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  1. akascrubber

    Chapter 24

    Thanks--One bad guy removed and broken seriously--The two Stokers won and crushed the evil guy. Now, how does this all get resolved and Hugo and Alec reunited and Thomas residing in a safe place?
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    Chapter 31

    Jimmy needs to be lucky or he would be dead....
  3. Darius should bring the FBI into his planning now. He could FBI muscle and guns as he seeks Josh and confronts Vinnie.
  4. Right--the code safe word was not used to bring on the FBI.
  5. With the right tech, Vinnie's men could use Ronnie's phone to listen into conversations or maybe Ronnie did have a bug. We do know Linda and Ronnie, Sr had listening bugs in their house. I expect bugs were placed where Vinnie's men thought they would help. Vinnie is removing any threats. The effort to save Josh and get evidence for the FBI has been a failure so far. Ralph was shot and killed and his office and evidence were burned up. Josh is still missing. This is now very depressing. Darius asked Nina--who luckily is still alive-about possible places Vinnie could hide Josh. She will research her records and get back to him. I cannot wait for the next chapter......
  6. Interesting start Their first meeting did not go well. Jack was incensed by how Theodore treated him and belittled him. Theodore was surprisingly turned on and upset by this puny human messenger. Jack was the messenger who transmitted a note to Theodore requesting he meet Ryder at the top of a building, Theodore rejected Jack's claim that he was a clairvoyant. Theodore is going and Jack promises Vince he is attending, also Their first interaction was not promising,
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    Chapter 31

    Drew knows--He expects Jimmy to break his heart but wants to be with him until the end. Jimmy sees himself moving on and teaching in Cambodia Jimmy for now is being cuddled and cared for during his recovery from his bat attack. I hope he does mention his inner talks with his doctor--at least to ease his worry.
  8. You are a very good writer who has earned strong praise from your fans. I realize you have a formidable task ahead just considering restarting "Encrypted." It is a complicated, but very compelling story. Please take things one step at a time so you can get into the tale at a rate that satisfies you. I hope you find your muse and are empowered to continuing writing. Good Luck Andy
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    Chapter 23

    Thomas was acting like himself playing his violin and he scared off agents with their fears and worries. I did not see him helping out Hugo faced off with Dottie knowing all that she did to him an Alec. She was cruel, heartless and a witch. She will not leave them alone. She has to be stopped Now! So, he shot her and ended her life. Dottie will no longer hurt them. Hugo took his watch back from her. Hooray! I think this outcome is necessary for peace ending cycles and a fulfilling marriage for Hugo and Alec
  10. Brad was denied. Lyn did not come to his rescue and Brad did not realize how much Lyn was being influenced by Alexander. The sex between Lyn and Alexander was awesome. For the first time Lyn had anal orgasms created by Alexander's finger dominating his ass. What a paradigm shift? Lyn learned being a bottom was sexually fulfilling and gave him a sore ass. I hope Alexander fucks him for real tonight--raw and unloads in him as Lyn said he wants. Will the full love making session with Lyn as a bottom change their relationship?
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    The Cylinder

    Jack is still in danger , but he has many watching out for him. If he lives, the future will be different for him. His wife wants a divorce. I say Jessica wants the child for herself--not Jack or the extended family One way to send chills through your fans--bring a scheming, outraged Elizabeth Dangerfield into the mix. The golden plate with 10 family reminded her of her enemies who have not been vanquished. It is not wise to poke the bear. I expect she will look to find a way to get revenge at a painful future time without her fingers being seen. Maybe she will have some one or more she trusts see if the key people she hates have some vulnerabilities to exploit. Stef knows she received the plate. The others do not know she has been reminded of them and are not anticipating any reaction or potential attack from Elizabeth Dangerfield.
  12. akascrubber

    Chapter 1

    So much extreme pain was inflicted on captured restrain heroes But, relief was on the way. The fairy prince captured Luke and tormented him until Thomas arrived and found a way to victory. The fairy prince was wrapped in vines and mercilessly tickled. He was tormented. Thomas and Traveler took Luke away to safety. The fairy prince promised revenge. Charles was captured by Ignatious and badly tickled and tortured. Charles was finally able to break through and read the sick mind of the disturbed Ignatious, Charles realized his tormentor need reform and relief and would ask Thomas to help him when they returned from the warehouse. What an ambitious, scary opening chapter....
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    Chapter 30

    OMG-What a horrible non-date that he paid for--and suffered through! But the night got even worse when he left the too expensive restaurant alone. Jimmy was so lucky to survive after being hit in the head and robbed on the street. He was disoriented, nauseous, hallucinating and bleeding. He moved ahead by instinct, threw up and finally found a safe place and friends as he walked. He was taken to a hospital due to his obvious injuries. You read in the papers of people being assaulted and nearby people ignore them and do not want to get involved. No "Good Samaritan" shows up to help save them or get them help or police. Jimmy was his own force of nature who willed himself to survive and find a safe place and good people he knew for assistance.
  14. akascrubber

