pennsylvania Noah hopes to go to school with Shiloh and needs to figure out teleportation. That act will be hard to hide, I think Noah attended a car auction to buy a replacement for Uncle Brodie. Noah found a car almost like what Uncle Brody used to have. But for some reason when he took the car to Uncle Brody, he laughed seeing it, Why? Noah told he Grandma he has a temper and sometimes anger issues. She is going to ask the Elders for advice about Noah's anger problem.
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It could have been a disaster, The kids were considering eating Bill dressed as Santa and Rat dressed as an Elf. I thought his was going to be a Lord of the Flies episode and not a happy Christmas scene "Lord of the Flies is a classic 1954 novel by William Golding about a group of British schoolboys stranded on a deserted island who descend into savagery, exploring themes of human nature, civilization vs. savagery, and the loss of innocence"
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You did it--no excuses They freed the orphans--The future looks bright for them "Word is getting out. ‘The Prismatic Armada.’ People want to join. Mostly people with bad haircuts and authority issues.”
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You were drunk when writing this chaos filled story. Is this your excuse? They are going to cause havoc, default on their debts and begin a fight to save 500 orphans with little chance of succeeding. They are likely getting into more trouble than they know
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Like Joan of Arc who was burned on the stake for being a witch
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If Dimitri frees the gremlin, then he will be his responsibility. The gremlin will be Dimitri's "puppy"
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These two have to become passionate. I hope soon. They feel the pull. The longer they wait, the more awkward and unexpected at the wrong time and place and potentially embarrassing it will be, I bet.
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Want to build up your holiday cheer? Enjoy this story of adversity, hard times and the uniting love of two men who care each other and find ways to make things work out. Finn stiffed by his manager has to create a proper Christmas for his mate, Georgie. See how he soles his dilemma who you read this story. "Victories don’t come after magnificent battles, with knights and tribute. Real victories came from genuine love, effort, and connections. For Finn and Georgie, they’d won their battle, the war went on, but they were better facing stuff together. Just being each other’s person, one day at a time."
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David, the director, is a wise man. He advised Sky and Brant to be careful and not urn their feelings at some point into pain and hate. He used a past movie experience disaster to warn them. They tok his advice to heart. Brant promised to not hurt Sky. They will talk out and hard feelings or woory. They are going to be better prepared for their emotional rollercoaster ride now. Brant is going to get more awesome blowjobs, too.
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Sol, Part Two of Three
akascrubber commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in Sol, Part Two of Three
So, our hero found Striker, a sphinx. Asking riddles saved him and he was told the story of his existence. Now, it appears he is going to be fucked by Striker. Will he live afterwards or be eaten? -
Sol, Part One of Three
akascrubber commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in Sol, Part One of Three
Lots of interesting clues and maybe some red herrings.... I sense mercury is very meaningful -
They have 72 hours for the former owners to claim the ship and them they can leave owning it Can Hughie analyze what happened or maybe the gremlin can tell them what killed the ship's crew? I expect Mickey is going to find out soon he has a son which he must now take with him. Mickey will not be happy. Isaiah , as a former cult member, might easily bond with the young man.
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Old military saying--"If it moves, salute it; if it doesn't move, paint it!" The ship docked is stable and needs to be painted yellow to be really Mickey's ship. Like an alpha or ship's captain he is establishing his mark and territory
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Val was inspiring and won the day as she led her men across the bridge-- "I'm not going to tell you this is easy. It's not. I'm not going to tell you we'll all come back. We won't. But I am going to tell you that the men who hold that bridge will be remembered. By the King, by the army, by God himself. And I am going to tell you that I'll be right there with you, every step, every arrow, every blade."
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Amazing --Val led the men to take the bridge. It was vicious and brutal. Many others assisted. Juliam used a powerful crossbow and Wylan helped him target key people and sources. It was a full team endeavor. The bridge was taken and the King named Val Lord of the Iron Bridge ,'The eventually found Antioch and it was larger than anyone envisioned. Darien saw very tall thick walls and possibly 400 towers. They cannot tear the walls down. Wylan suggested they will have to starve the inhabitants out. Will it work? When will Wylan and Ishan meet?
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Travis realized he had ignored Will and they are in trouble Will told the family he is flying to Australia over the break...“I invited Austin to go with me, so if he manages to get his passport by then, I’m dragging him along,” he said, and looked at me apologetically. I was horrified. I had neglected him to the point where he’d almost written me off. I was going to lose him." Yes, Travis is losing Will by his behavior and neglect.
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There are too many good candidates for the killer or killers. Lawrence will be wise at this point to not make any premature decisions and let things flow organically. His final report could end positions being held and students charged and arrested. Or, Lawrence could be killed.
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Wylan was going to be in grave danger. He could be killed in the assault. The men are still weak and not up to top fighting shape from their harrowing mountain travels. Wylan..." was gone before Darien could respond, already moving toward the Iron Bridge, toward the army that was beginning to form for the assault." Will Ishan be looking out for him?
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Fenn's guilt was overwhelming. He had done so many wrong and deadly things. It took Ain several attempts to win him over and begin to expunge his guilt. Their love was too str.ong to be denied. "Ain put a finger over Fenn's lips, stopping him before he could go on a self-deprecating tangent. "I know. I know you're sorry. I am too. I hate that I ever let you go so easily, and I hate that I got jealous over nothing, which just pushed you away. Varilik manipulated me, too. It wasn't just you. And now we know better. And now we kill him."
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The English fleet beat the French fleet in hand to hand combat. All was lost. Louis did not get the money and other needed resources to continue his fight. Slowly his support wasted award. He was kept barricaded in London. Kaylen and Ronan and Tomas fought valiantly against the French at every opportunity. It was becoming more apparent that the war was ending soon. Louis will be leaving with nothing to show for his invasion.
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I fear they have opened a can of worms talking to the gremlin. Now how do they really adjust to him--it?
