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I really don't know what can disgust me that much... Orgy with uncle Hank?!? Well' as long as Dylan save at least minimum of self respect, I'm open to all possibilities! Oh, and Dylan topping Liam would have bring the most satisfaction to readers! Am I asking too much?!

Going back to your tormentor all over again makes me sick too! It's some sort of toxic relationship and there is therapy and counseling to cure such behaviour! Unless Dylan thinks he has still enough organs to survive Liam's 'love'. After all...we can live with one kidney, can we?! 🤮 indeed!

So, instead asking Jake first, Dylan is going to go to the hause of the guy who hurt him so profundely, to find out the truth?!?! Why going to a snake's nest...he trusts Liam to be gentleman? Is he stupid or what...?!

@Mancunian first attempt in sci-fi genre is more than succesful! Like a connection between Tera and Earth, two races with same DNA but from different planets, two races on different technology level and diferent ecological awereness - this story conects two tales. The first one, a 'going home' story. Our hero, as Roobin of Loxey is comming to his estate to put everything in order. He's meeting a childhood friend, love bloosoms, bad guys defeted - end of a lovely tale. BUT it's not the end. It is the start of a new world, when our protagonists discover they belong to out of Earth race - Terans. Saving family estate transforms into saving the world. Amazing story might be the first one in series of Terans' adventures I'd like very much to read! Bravo @Mancunian!

Elias is predator - an evil and cruel man. The way he treated Carter is unforgivable. Anyway, I'm sure we'll see more of this bastard! “I don’t need your worries, Dexter. I need you to focus on yourself. These are the words Jeff should have said to Dexter a long time ago. Now is a too little too late. Dexter is too deep emotionally involved and as a hurt beast, he can make a lot of damage!

Oh my...this lady has been trying to confuse us and mislead us at this year SA contest but, 'unfortunately' for her, her unique style is so recognizable that even cats didn't help her! What a journey she brings and what characters! If you find similarity between her and some characters in her story, know it's 'not' deliberate! You'll enjoy this adventure, laugh with characters and cheer for love! Some of us will learn something of d/s relationship. At the end, whatever she may say, know that @kbois is real celebrity of GA!

Absolute hit of this year's SA contest! Author has set a stage at luxurious cruise ship and protagonists are two interesting couples. At the start, their relationships seem like doomed, you think the end of journey is going to be the end of relationships. But no, in a fun and romantic story, the couples find the love that was always there, but hidden in challenges of everyday life Great story from a great author. Enjoy!

"Beauty will save the world" F. M. Dostoievsky 'Idiot' After so many beautiful reviews by my GA friends, I was thinkig, what shell I say about this amzing story that is not already said? Human traffiking is very heavy topic but, in @Mikiesboy's almost poetic style, focus is on healing! Healing of broken souls and hearts, healing the scars of past. And how - with the support of our families and those who love us. @Mikiesboy is telling us that every human is capable of the best and the worst. He believes in second chances, and gives us hope! He believes in good in people! @Mikiesboy will not save the world as nobody will, but he is going to make it much better place with his literature!

Me too! 🙈

Absolutely! And not only betray, but such a horrible bullying, almost sadistic torture! Dylan shoud get amnezia to put all those yars of suffering behind!

Well, bring a new chapter to talk something about! 😜

I've given my contribution to the world population - enough from me! The rambling I had to listen all the way long I'd gladly change for all disco in the world! Boney M included!

My chauffeur/bodyguard is seventeen years old jock with disastrous temper! Before you make quick conclusion - angry boy is my son!

Two broken souls, two broken hearts! Jeremy sleeping in fetal position is so sad. It shows, more than words how much this big child needs comfort! I'm still wondering, has Elena noticed the resemblance?

Sorry darling, I've seen the Holland seaside, so, nope, this ginger is born for Mediteranian heat! 😉

Wrestling?! If she has seen them kissing, she would have said it's mouth-to-mouth CPR! Oh, she knows! So, they did it... Nice and worth of waiting!

Yes, I've googled route and places! 😁

Welcome back. I'll need some time to catch all connections. Anyway, seems that Dylan is surrounded by some very dangerous men! Yes. I mean, how else can you explain his wild mood swings? He’s friends with you, then he hates and tortures you, then he fucking loves you…” she explained, waving her hands in the air theatrically. “Men are so fucked up.” So very true!

Great story, very 'English' until sci-fi part. I've been convinced it was you until that. You've deceived me, one of the best masks in CA contest. And, oh boy, you are so good in this genre! Bravo! 👏

Yes, we know you actually LIKE cats!

Emotional, touchy...wonderful! Two moments in this chapter has brought tears to my eyes - one ferewell and one welcome! Nevertheless, it has been epilog that left me speechless. Selling island as metaphor that island is not where home is - home is where our beloved are!

That story you can send to any literary conest without hesitation! Remarkable work, I want to read everything you have written! * Guess who has got my vote! 😉

Bravo @BentedWreath & @chris191070. Absolutely deserved!

All's good! @Mikiesboy has written exceptional story, something really refreshing here at GA! As for some 'comments', you know the old saying - Dust rises behind a good horse!

This was I refering to: Popular Post kbois Posted Sunday at 06:07 AM @Jason Rimbaud and @Lee Wilson... if you want proof of who wrote Hide and Seek you'll need to look no further than @Mikiesboy next chapter of his story Sold Into Freedom that will drop Wednesday. In editing this I noticed that tim mentions a road trip. Hmmmm... might be foreshadowing seeing how the story has been written for a while.