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While Dylan is sitting under the tree singing Gloria Gaynor's I will survive!
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Interesting, Barett and Todd have totally opposite views of past! Baret remembers Todd as shy boy and Todd remembers Barett as homophobic. Could it be that closeted Barett has made some joke or comment once, something he doesn't even remember; but that hurt Todd?! Todd has talents in art and singing, it would be great if he becomes successful in things he likes!
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Sorry, MOUTH or MOUNT?! 🤔
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Seems that Carter is victim of Murphy's law! - Anything that could go wrong, went wrong. How did drinking with Jeremy went so wrong? Another enemy comming out of jail! Aunt...what's wrong with her, like nobody has right to make a mistake?!? Is she a saint...or, she is hidding something about Carter's past too?! -
And matchmaker as it seems! 😁
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Karaoke, ABBA, Dancing queen - sounds like @Summerabbacat's field! 😁 Great start!
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Asking Never Killed Anyone
Cane23 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Asking Never Killed Anyone
No boyfriend - seems so easy for Jamie but... 😉 -
Dexter has started with smaller tricks, real problems will occur when he decide to DELETE Carter! Aunt is here, there is question - Is behind her anger only dissapointment of Carter's choice of husband or there is something more? Is she going to tell something to Jeremy? Knowing his temper and how easy he jumps to conclusions - new drama is coming!
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This is the first time Dylan and Liam had, not quite decent but...normal conversation! I'm wondering, did anything Dylan says, Liam has understood?! He is repetaing I'm sorry but, it sounds more like ok, ok, lets move on... Dylan's lust for Liam is ok for that age. Maybe he should realy fuck him and go on. As for boyfriend, I don't see any boyfriend material for Dylan in this story yet. He should find someone out of that 'dark triangle'...or... Dylan should became Don himself and submit all those rich boys! 😉
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Mother at Norton Priory
Cane23 commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Mother at Norton Priory
There is something melanholic and charming yet so English 'patheticless' in your descriptions of travel down to memory lanes. Same here as in Keith and Tom's travel to hometown. Great chapter @Robert Hugill! -
“And we weren’t having sex,” Adam ‘helpfully’ supplied. “If that’s what you’re worried about. We already had that yesterday, and it was fine.” ADAM! Private! Adam is more similar to doc than I've been thinking. Only language is different. No wonder they clicked so well.
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You guys put on a great show for me tonight, it almost turned me straight.” Fantastic, just...fantastic!!! 🤣😂🤣 Ha, at one moment Jessica and Dylan sounded as best girlfriends gossiping the boys! JUST for a moment! 😂 Regarding the costs, I think that Dylan slovly learns that surviving in that hostile surrounding means using all sorts of weapon, tricks and not always fair-play. He'll stick to ethics when working in hospital.
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L: Babe, it's not how it looks like!!! D: (licking fingers) Babe, you want some?!
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This story is just typical @Lee Wilson, no way he could hide in SA competition with this one! It's a mystery story, there is a mistaken identity...or maybe not, cross dressing, trans gender...or maybe not. Finally, the right murderer is convicted...*duh*...or maybe not! I know, it' confusing but it's such a fun! It's never boring with Lee!
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Amazing! Better than all my speculations! Who's in charge now you mf?! 😈
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Maybe Dylan lures Liam to cross dressing and make photos?! 😜😂🤣
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As always @vanalas is slowly opening cards, on by one! We've found out, Dexter is not only Jeremy's best friend, as it was mentioned before. He is Ethan's brother and seems a rival too. That explains his constant presence in Jeremy's life. Dexter is very hostile toward Elena, does he feel she was more supportive of Ethan and Jeremy or he is just mean?!
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You've won! I would have defenetely stop reading that! 🤮
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Some stories give the answers, some rise the questions. This is one of those story that brings some profound questions of life. In a life long friendship, whith all ups and downs, remains dilemma of choices we make. What is the price of succes and what is the purpose of wealth if it is not shared with love of our life? What is a happy, fulfilled life? This great story will make you think about all above mentioned questions and, maybe, help you make the right choices in your own life.
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You'll find @Jason Rimbaud selling himself short by commenting that 'he is not so good author'! Well, this amazing and funny story says quite the opposite! Group of good friends is guether at traditional Christmass party organized by their friend Tim. The game they play will releive many secrets but those exposed are not going to be dissapointed. They will see the real support their group offer. It's good to know that this story is going to be a part of series as we are left wondering about the future of beloved characters.
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With disco music cover and original punishments for Liam!
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Boxer or briefs ? boxer briefs DOGS, but nothing against cats!
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Amazing story that made my brain work! Made me read and reread a few times, just to find all the associations and hidden messages! I've enjoyed finding elements of classics as Bulgakov, or some contemporary writers as Murakami and his fantasy worlds. On a jurney as Dorothy to Oz, or Alice in Wonderland, @astone2292 is taking us for a ride through delusions of hurted brain, letting us hope there is way out of Altopia.
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A true literary masterpiece, writing style that makes me feel - I want to write like that, but I don't know how. Every sentence is piece of art. There is no HEA in this story, but the sacrifce our pritagonists have made at the altar of art is worth of it. Pain and suffering in a service at beauty!
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