    Chapter 18

    I am reminded of the devil as a youth in the stories by Michael Arram. He was also known as the destroyer who was extremely powerful who carried out punishment. Jonas was the name he was given. He was purposively very young and handsome and best related to other young males. You can find him in many of these stories--https://www.awesomedude.org/mike_arram/index.htm He begins in "The Golden Portifor"
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    A New World

    I am wondering if he is more like Jason Bourne who was unleashed after a major accident--a ship blew up in his mission. Well, he was told to go " Black " under and existing protocol. So, he is a clandestine asset for some part of the CIA. It will be fascinating to learn more of his story and find out the role he is now going to play.
  16. akascrubber

    Chapter 22

    Eight times? Poor, very sore Hugo when Alec collects... Henry, Alec, Hugo and Thomas are now present. Let's hope when they restart time and enter the Tides of Time that the horrible paradox can be resolved. Henry is ready. Alec and Hugo are now married in name. Will things be finally tied together and will we see Dottie is punished ?
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    Chapter 29

    Poor Jimmy--What an experience at the family brewery! Both he and Drew did what was expected of each other. Jimmy got drunk and the straight Drew got laid. ,'Jimmy owned it. Done his duty, and gone back into his recovery. And Drew had been exceptionally sweet, standing by him despite it all. Puppies don’t abandon you when you fall down." You created two images in my mind--A totally devoted puppy for Jimmy and Will as a power bottom--Wow
  18. akascrubber

    Chapter 29

    I totally love Corgi's and hey so did the Queen!
  19. akascrubber

    Chapter 21

    What to do? Sinjin figured out what must happen. After deliberation, Alec and Thomas agreed to move back to the mirrors and try to end the paradox. They could die if they did not succeed. Aliel, the guardian was observing and could step in to force order. Both Alec and Thomas joined their efforts and with determination and focus the created the necessary change. "The hub is stable," Aliel said, its voice a low, weary rumble. "The Paradox has been contained. The city is safe. Your friend can return." Now to find and rescue Hugo. What happens to this 14-year-old Thomas?
  20. akascrubber

    Chapter 15

    Now Joel's gay secret is known to Colt who was shocked and Davin who was encouraged and kissed him once. It turns out Davin is gay and in the closet. After some delay Joel admits to Davin he is gay but does not know what he wants. Both guys think it is messed up that his parents kicked him out for being gay . Both will keep his secret. Joel is very distressed. He is going to return to his new home and tell Celia, He still needs to reflect and decide what to say Will Davin and he ever become an item?
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    Encrypted

    I agree TL--but it is listed as on "Temporary Hold " at this time. So, we may have to wait a long time to read more chapters.
  22. akascrubber

    Chapter 17

    You have given us a powerful new explanation. Rezak did not know what was going to happen, but he relied on Cors as this trip progressed. He earlier thought as they pushed through the snow that he was going to have to kill the deteriorating, weakening Cors. Instead, because of the ritual he was taken over by Cors. Cors is now fully part of Rezak and must be guiding him.
  23. akascrubber

    Chapter 28

    It is very good to know you influenced him and helped him grow. You certainly earned his appreciation, and he was of such good character that he remained supportive of you. Thank you for giving us this longer perspective.
  24. akascrubber

    Chapter 28

    “So super shy straight sub-slave boy found a hero, and he imprinted like a puppy?” Wil remarked seeing immediately where this was going. Drew was a lost puppy and so endearing but still not a sexual playmate for Jimmy. Drew imprinted on Jimmy and would visit him every morning. Pixie girl continued to dominate and humiliate him until she went too far--for Jimmy. She had him strip to naked in a retail store in front of others and he was close to being arrested, A friend of Marty saved Drew Jimmy was so incensed. We know he really hated bully's and tormentors who crossed the line.. He picked up a cricket bat to at least threaten Pixie girl. He found her and threatened her. She was forced to leave since it was Drew's house. Drew and Jimmy now went on a date. It was to a brewery! Jimmy and alcohol do not mix. He loses control. What followed next? Jimmy is going to tell Will who is still just wearing just his boxers. He must enjoy stretching his story out. Jimmy has to be savoring the views and really admires his wry body. Too bad he did not sneak some camera or cell phone pics of just a boxer wearing Wil for his continuing sexual pleasure
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    Chapter 17

    "Wutei Maendrym Cors is dead and reborn," Rezak has become the reborn Cors, even colder and crueler. The ritual was completed to Rezak's surprise. He will gain the power he long sought.
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