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A unique take on were-creature, vampire and witch universe. From the start, characters and pacing draw the reader in and ensures audience remains engaged.
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Act III - No-one Mourns The Wicked
Vcs commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act III - No-one Mourns The Wicked
Such an exquisitely satisfying ending. So many possibilities lay ahead for Renato perhaps we might have an opportunity to hear of his future adventures? -
Henry beamed, now fully committed. “It’s all about preparation, son. You can’t just park a barge like that in a boathouse without dredging the channel first, if you catch my drift.” “Stretching!” Odetta Henry and Odetta are adorably hilarious! The lines they come up with remind me of conversations shared with a dear friend of mine.
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Personally, I'd love to see Timmy get a shot in. He's sure earned it! Yeah, I know the story has been written but one can dream. What, me evil? Bwahahaha
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Act II - When You’re Good to Mama
Vcs commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act II - When You’re Good to Mama
Oh my, what a lovely example of a loving, devoted mother - not! Great line though: “And you haven’t changed all that much, have you? I still remember you sucking your cute little thumbs. Now look at you. All grown up… sucking dick.” Well, they do belong to an interesting pack: "Breeding committee" “If you need volunteers—we’ll take shifts.” Now here's a line I could have happily used earlier this evening: “I am going to strangle you with your own spine.” -
Act I - The Music Of The Night
Vcs commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act I - The Music Of The Night
Pardon, the "perfect ending..."? Ugh, what a relief to see there are more chapters ahead! Am so wrapped up in this story I shudder to think of the comment that would be left now if this was the last page. LOL -
Curiouser and curiouser
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Loved the pacing and subtle suspense of the first chapter. As for the second, the humor is fantastic! Only problem was reading in the wee hours and trying not to laugh out loud waking others up. Loved the wolf's expressions and attempts to communicate with the sidenotes on messages he was attempting to provide the young man.
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There simply are no words, one simply must read! Obviously, by the comments, not only have readers appreciated the additional chapters but are hoping Jack Poignet will turn this into a full-length story. Wouldn't mind a backstory for the biker either.
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Well again, damn! This definitely needs to be turned into a full-length story.
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So much passion and feeling in such few words written beautifully.
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Lugh has a stunning and unique ability not often seen. This story is certainly worth a read.
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What a beautifully presented message.
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Sometimes the silence does in fact provide the loudest message. Well done!
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A unique and entertaining presentation of story and a first-time experience.
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Absolutely love the format and approach each chapter takes. Thank you for sharing the lessons.
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What a delightful little story! Thank you, that's exactly what I needed.
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What a delightful read, just what was needed in these wee hours. More please!
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Absolutely stunning and am so relieved tissues were close at hand.
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What a sweet, touching, heartfelt story of remembrance. It's been a weepy day here and somehow; I came across three lovely stories you've offered so eloquently. This one finally brought on the full tears waiting to be shed.
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Whew! One word came to mind after reading this story: Powerful. Personally, I'd offer a tissue warning.
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